CHAMP MATCH: untold(5-2) vs allen knight(4-0) ALLEN KNIGHT WINS

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 9

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[Allen Knight]

wattup, goin 16

[Untold.]

Hey.

[Untold.]

yo.. i'm like 8 lines deep.

i'm tired. mind if i drop the rest tomorrow morning?

i think at this point were both late

[Allen Knight]

Yea that's cool wit me

[Untold.]

you n GoW arguin which sites more active or better is causin ya own plight
cuz it's ironic YOU made ^that Discussion more active then THAT Forum on ya home site!!
don't like RB, then get the fuck! kid ya nuts. heres some words to believe
u textin from site to site?? u've taken "back pack rapper" to only levels nerds could achieve
see me, i'm killin shit. the realest bitch! while you on that gay shit
only thing that Al Kilz.. is his bf's bedroom with a few coats of primer before he paints it
i got bullets n blades, when i pull it they spray. time to hide this square
cuz to me, its worth it to Holloway ya carcass to London cuz the cops won't find ya there
Al's like a Swallow.. i don't Seahawks when i picture this clown
cuz ur Lynch mob's more like u and a flock of groupie hoes beggin to put his dick in ya mouth
ya chicks a night walker! the hag gets bag'd when ur sleepin fam
that bitch has more 'late hits' than a quarter back.. n the balls RARELY leave her hands
no clue man, i'm a Wu fan n Johnny Blaze the best weedz
so it shouldn't Tical off when i compare him to Meth.. the fat, ugly, ginger on net-cees
seen a movie wit Joaquin Phoenix. y'all similar wit gettin chicks
cuz y'all both keep 'Her' close by ya side.. or any pocket that you cell phones fittin in

[Allen Knight]

untold mister sober life who robbed orc aka burden


ur d/r's helped u win the title, ur verse was ass cheeks
cuz the spot ridden now u should be for robbing the fuck out of him last week
ending this cry babies reign, that belt got me ready to slaughter heathens
shit after I take the title ima whip off more tear drops than a tony parker season
i stay running trains on ur mother, the bitch loves head shots
shit we gave 3:10's to yuma till she came back home wit a throbbing redbox
U beating Orc on nc was a fluke, this faggots been a liar
doesnt mean ur a stick up kid cuz u robbed B-more than all of Omar's jackings in the Wire
faggot ur just keepin my spot warm, im the champ ready to toss u clown
Unclaimed property that isnt his n its time for'em to put the belt back in the lost & found
Fuck ur sobriety faggot, my fist move victims
U'll be trashed from getting a binge of shots till it feels like the rooms spinning
always hittin on bitches outta ya league, u talk an they giving slaps
Cuz Total divas he wanted to fuck & they slammed'em like hes the defending womens champ
for a victory u pm an sway for votes, sober life ain't gonna win this, b
ironic if ur as clean as ur urine is, how come ur still the dirtiest muthafucka in this league


dont get a punch dont vote

[Bonkers]

don't like RB, then get the fuck! kid ya nuts. heres some words to believe
u textin from site to site?? u've taken "back pack rapper" to only levels nerds could achieve


ending this cry babies reign, that belt got me ready to slaughter heathens
shit after I take the title ima whip off more tear drops than a tony parker season



my fav lines from the battle
overall felt ak was just more consistent.
felt like some of tolds shit was on the played side
both had good verses tho ak just edged it out a little.


v-allen knight

[Know-It-All]

you n GoW arguin which sites more active or better is causin ya own plight
cuz it's ironic YOU made ^that Discussion more active then THAT Forum on ya home site!!

