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'Told is great? Stop it. Only a joke would pay homage.
I'm about to shatter his hopes faster than Tolkien say Hobbit.
My girl's tits are heavyweights & I don't hesitate much if perked.
The only bitch showing Un D's has streaks of yesterday's lunch in hers.
I'm spittin' effective written perfection. Your shit is in question, boy.
You winning is such a Pipe dream, Mario could jump in it for extra coins.
I won't be passing you any shine, just laughing through every line.
Even when you were Real competition, Spit was smashing you every time.
God I was shocked by your pics, b'cuz honestly dog you're a chick.
You may lack the tools of the Trayd, but you'll always come off as a bitch.
This geek is elite with the weakest defeats? Every season's a seesaw..
And any time you show Unreal Tournaments, he ends up needing a respawn.
I'm toe to toe with the dopest? No, he was supposed to own before.
Now he's like a failed soccer player... 10 years, 6000 posts and no awards.
My last battle was close, but Untold's not as mean as me or Kon.
So the only Split Decision he'll have is whether to leave the league or not.
Last edited by Salamander; January 10th, 2014 at 04:00 AM
sup?
as i try n start this, ya chicks eaten dick, i doubt ya she'll die from starving
next, i gotta get over this hump.. n that bitch's stomach requires a pic axe n climbing harness
champin 3 diff leagues? lmao! get a life! but i aint hatin this poser
i could careless where ya 'Rated R'.. cuz its obvious ur mindsets of a PG-13 rating or lower
i prevail when i write, ur the alias type. thought u could sneak past it?
how can Ridiculous be ur byname.. since it's associated with you being a complete faggot
Rid shows intense emotion wit the text he's postin. when i rip this fool, I'm gone
soft fuck, that talks tuff.. now cats can see i easily torrid in half while remainin cool n calm
Project Mayhem? gayyy.. guess this is what happens when we let u prosper
i was hopin to Switch it up this week.. instead i face the homo above him on the crew roster
when I'm pumpin n sqeezin, Rid'll choke cuz his lungs'll be bleedin
funny how no chick would bedrid, yet he'll be confined to his once I'm done wit this beatin
my dick is better at makin women wetter. that vag seems to flood
while u never make bitches DampRid.. cuz their pussies dry up the second they see ur mug!
as i bring the flames, i'll heat this lame. Rid won't know how to handle this shit
fans'll be like "Awe, Burn!" worse than what FSU did to them in the BCS championship
Opener, un d's, pipe dreams, real comp, unreal tournament, soccer player
Vs.
Opener, rated r, byname, damprid, switch it up
Thi was a good ass battle both came with something both had multiple lls had 2 read this more than once but imo rid edged it slitly with 1 more quote again good battle could go either way, real close
V/rid
Vote/ Rid
I'd say the concepts and personals were about even, but Ridiculous is written more smoother and executed with precision. Untold was pretty good in his set ups and I enjoyed the personal angle for what it was worth, but I felt a few of the lines went on longer than it should, dwindling the impact. Ridiculous had substance, without having to sacrifice lengthiness for it. His structure was clean, and it allowed his punches to hit that much harder. The Mario line would be the quote of the entire battle, with the Soccer line getting honorary mention. Good job, you two.
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'Told is great? Stop it. Only a joke would pay homage.
I'm about to shatter his hopes faster than Tolkien say Hobbit.
Don't like.
My girl's tits are heavyweights & I don't hesitate much if perked.
The only bitch showing Un D's has streaks of yesterday's lunch in hers.
Haha - Weird visual? Lol
I'm spittin' effective written perfection. Your shit is in question, boy.
You winning is such a Pipe dream, Mario could jump in it for extra coins.
Not bad.
I won't be passing you any shine, just laughing through every line.
Even when you were Real competition, Spit was smashing you every time.
Nice personal. Short, direct and to the point.
God I was shocked by your pics, b'cuz honestly dog you're a chick.
