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i did this song not to long ago..
1st n 2nd verse = miracle
3rd verse = tainted
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i did this song not to long ago..
1st n 2nd verse = miracle
3rd verse = tainted
This is pretty dope. Hook is cool. You shoulda tried to do a layer over it to blend that with some rap though. 2nd verse seemed just as good as the first. Tainted was cool. The track's not what I listen to normally, but it's a nice track. Could use some better mixing as well imo.
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thanks.. yea i agree tho, i should have added little more to it..just to make the lines come together more
Lol this is some pretty dope shit miracle, definitely down my dark alley.. you rode the beat well, the hook was probably the best part for me. that was balanced nicely, the first two verses seemed on point for the most.. wasn't really feeling tainted very much.. flow dipped in too many spots.
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did you do the hook yourself or did it come with the beat?
okay listening..
i like the beat, my kind of shit. The lyrics in the first verse were cool, at times you seemed to fall of in delivery. your timing was off in places, other than that, it was good. the hook was good, definitely want to know if you made it yourself or was it already placed. the second verse was cool, seemed a little less well written. 3rd verse was cool, but the mixing could've been better here though. i heard his doubles over the main layer. all and all, the hook was the best thing about the song, but it wasn't ass. it was pretty decent to me, keep going
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