first track recorded
[SC]http://soundcloud.com/4lphabe7/4lphabe7-poundcake[/SC]
http://soundcloud.com/4lphabe7/4lphabe7-poundcake
first track i've recorded.. will be dropping a lot more in the future with original beats. was mix'd/mastered by the homie Aziz Light
lemme know what ya think
Last edited by Pair-A-Dyce; February 21st, 2014 at 09:03 PM
Can you post a link to the actual track because for some reason I can't see embedded shit from my iphone
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
Sounds like pre-written verses you just laid over a beat, it doesn't match up. Flow is inconsistent.
i quite liked it in parts, seemed more near the end you was getting into it flow wise. you had a good array of words. but i wreckon your voice an flow would suite a rougher sounding track. this was a bit of a soft instrumental.
good job on your first recording tho, practice makes perfect haha.
keep it up
NO...
You're not riding the beat. Flow does not match this beat at all.
Props on trying though.
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i thought there were a couple cool cadence spots, a couple bars were def stretched too far, this is one of my fav beats so props for that too, nice work but keep working
You're way off beat it's kinda weird. This is what I imagine cage sounding like over a commercial beat haha... really awkward. I dunno. Your lyrics are dope and you can obviously spit but you did not do this beat justice.. It was like you were off the beat the whole time. Dunno.
ehhh idk man, i guess in some areas you did your thing. What bothered me is that it didnt blend well with how you were rapping, i mean this beat is dope for alot of reasons, and im not one to try and say something has to sound a specific way in order for it to be good, but if you are gonna spit some technical shit instead of some more lax type shit i'd try a different type of beat, its hard to explain but i feel like this would have sounded better on something else the flow was just off for me.
for what its worth the bars were okay.
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im also working on this beat. something about your flow is making me nuts -not in a good way, lyrics are good. but i feel like your trying to cram to much into one line or something. seems to me like you need to close your formulaic box a little bit and find the snair. something a good friend was just suggesting that i do not to long ago
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