okay lol

don't like RB, then get the fuck! kid ya nuts. heres some words to believe
u textin from site to site?? u've taken "back pack rapper" to only levels nerds could achieve

ok

see me, i'm killin shit. the realest bitch! while you on that gay shit
only thing that Al Kilz.. is his bf's bedroom with a few coats of primer before he paints it

no

i got bullets n blades, when i pull it they spray. time to hide this square
cuz to me, its worth it to Holloway ya carcass to London cuz the cops won't find ya there

ok

Al's like a Swallow.. i don't Seahawks when i picture this clown
cuz ur Lynch mob's more like u and a flock of groupie hoes beggin to put his dick in ya mouth

no

ya chicks a night walker! the hag gets bag'd when ur sleepin fam
that bitch has more 'late hits' than a quarter back.. n the balls RARELY leave her hands

lol

no clue man, i'm a Wu fan n Johnny Blaze the best weedz
so it shouldn't Tical off when i compare him to Meth.. the fat, ugly, ginger on net-cees

no

seen a movie wit Joaquin Phoenix. y'all similar wit gettin chicks
cuz y'all both keep 'Her' close by ya side.. or any pocket that you cell phones fittin in

good closer.


VS


ur d/r's helped u win the title, ur verse was ass cheeks
cuz the spot ridden now u should be for robbing the fuck out of him last week

no

ending this cry babies reign, that belt got me ready to slaughter heathens
shit after I take the title ima whip off more tear drops than a tony parker season

ok

i stay running trains on ur mother, the bitch loves head shots
shit we gave 3:10's to yuma till she came back home wit a throbbing redbox

lmao good punch

U beating Orc on nc was a fluke, this faggots been a liar
doesnt mean ur a stick up kid cuz u robbed B-more than all of Omar's jackings in the Wire

ok

faggot ur just keepin my spot warm, im the champ ready to toss u clown
Unclaimed property that isnt his n its time for'em to put the belt back in the lost & found

ok

Fuck ur sobriety faggot, my fist move victims
U'll be trashed from getting a binge of shots till it feels like the rooms spinning

ok personal

always hittin on bitches outta ya league, u talk an they giving slaps
Cuz Total divas he wanted to fuck & they slammed'em like hes the defending womens champ

lol ok

for a victory u pm an sway for votes, sober life ain't gonna win this, b
ironic if ur as clean as ur urine is, how come ur still the dirtiest muthafucka in this league

good closer


Good punches from both, Untold has some good shots but his wording killed a few of the punches. Allen came alright too he had a few hard punches and shit but he had a few that wasn't great.


V/ AK for being more consistent.

[Capcom]

Ok battle but not champ match caliber IMO. Honsetly I think AK took this on consistency and harder hittin personals, although not great they served there purpose here. Untold your wording was lil off and a couple of bars were stretched, nothin close to the raw shit you dropped to get the belt.

V- AK

[Joe Boston]

Untold

you n GoW arguin which sites more active or better is causin ya own plight
cuz it's ironic YOU made ^that Discussion more active then THAT Forum on ya home site!!
ok flip on the personal I felt it could've been worded better though

don't like RB, then get the fuck! kid ya nuts. heres some words to believe
u textin from site to site?? u've taken "back pack rapper" to only levels nerds could achieve
ok flip again

see me, i'm killin shit. the realest bitch! while you on that gay shit
only thing that Al Kilz.. is his bf's bedroom with a few coats of primer before he paints it
the wordplay here little forced concept was a good idea tho

i got bullets n blades, when i pull it they spray. time to hide this square
cuz to me, its worth it to Holloway ya carcass to London cuz the cops won't find ya there
nice wordplay


Al's like a Swallow.. i don't Seahawks when i picture this clown
cuz ur Lynch mob's more like u and a flock of groupie hoes beggin to put his dick in ya mouth
wording off again

ya chicks a night walker! the hag gets bag'd when ur sleepin fam
that bitch has more 'late hits' than a quarter back.. n the balls RARELY leave her hands
lol ok flip good metaphorical comparison

no clue man, i'm a Wu fan n Johnny Blaze the best weedz
so it shouldn't Tical off when i compare him to Meth.. the fat, ugly, ginger on net-cees
wording off again but ok wordplay

seen a movie wit Joaquin Phoenix. y'all similar wit gettin chicks
cuz y'all both keep 'Her' close by ya side.. or any pocket that you cell phones fittin in
another good flip