You may lack the tools of the Trayd, but you'll always come off as a bitch.
Nah...
This geek is elite with the weakest defeats? Every season's a seesaw..
And any time you show Unreal Tournaments, he ends up needing a respawn.
Ehhh, wording was off to me. Came off kind of statement'ish, IMO.
I'm toe to toe with the dopest? No, he was supposed to own before.
Now he's like a failed soccer player... 10 years, 6000 posts and no awards.
Eh... I think you could have went in a different direction, but ok.
My last battle was close, but Untold's not as mean as me or Kon.
So the only Split Decision he'll have is whether to leave the league or not.
Nah... Weak/Basic with hardly any impact, IMO.
vs
as i try n start this, ya chicks eaten dick, i doubt ya she'll die from starving
next, i gotta get over this hump.. n that bitch's stomach requires a pic axe n climbing harness
Could have been worded better for more of a smoother transition from set-up to punch. But, I kind of liked it.
champin 3 diff leagues? lmao! get a life! but i aint hatin this poser
i could careless where ya 'Rated R'.. cuz its obvious ur mindsets of a PG-13 rating or lower
Ok'ish.
i prevail when i write, ur the alias type. thought u could sneak past it?
how can Ridiculous be ur byname.. since it's associated with you being a complete faggot
Not bad, wording could have been a little better.
Rid shows intense emotion wit the text he's postin. when i rip this fool, I'm gone
soft fuck, that talks tuff.. now cats can see i easily torrid in half while remainin cool n calm
Came off statement'ish. Could have worked with or used the play on word differently.
Project Mayhem? gayyy.. guess this is what happens when we let u prosper
i was hopin to Switch it up this week.. instead i face the homo above him on the crew roster
Eh...
when I'm pumpin n sqeezin, Rid'll choke cuz his lungs'll be bleedin
funny how no chick would bedrid, yet he'll be confined to his once I'm done wit this beatin
Seemed a little forced, IMO. NO chick would bedrid? I liked how you executed the punch but the hype before the execution just made no sense to me, IMO.
my dick is better at makin women wetter. that vag seems to flood
while u never make bitches DampRid.. cuz their pussies dry up the second they see ur mug!
Ok.
as i bring the flames, i'll heat this lame. Rid won't know how to handle this shit
fans'll be like "Awe, Burn!" worse than what FSU did to them in the BCS championship
Eh...
Overall, pretty close battle IMO. If I were to calculate Punch, Jab, Miss from both writers. Both had some decent concepts, Untold struggled to execute on a couple as where Rid did a pretty decent job executing on his. Both verses flowed nicely. Rid was pretty consistent were Untold was up and down. Had a nice concept, executed nicely, then followed up with a concept that was either basic or failed to execute on it. So I'd have to say, Rid takes this, IMO. Definitely can go either way tho, I guess it's all on personal preference.
Vote: Ridic
I won't be passing you any shine, just laughing through every line.
Even when you were Real competition, Spit was smashing you every time.
God I was shocked by your pics, b'cuz honestly dog you're a chick.
You may lack the tools of the Trayd, but you'll always come off as a bitch.
I'm toe to toe with the dopest? No, he was supposed to own before.
Now he's like a failed soccer player... 10 years, 6000 posts and no awards.
vs
as i try n start this, ya chicks eaten dick, i doubt ya she'll die from starving
next, i gotta get over this hump.. n that bitch's stomach requires a pic axe n climbing harness
champin 3 diff leagues? lmao! get a life! but i aint hatin this poser
i could careless where ya 'Rated R'.. cuz its obvious ur mindsets of a PG-13 rating or lower
i prevail when i write, ur the alias type. thought u could sneak past it?
how can Ridiculous be ur byname.. since it's associated with you being a complete faggot
Untold was more creative/less bland. Untold wins
dope match fellas. i think both yall did your thing. goin line for line so hopefully theres no fuss about this vote... if you got a prob with something in my vote just let me know and i will clarify
'Told is great? Stop it. Only a joke would pay homage.
