[CHAMP MATCH]: Salamander (9-2) [vs] King (5-2) [Salamander WINS]
LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 14
Champ Match 16-20 lines
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Nignog couldn't even get my name right. Lol
CHECK!
word
The Last Level
Fuck it...
20
Taking this text belt? I can't say it'll end well..
'cuz when opportunity nOx, you get beat by that mediocre faggot in FL.
You act like you're good & elite, yet rap like you shouldn't compete.
You just don't blow me Away King
.. and you won't be doing that^ when I put you to sleep.
I wrote real in both fields, does hope heal your lack of skills dude?
'cuz you've never dropped a good OM.. aka Oatmeal, in fact he killed you.
Peep the name switch, I changed it for this match nig.
Just know that WITHOUT QUESTION your nameflips will be assking.
You've been waiting, I've been reigning & taking your world fast.
You've been itching to move up, but you do the same w/ your girl's crabs.
My fitted movement is hot. Who's stupid & bought you gear?
You should wear an average Joe Cap, considering the 2 wins that got you here.
You voted FOR me against Alpha, bash it & you're a massive fag.
I'd rob you too, but your only article of clothing is in a Maxim mag.
The belt stays w/ myself, k?.. as your health caves big.
It's pretty ironic how much ice you require w/ this L, Ay King?
I'm good & lean, without fat. You couldn't be about that.
You renamed your crew The Last Level so your scale wouldn't be an outcast.
W/ dead weight to lend, your stretched waist is spent.
Oh, so now you have a Buffer look? Go announce my next main event.
No extensions.
Originally Posted by Beyond
Salamander aka Beyond? aka Dominate? aka who the fuck cares
It's established, I'm a fucking CHAMP. To me this guys a beginner
Cuz Sally been confused with mad dudes, but never recognized as a winner
n I thought u left NC cuz its wack? I think u better explain now...
cuz its ironic that u keep running ur faggot mouth like u never got chased out
Plus u ride my dick every time u post, I could provide u quotes
He's a fan...n this Stanza bout to get broken down quicker than Haiku votes
No one wants a Sally/King match. Ur a bitch n I'm too flagrant
They wanna see an Alpha/King...n I aint talking bout the vicious one u gave em
n Dudes hailin from Cinci. 'nuff said, this loser can't expect to win.
Put this on ESPN, cuz the Kings leavin Ohio crushed like Lebron left again
Don't test the pen, ur too frail. Untold took him n then dude bailed
So Idk how u jumped in a champ match but u'll leave lookin like the 'chute failed
Bitch I'm a hustler, u wanna save ya ass go break the bank for cash
n Consider bailing outta this battle cuz I aint even finished n Sally mae collapse
I'm insane n tapped, True shit. I'll plain lose it before losin' to him..
Rip Salamander limb from limb, wait for em to grow back then do it again
I bet u were fittin to celebrate a win huh? Dont bet on it dude
Sallys putting that champagne back on ice so fast it could gold medal the luge
n His hos gettin it too. Whatever the job, she knows I'll handle it best
'S no d oubt'...I'll plow that bitch so fucking well I'll have Japan calling next
7x
The Last Level
Fuck it...
20
Taking this text belt? I can't say it'll end well..
'cuz when opportunity nOx, you get beat by that mediocre faggot in FL.
Doggin ur boy, lol good punch
You act like you're good & elite, yet rap like you shouldn't compete.
You just don't blow me Away King
.. and you won't be doing that^ when I put you to sleep.
Shiiit nice yo, like the wp
I wrote real in both fields, does hope heal your lack of skills dude?
'cuz you've never dropped a good OM.. aka Oatmeal, in fact he killed you.
Damn that's dope shit
Peep the name switch, I changed it for this match nig.
Just know that WITHOUT QUESTION your nameflips will be assking.
Lol , good shit again wp n all
You've been waiting, I've been reigning & taking your world fast.
You've been itching to move up, but you do the same w/ your girl's crabs.
Ok that's nice
My fitted movement is hot. Who's stupid & bought you gear?
You should wear an average Joe Cap, considering the 2 wins that got you here.
Wow that's creative n fuckin hard too
You voted FOR me against Alpha, bash it & you're a massive fag.
I'd rob you too, but your only article of clothing is in a Maxim mag.
Pretty good hit
The belt stays w/ myself, k?.. as your health caves big.
