Send me to my grave (funnyish)

[Citizen]

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Been away for a minute, due to an unexpected issue, but now im back, slowly getting back to business. this one has a little country ample on the beat with jut an open mic type flow to it, just kicking back since i couldnt sleep and writing..talking about my ex wife a little too

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not the best producer, but hey i just started...lol
and im not punchline rapper, i just like rapping

[Pair-A-Dyce]

I don't like this song but that doesn't matter, I think you have a lot of potential if you kinda just let go and rap like a free spirit, not try create something specific.

Maybe that will make sense? Anyways, I'm listening.

[Nahlidge]

This reminded me of Eminem quite a bit. Specially the way you came in lol. Beat is nice though. Verses aren't bad, I wanna hear "Citizen" though. Not you try to sound like Eminem, know what I mean.

[Ace the Prophet]

I'm with Nahlidge, lol...first thought was immediately sslp-mmlp eminem with the flow and delivery. I can't get it outta my head now, lol...This is you on the beat? I dig the hell outta it. That sample's nice. And you mention that in the second verse, haha...the mashups in the genres is filthy good IMO.

I'm pretty sure I remember other tracks you've done and I know you didn't sound like Em in those...maybe it's just this one, but that's honestly what I keep thinking the more I listen to this. Still dope.

Keep it up though, man! And get back at my FV contest video when it's up here in a second

[Citizen]

Yea it's me, my girl told me I sound like I'm holding my nose on it. But I did rip of slims style a little, just was in that mood and heard the track and decided that was my approach. I've tried out a lot of different styles and developing my own. But really I just kinda take what the beat gives me since I can't make beats myself yet. I'm cutting back on everything music wise. Cause my laptop screen broke and I'm hooking it up to my TV which is like reading on a fucking jumbotron lol. A little different. But learning all this production as I go tryna get something good for the Austin south by Southwest fest in texas this year

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[Flyest_M]

defo sounds like eminems style flow an voice, but I quite liked it, sounded like you was running outta breath a few times, but comes with time.

keep it up. will be listening out for your tracks

[Kdanger]

I like what you are doing! it does sound like EM tho, are you changing your voice to do that or is that you? I would be you and i feel like you could go somewhere man. nice flow and lyrics. keep up the good work. check me out

http://soundcloud.com/k-dangerous