This is an old joint that my boy found on his computer and forwarded to me by email didn't even know about it lol. Think I did this back in 2010 not sure. Appreciate any feedback yall thanks. Hope yall Like it!!!
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Last edited by Lamb Chawhp; January 25th, 2014 at 08:24 AM
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For an old track its pretty decent although I must say my only gripe is who ever that other guy is he took alot of schemes and sorta flipped alot of method mans bars. From songs like Lethal Weapon and M.E.T.H.O.D Man. Oh and you don't sound like the boston version i was expecting i was expecting the TED version of an accent...
...that would've been awesome lol.
But I'm sure you have something more recent, 2010 is not really a good years to look for feed. Kinda backwards honestly lol. I wanna feed something current.
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
yeah I feel ya lol he kind of freestyled his verse in there. Its something he found because his pc crashed and he didn't even know he had it and sent it my way lol. thanks for the feed fam.
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This is like one of the best things I've heard from you lol. Definitely a cool vibe to this. I dig it man. This is actually pretty fresh. Old school kind of.
You definitely need to post more new shit if you're not already.
You got a fresh style. Just needa polish it up a little and you'll have something real dope yo. This is prolly the nicest I've heard you drop. You always got that aggression. Dope shit. Other dude was aight. I think you were better though.
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thanks man its just that I don't have up to par equipment n shit and I haven't been over my boys house in a while to do shit and hes got so experienced mixing wise and has better equipment now lol. I haven't wrote in awhile but fuck it gonna start up again thanks for all the positive comments
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thanks for the detailed feed on my song, bruh, here to return the favor. This was dope, i was vibing heavy. the beat selection was cool. You verse was dope and there were certainly bars to be quoted. Your partner had a grimy voice to him that fits perfect with the beat.
p.s. let's do a Boston collabo, bruh.
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What up Joe? Man, I definitely agree with TKC here that this is the best thing from you I've heard. Know it hasn't been a bunch but this is the one I vibe with the most. Your flow and delivery on this are nice...some nice punches in there. Laughed at the sponge bath line, lmao...your boy's chill too! Dig the switch up in the tones of your voices.
Good shit joe! Hope new shit that you drop is like this, bro! Really dig it. 1
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I think I listened to something else from you recently. The one thing I would say (keeping in mind this is old) is to work on your wordage. Sometimes your words are too verbose or too short and the consistency in your lines sounds choppy.
Overall this was an okay track, I can't say I'd listen to it over and over but it's not a bad track as far as quality.
this is okay, i think you need to work on your delivery and timing. sometimes you deliver the end too fast or the middle drags,. Like Dyce said, its because of your wording. Your syllable count needs to be corrected. i mean, this is old, so i can't really say what you sound like now. you probably have improved on those things since then. post something more recent
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haha ok playa.. shit sounds like '97 ...beats cool. mix needs help, flow on point most the way thru. lyrics were cool.. delivery can use a better presences.. i liked the hook.. 2nd dude was cool. good voice, thought his flow could have been slightly speedy'er.. not bad tho.. i feel like im listen to some '94 krs one shit lol.. cool drop
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