It's pretty ironic how much ice you require w/ this L, Ay King?
Damn that's good wp, dope shit man
I'm good & lean, without fat. You couldn't be about that.
You renamed your crew The Last Level so your scale wouldn't be an outcast.
Lol, shit idk this is sick duke
W/ dead weight to lend, your stretched waist is spent.
Oh, so now you have a Buffer look? Go announce my next main event.
Lol, that's raw man, good verse dawg...
Vs...
It's established, I'm a fucking CHAMP. To me this guys a beginner
Cuz Sally been confused with mad dudes, but never recognized as a winner
Ok kinda statement'ish
n I thought u left NC cuz its wack? I think u better explain now...
cuz its ironic that u keep running ur faggot mouth like u never got chased out
Lol, that's dope, nice hit
Plus u ride my dick every time u post, I could provide u quotes
He's a fan...n this Stanza bout to get broken down quicker than Haiku votes
Lol, dope again
No one wants a Sally/King match. Ur a bitch n I'm too flagrant
They wanna see an Alpha/King...n I aint talking bout the vicious one u gave em
Feeling that too,
n Dudes hailin from Cinci. 'nuff said, this loser can't expect to win.
Put this on ESPN, cuz the Kings leavin Ohio crushed like Lebron left again
Good shit yo
Don't test the pen, ur too frail. Untold took him n then dude bailed
So Idk how u jumped in a champ match but u'll leave lookin like the 'chute failed
Ok here, IMO, lacking something
Bitch I'm a hustler, u wanna save ya ass go break the bank for cash
n Consider bailing outta this battle cuz I aint even finished n Sally mae collapse
Lol, nice shit good hit
I'm insane n tapped, True shit. I'll plain lose it before losin' to him..
Rip Salamander limb from limb, wait for em to grow back then do it again
It's ok but not too good IMO
I bet u were fittin to celebrate a win huh? Dont bet on it dude
Sallys putting that champagne back on ice so fast it could gold medal the luge
Seen that befo but u did it nicely
n His hos gettin it too. Whatever the job, she knows I'll handle it best
'S no d oubt'...I'll plow that bitch so fucking well I'll have Japan calling next
Lol, goud hit...
Damn y'all got talent man.. First off good battle.. Sal consistent the whole way mad flips wp great scheme dope punches...
King nice scheme good punches some good wp too n flips, wow that sounds even huh? IMO I feel sal was creative as fuck wit his verse which led to 2 or three harder punches... Kings shit was dope as fuck too but just missed a few that gave it to sal. Pleasure to read these verses y'all... Great job to both...
Vote salamander
Taking this text belt? I can't say it'll end well..
'cuz when opportunity nOx, you get beat by that mediocre faggot in FL.
You act like you're good & elite, yet rap like you shouldn't compete.
You just don't blow me Away King
.. and you won't be doing that^ when I put you to sleep.
Peep the name switch, I changed it for this match nig.
Just know that WITHOUT QUESTION your nameflips will be assking.
W/ dead weight to lend, your stretched waist is spent.
Oh, so now you have a Buffer look? Go announce my next main event.
vs.
n I thought u left NC cuz its wack? I think u better explain now...
cuz its ironic that u keep running ur faggot mouth like u never got chased out
Plus u ride my dick every time u post, I could provide u quotes
He's a fan...n this Stanza bout to get broken down quicker than Haiku votes
Don't test the pen, ur too frail. Untold took him n then dude bailed
So Idk how u jumped in a champ match but u'll leave lookin like the 'chute failed
Bitch I'm a hustler, u wanna save ya ass go break the bank for cash
n Consider bailing outta this battle cuz I aint even finished n Sally mae collapse
Both had dope verses but one had a couple misses that gave the other the edge for me, Great battle, v/ Sal
D O 0 O 0 M
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MUSIC VIDEO^
You act like you're good & elite, yet rap like you shouldn't compete.
You just don't blow me Away King
.. and you won't be doing that^ when I put you to sleep.
I wrote real in both fields, does hope heal your lack of skills dude?
'cuz you've never dropped a good OM.. aka Oatmeal, in fact he killed you.
Peep the name switch, I changed it for this match nig.
Just know that WITHOUT QUESTION your nameflips will be assking.
My fitted movement is hot. Who's stupid & bought you gear?
You should wear an average Joe Cap, considering the 2 wins that got you here.
The belt stays w/ myself, k?.. as your health caves big.
