Lyrical Nuclear Bombin'

[Ztatus]

One track minded so focused my eyelids close
if I sneeze they may go up into my skull, and stick to my cerebral
lyrics flow out my throat like a waterfall goes
hits the bottom of the north pole, yes thats possible

Its simple, simply stated the inevitable of what creates a masterpiece that glows
out of control its becomes a piece of history
by the time these words hit saturn they will be floatin' through gravity
fall back to the earth and into your ear if your still hearing

Factually speaking im attracting every human being
letters mixed to create words is the best hearing aid
if you seen, youd understand it
the clocks never skip a tick but the flow is so erotic
that itll be a problem solver for that blood sucking insect

Injest the rest of this as your eardrums guide your intentions
when you control the listenin' of this rappin' intervention
start clappin' when you think you missed it
Cuz you didn't, you just created a passage way into the miss
I mean the mist of it,

I wasnt trying to lead you into the wrong interruption
dont underestimate the fact that its not a trap,
not bait but a non corrupt form of sense
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to make a better statement, Up to this date I delayed the meaning of the slaying of this paper with ink
next time I guess I better think before the rhyme wants to put the ink in a beat and
drink it till I cant think of anymore words to put in sync with the rest of it, guess it almost got the best of me

My confusion told me to interupt the illusion that these lyrics are bomb
in fact they were wrong they are pure nuclear weapons
when struck with a mix of rhyme and beat they burst geater than the sun even if your upclose in a spaceship






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[Nahlidge]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...039/index.html

There's a 2 link rule in place. Read ^that. I seen it's your first post though so I'm not gonna close this right away.

[Slave]

This as pretty dope, IMO it loses flow on some parts.
I think it has potential to be even better than it already is.

[Ztatus]

This as pretty dope, IMO it loses flow on some parts.
I think it has potential to be even better than it already is.

Thanks man, appreciate the feedback. I'm going to try and keep working on this piece. Tweak few things like the ending.. Kind of feel like its a bit "blunt" so to speak.

[Know-It-All]

No links? I closed PM me two feedback links and I'll reopen

@illuminate my bad, he had his links. I already talked to him through PM.