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Beat is fire. Flow is on point. My only real complaint is the chorus. It's too long to just be saying the same thing over and over. It got to be too monotonous for me. Verses were sick as fuck, though.
Nice track man, love the beat. Dont like the chorus though. I still love you.
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I thought the chorus got a bit repetitious so I added some humming in the second half, but for the tone of the track, the chorus was not the focus with me so I left as is.
thanks though.
okay listening .. knowing the original song, i like the j cole hook better, but it's nothing wrong with yours. Just because i'm picky about people using instrumentals when the song so dope. the verses were dope, i fucks with those. lyrically you are on, you have cadence, mic presence, delivery, etc. everything necessary. nothing really to critique, i just wanted to give feedback
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