It's pretty ironic how much ice you require w/ this L, Ay King?
W/ dead weight to lend, your stretched waist is spent.
Oh, so now you have a Buffer look? Go announce my next main event.
vs.
n I thought u left NC cuz its wack? I think u better explain now...
cuz its ironic that u keep running ur faggot mouth like u never got chased out
No one wants a Sally/King match. Ur a bitch n I'm too flagrant
They wanna see an Alpha/King...n I aint talking bout the vicious one u gave em
n Dudes hailin from Cinci. 'nuff said, this loser can't expect to win.
Put this on ESPN, cuz the Kings leavin Ohio crushed like Lebron left again
'm insane n tapped, True shit. I'll plain lose it before losin' to him..
Rip Salamander limb from limb, wait for em to grow back then do it again
I bet u were fittin to celebrate a win huh? Dont bet on it dude
Sallys putting that champagne back on ice so fast it could gold medal the luge
This battle was sick as fuck boys. You both had a ton of quotables, but I feel ridley's had more sting to them, and a little bit more complexity which made them have more of a wow factor. The L, Ay King? line was phenomenal because it had the hockey aspect and the aching aspect which both incorporated into the ice factor. Good battle guys but Ima have to go with ridley here felt his versepacked more heat in it and I had one more quotable as well.
v/ridley
Taking this text belt? I can't say it'll end well..
'cuz when opportunity nOx, you get beat by that mediocre faggot in FL.
You act like you're good & elite, yet rap like you shouldn't compete.
You just don't blow me Away King
.. and you won't be doing that^ when I put you to sleep.
My fitted movement is hot. Who's stupid & bought you gear?
You should wear an average Joe Cap, considering the 2 wins that got you here.
vs
n I thought u left NC cuz its wack? I think u better explain now...
cuz its ironic that u keep running ur faggot mouth like u never got chased out
I'm insane n tapped, True shit. I'll plain lose it before losin' to him..
Rip Salamander limb from limb, wait for em to grow back then do it again
Well, I felt that King had some good punches but his wording felt too choppy and some of his bars felt like they were a stretch to hit. Plus he was depending too much on the nameplays. Was digging the personals but they didn't seem to be much creativity on them other then plain statements. Salamander had some good punches but some of them seems like he was overthinking the bars a bit, he was more consistent and kept me interested and his nameplays were cool.. a little played out towards the middle with them but creative.
v/Salamaner
PS. I haven't peeped too many of kings or sals battles so I don't know what nameplays are played, I just know what I read now.
カミノコトバ
You act like you're good & elite, yet rap like you shouldn't compete.
You just don't blow me Away King
.. and you won't be doing that^ when I put you to sleep.
Peep the name switch, I changed it for this match nig.
Just know that WITHOUT QUESTION your nameflips will be assking.
W/ dead weight to lend, your stretched waist is spent.
Oh, so now you have a Buffer look? Go announce my next main event.
vs
I thought u left NC cuz its wack? I think u better explain now...
cuz its ironic that u keep running ur faggot mouth like u never got chased out
Don't test the pen, ur too frail. Untold took him n then dude bailed
So Idk how u jumped in a champ match but u'll leave lookin like the 'chute failed
This battle was nice, as i'd expect from two battles such as yourselves, I feel like you both bought some fire had a miss or two each but over 20 lines that's always likely. I was slightly feeling sala's verse slightly more than kings
v/sala
Sal
Taking this text belt? I can't say it'll end well..
'cuz when opportunity nOx, you get beat by that mediocre faggot in FL.
LoL Nice Nameplay good personal
You act like you're good & elite, yet rap like you shouldn't compete.
You just don't blow me Away King
.. and you won't be doing that^ when I put you to sleep.
Good concept but I still felt it could've hit a lil harder, a good punch nonetheless
I wrote real in both fields, does hope heal your lack of skills dude?
'cuz you've never dropped a good OM.. aka Oatmeal, in fact he killed you.
Nice personal here
Peep the name switch, I changed it for this match nig.
Just know that WITHOUT QUESTION your nameflips will be assking.
Meh felt forced good attempt tho
You've been waiting, I've been reigning & taking your world fast.
You've been itching to move up, but you do the same w/ your girl's crabs.
LoL nice
My fitted movement is hot. Who's stupid & bought you gear?
You should wear an average Joe Cap, considering the 2 wins that got you here.