Allen

ur d/r's helped u win the title, ur verse was ass cheeks
cuz the spot ridden now u should be for robbing the fuck out of him last week
this was ok for the personal attempt but it could've been worded better didn't hit hard for me

ending this cry babies reign, that belt got me ready to slaughter heathens
shit after I take the title ima whip off more tear drops than a tony parker season
ok nice metaphorical comparison here

i stay running trains on ur mother, the bitch loves head shots
shit we gave 3:10's to yuma till she came back home wit a throbbing redbox
lmao nice punch creative wordplay n reference

U beating Orc on nc was a fluke, this faggots been a liar
doesnt mean ur a stick up kid cuz u robbed B-more than all of Omar's jackings in the Wire
ok again creative wordplay and metaphrocal comparison along with the personal hit


faggot ur just keepin my spot warm, im the champ ready to toss u clown
Unclaimed property that isnt his n its time for'em to put the belt back in the lost & found
this was ok but little statementish to me


Fuck ur sobriety faggot, my fist move victims
U'll be trashed from getting a binge of shots till it feels like the rooms spinning
ok if this was a personal maybe could've been displayed wording wise

always hittin on bitches outta ya league, u talk an they giving slaps
Cuz Total divas he wanted to fuck & they slammed'em like hes the defending womens champ
lol on the finisher rhyme scheme on the setup though


for a victory u pm an sway for votes, sober life ain't gonna win this, b
ironic if ur as clean as ur urine is, how come ur still the dirtiest muthafucka in this league
lmao



well good battle here I felt Untold had a few good flips and some wordplay but also some wording issues. good personal opener. backflip was cool. that Holloway/London wordplay was fresh. late hits QB line was cool. Closer was ok. AL had some creative hits good wordplay couple personal shots.
Tony Parker line was cool. 310's to Yuma line was creative and humorous. The bmore wp and wire reference was nice. Diva line was cool and also good closer.

I felt AL had more creative material metsphorical references hit and also the few personals he had. Just overall more consistency in his punches.

V/Allen Knight

[Amen]

Alright, I reviewed this battle about 3 times. Every single time, I got Allen taking it. Reason, I feel Untold had a lot of misses in his verses. I think a lot of his concepts weren't executed the way they should have been. And I think if you compare the battle punch for punch, Allen got this with consistency. I feel he was more focused and dropped a verse good enough to win the match.

MVGT: Allen

[_Lyrics]

ya chicks a night walker! the hag gets bag'd when ur sleepin fam
that bitch has more 'late hits' than a quarter back.. n the balls RARELY leave her hands
Lol

Ehh this verse was iight I just gotta say your wording and long bars are ready not appealing to me. Couple decent hits put over it felt jumbled up for me. Again j don't remember when bars got this fucking long, pretty soon its going back to block paragraphs I swear..

Vs

i stay running trains on ur mother, the bitch loves head shots
shit we gave 3:10's to yuma till she came back home wit a throbbing redbox
Lol

Your verse also felt a little jumbled for me, particularly because I'm out of the loop of what's going on on different sites and such and I just wanna add its really gay to say if you don't get it don't vote, ohh lets restrict it to your dickriders..ugh go fuck yourself you don't get to decide who's smart enough to determine how dumb your lines are, fuck.. otherwise this was a little more direct than untold, I can tell. you should probably use some better creativity like the line I quoted, win

This battle was a little lopsided untold folded to me
V/ allen knight

[Lawd]

This should of been way better, untold came meh seen better from him but the concepts were off with thw wording like u just threw this one together the 3:10 was coo seen it before though allen came more consistent with tge punches n ultimately did enough 4 the win

V/ak

[Foul]

damn. gonna have to unfortunately agree with everyone else, untold....i was......dissapointed man. ive seen you come way harder, like last week vs ridiculous. this wasnt up to ur standard. ur shit wasnt very smooth and...it just wasnt up to what you can usually do. it happens, but if im being 100% honest, allen knight gets this....