LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 11
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@Joeboston & @Ridiculous
Last edited by Amen; January 27th, 2014 at 03:38 PM
Joe Bawwwston Bitch lol! Gl Honor to battle You!
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@Rediculous 10 it's is gl fam
Ur bitch been fucking around on u really think she's gives a damn
When heads in the picture she jumps in faster then Mrs. Pham
He Loves getting slammed in the ass and doesn't mind to brag
So many men in Ridleys Believe It Or Not he won't deny he's a fag
Easily put ur body in the bag this shit to me ain't new
See the guns Loaded Lux out when u catch a Hollow like a featured pay per view
Your finished your through ill put an end to those lame gimmicks
Quit acting like ur Sochi cuz when I attack it won't be a plan for those Winter Olympics
Ur not even optimistic if u can merk me if it's all for blood besta be thirsty
All I need is one punch to leave ur ass shaking like a Beyonce controversy
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Keystyle!
This pussy's born to rap? Look, ignore the strap.
Anyone calling Jo king is just looking for a laugh.
Never pissed or vexed, he couldn't fix a threat if he tried to.
This bitch thinks an instigator is quick success in the bayou.
Even w/ troops riding, this dude's dying in chalk.
Kane & Lynch isn't a game, it's his crew trying to walk.
No reason to swap wives, he's dreamin' he got mine.
His bitch has stretch marks............................................. .................................................. and so does the screen when he drops lines.
Faggot, I bet you wish you more doper than amusing.
Your concepts ain't coo' Jo, they're older than the movie.
Ur bitch been fucking around on u really think she's gives a damn
When heads in the picture she jumps in faster then Mrs. Pham
Meh not a great opener1/2
He Loves getting slammed in the ass and doesn't mind to brag
So many men in Ridleys Believe It Or Not he won't deny he's a fag
ehh wordplay concept is there, I think it seemed a little forced coulda been worded better1/2
Easily put ur body in the bag this shit to me ain't new
See the guns Loaded Lux out when u catch a Hollow like a featured pay per view
Decent punch1.5/2
Your finished your through ill put an end to those lame gimmicks
Quit acting like ur Sochi cuz when I attack it won't be a plan for those Winter Olympics
ehh the wordplay not working for me I don't know what sochi or chi is other then the city, I'm assuming you're going for something here but google won't even enlighten me, not bad anyways1/2
Ur not even optimistic if u can merk me if it's all for blood besta be thirsty
All I need is one punch to leave ur ass shaking like a Beyonce controversy
Not a bad closer1.5/2
Joe you get a 6/10
This pussy's born to rap? Look, ignore the strap.
Anyone calling Jo king is just looking for a laugh.
Decent opener1.5/2
Never pissed or vexed, he couldn't fix a threat if he tried to.
This bitch thinks an instigator is quick success in the bayou.
Not great, not horrible1/2
Even w/ troops riding, this dude's dying in chalk.
Kane & Lynch isn't a game, it's his crew trying to walk.
Ohh damn, nice nice punch2/2
No reason to swap wives, he's dreamin' he got mine.
His bitch has stretch marks............................................. ...................................... and
so does the screen when he drops lines.
decent personal1.5/2
Faggot, I bet you wish you more doper than amusing.
Your concepts ain't coo' Jo, they're older than the movie.
Very decentcloser1.5/2
Rid you get a 7.5/10 Nice verse
Ive got Rid with the win here. Joe, you had a couple decent concepts but it came across a bit forced, I think it could have been worded better. Also you'll have to explain that sochi to me..
Rid, I always enjoy reading your shit. That kane and lynch line was fucking killllller. You seem to ggrasp these concepts with ease man kudos.
v/Rid
Ur bitch been fucking around on u really think she's gives a damn
When heads in the picture she jumps in faster then Mrs. Pham
Eh, not really feeling this.
He Loves getting slammed in the ass and doesn't mind to brag
So many men in Ridleys Believe It Or Not he won't deny he's a fag
Seemed forced, IMO. Ridleys? Doesn't really make sense if you were using that as a name flip/play on word.
Easily put ur body in the bag this shit to me ain't new
See the guns Loaded Lux out when u catch a Hollow like a featured pay per view
Statement'ish.
Your finished your through ill put an end to those lame gimmicks
Quit acting like ur Sochi cuz when I attack it won't be a plan for those Winter Olympics
Statement'ish.
Ur not even optimistic if u can merk me if it's all for blood besta be thirsty
All I need is one punch to leave ur ass shaking like a Beyonce controversy
Nah. Could have did without.
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This pussy's born to rap? Look, ignore the strap.
Anyone calling Jo king is just looking for a laugh.
Eh, cool jab at best.
Never pissed or vexed, he couldn't fix a threat if he tried to.
This bitch thinks an instigator is quick success in the bayou.
Ok'ish.
Even w/ troops riding, this dude's dying in chalk.
Kane & Lynch isn't a game, it's his crew trying to walk.
Eh, not really feeling this.
No reason to swap wives, he's dreamin' he got mine.
His bitch has stretch marks............................................. .................................................. and so does the screen when he drops lines.
Lol, personal, cool.
Faggot, I bet you wish you more doper than amusing.
Your concepts ain't coo' Jo, they're older than the movie.
Think you could have taken this in a different direction. Decent execution tho.
Overall: Rid takes this pretty easily, IMO. Joe struggled with his concepts, wording hurt him A LOT. Mostly every line came off statement'ish or forced, IMO. Looked pretty rushed. I'm sure Rid dropped just enough for the W, Cnnsidering it was a "Key". Concepts executed nicely. No real major impacts but enough to WIN.
V/Ridleys, LOL - Wtf...
Rid lees/ lee jeans lol
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Nah, still doesn't make sense. Should have flipped it/worded differently. You tried to do too much there, killed any impact the bar could have had.
Easily put ur body in the bag this shit to me ain't new
See the guns Loaded Lux out when u catch a Hollow like a featured pay per view
Your finished your through ill put an end to those lame gimmicks
Quit acting like ur Sochi cuz when I attack it won't be a plan for those Winter Olympics
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This bitch thinks an instigator is quick success in the bayou.
No reason to swap wives, he's dreamin' he got mine.
His bitch has stretch marks............................................. .................................................. and so does the screen when he drops lines.
Faggot, I bet you wish you more doper than amusing.
Your concepts ain't coo' Jo, they're older than the movie.
jo king was aight, everything from rid was pretty consistent and hitting, coo' jo could've have been fiaaaaa if you took another couple minutes to work on it.. jb had 2 pretty decent quotables but rid got this with consistency.
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Beyonce
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Stretch marks, coo jo
Joe had some attempts that could have been coo but the wording be fuck em up, rid just did enough 2 win
V/rid
Joe, the ridleys line was kinda funny, i think it missed the mark a little but cool concept, idk who Mrs. Pham is so that went over my head and the rest of your bars were kinda filler. Rid, i never thought i'd say this on THIS site, but i liked every single bar you had in this one, the flow was on point which is lost on most of these "texcees" and your punchline references were original and funny. i think the jo king could've been worded a bit better but i see where that could be tricky, good concept though. Instigator was dope wordplay, kane and lynch line was dope, very consistent verse. v/Ridiculous
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Good Job @Ridiculous get em Ridleys lmao
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ROFL
It's Ripley's damn it!
I know. That's why I was trying to explain how forced it was.
Your new alias = Ridley.
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