I'ma give you points 4 this just cuz it was a slick payback from my Ridiculous/League sucks line from last week lol
You voted FOR me against Alpha, bash it & you're a massive fag.
I'd rob you too, but your only article of clothing is in a Maxim mag.
Naw wasn't feelin this one
The belt stays w/ myself, k?.. as your health caves big.
It's pretty ironic how much ice you require w/ this L, Ay King?
Nice play on the LA King, but I'd of thrown like Gretzky or Purp & Black someonewhere in there too. Good punch tho
I'm good & lean, without fat. You couldn't be about that.
You renamed your crew The Last Level so your scale wouldn't be an outcast.
Funny but fat jokes is pretty played against him
W/ dead weight to lend, your stretched waist is spent.
Oh, so now you have a Buffer look? Go announce my next main event.
LmaO Nice
King
It's established, I'm a fucking CHAMP. To me this guys a beginner
Cuz Sally been confused with mad dudes, but never recognized as a winner
Meh
n I thought u left NC cuz its wack? I think u better explain now...
cuz its ironic that u keep running ur faggot mouth like u never got chased out
Nice 1-2 Personal here, no concept needed
Plus u ride my dick every time u post, I could provide u quotes
He's a fan...n this Stanza bout to get broken down quicker than Haiku votes
Nice hit
No one wants a Sally/King match. Ur a bitch n I'm too flagrant
They wanna see an Alpha/King...n I aint talking bout the vicious one u gave em
LOL Dope
n Dudes hailin from Cinci. 'nuff said, this loser can't expect to win.
Put this on ESPN, cuz the Kings leavin Ohio crushed like Lebron left again
Good but felt it could've been worded better for more sting
Don't test the pen, ur too frail. Untold took him n then dude bailed
So Idk how u jumped in a champ match but u'll leave lookin like the 'chute failed
Setup was dope but fell off on the connect
Bitch I'm a hustler, u wanna save ya ass go break the bank for cash
n Consider bailing outta this battle cuz I aint even finished n Sally mae collapse
LoL Dope
I'm insane n tapped, True shit. I'll plain lose it before losin' to him..
Rip Salamander limb from limb, wait for em to grow back then do it again
LMaO that was funny
I bet u were fittin to celebrate a win huh? Dont bet on it dude
Sallys putting that champagne back on ice so fast it could gold medal the luge
Good wordplay here, but the punch was meh
n His hos gettin it too. Whatever the job, she knows I'll handle it best
'S no d oubt'...I'll plow that bitch so fucking well I'll have Japan calling next
Naw forced
Got it pretty much even as far as quotables go, but In the end I gotta give it to Geico, in this case his concepts actually gave him the Edge. King u dropped dope as usual but this verse was nowhere near as vicious as the one you dropped last week against JB. Dope battle nonetheless...good shit fellas
V-Geico aka Sal
Sal- opener was ok.. and the nameplay will be awaking punch was dope. Crabs line was tight and the L Ay King needed better wording, using his name messed up the effectiveness of the wordplay a bit.
Vs
King- good opener, alpha/king was strait, needed better wording, the chute failed wad dope I liked that. The gold medal the luge line was a cool concept, thought that was dope. Closer was ight not really all that. Strait conept though.
I thought this was a pretty good battle. Both had some good punches and personals. I enjoyed kings verse more though, he had more original punches Imo and more of em. Good battle though fellas.
V/King
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Sal
My fitted movement is hot. Who's stupid & bought you gear?
You should wear an average Joe Cap, considering the 2 wins that got you here.
I'm good & lean, without fat. You couldn't be about that.
You renamed your crew The Last Level so your scale wouldn't be an outcast.
W/ dead weight to lend, your stretched waist is spent.
Oh, so now you have a Buffer look? Go announce my next main event.
Only hits that stood out for me here thought some were played and just overall poorly worded.
King
Plus u ride my dick every time u post, I could provide u quotes
He's a fan...n this Stanza bout to get broken down quicker than Haiku votes
Don't test the pen, ur too frail. Untold took him n then dude bailed
So Idk how u jumped in a champ match but u'll leave lookin like the 'chute failed
Bitch I'm a hustler, u wanna save ya ass go break the bank for cash
n Consider bailing outta this battle cuz I aint even finished n Sally mae collapse
Well I felt biggest issue was wording on your part.
Well both even punch wise I felt King was a slight more creative here
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