I'm about to shatter his hopes faster than Tolkien say Hobbit.
decent opener, digged the concept
My girl's tits are heavyweights & I don't hesitate much if perked.
The only bitch showing Un D's has streaks of yesterday's lunch in hers.
lol
I'm spittin' effective written perfection. Your shit is in question, boy.
You winning is such a Pipe dream, Mario could jump in it for extra coins.
dope....creative bar here dude
I won't be passing you any shine, just laughing through every line.
Even when you were Real competition, Spit was smashing you every time.
your weakest bar so far but it wasnt weak...just wasnt as creative as the others but another hit
God I was shocked by your pics, b'cuz honestly dog you're a chick.
You may lack the tools of the Trayd, but you'll always come off as a bitch.
lmao
This geek is elite with the weakest defeats? Every season's a seesaw..
And any time you show Unreal Tournaments, he ends up needing a respawn.
diggin this line dope reference nice flow too
I'm toe to toe with the dopest? No, he was supposed to own before.
Now he's like a failed soccer player... 10 years, 6000 posts and no awards.
cool line
My last battle was close, but Untold's not as mean as me or Kon.
So the only Split Decision he'll have is whether to leave the league or not.
could of closed a bit harder than this but ok closer
dope verse....really consistent flow, your transitions were very smooth and just an overall impressive verse tbfh
V.
as i try n start this, ya chicks eaten dick, i doubt ya she'll die from starving
next, i gotta get over this hump.. n that bitch's stomach requires a pic axe n climbing harness
lol decent opener
champin 3 diff leagues? lmao! get a life! but i aint hatin this poser
i could careless where ya 'Rated R'.. cuz its obvious ur mindsets of a PG-13 rating or lower
keepin it goin another dcent line imo
i prevail when i write, ur the alias type. thought u could sneak past it?
how can Ridiculous be ur byname.. since it's associated with you being a complete faggot
made me lul
Rid shows intense emotion wit the text he's postin. when i rip this fool, I'm gone
soft fuck, that talks tuff.. now cats can see i easily torrid in half while remainin cool n calm
ok felt like you couldve done a bit more here but cool
Project Mayhem? gayyy.. guess this is what happens when we let u prosper
i was hopin to Switch it up this week.. instead i face the homo above him on the crew roster
felt a bit statemtish if im being damn honest with myself
when I'm pumpin n sqeezin, Rid'll choke cuz his lungs'll be bleedin
funny how no chick would bedrid, yet he'll be confined to his once I'm done wit this beatin
dope flow here fuckin feelin this line right here
my dick is better at makin women wetter. that vag seems to flood
while u never make bitches DampRid.. cuz their pussies dry up the second they see ur mug!
lol felt a bit off but ok
as i bring the flames, i'll heat this lame. Rid won't know how to handle this shit
fans'll be like "Awe, Burn!" worse than what FSU did to them in the BCS championship
cool
untold you had a cool verse. i felt you had not really what you would call misses per say..but at times you were a bit wordy...i read both aboout 3 times each while making a decision, had it about a tie....then i turned on pandora...i figured it would come down to the flow cuz it was even in punches/creativity but ridiculous flow was on point throughout. thats what got him the battle for me.... everything else was close as fuck. dope battle yall no hate here!
V/ ridiculous
but good shit untold!
"Chrome 4 5 singin cuz they still snitchin
Pools in da livin room, swim to the kitchen"
I won't be passing you any shine, just laughing through every line.
Even when you were Real competition, Spit was smashing you every time.
God I was shocked by your pics, b'cuz honestly dog you're a chick.
You may lack the tools of the Trayd, but you'll always come off as a bitch.
This geek is elite with the weakest defeats? Every season's a seesaw..
And any time you show Unreal Tournaments, he ends up needing a respawn.
vs
i prevail when i write, ur the alias type. thought u could sneak past it?
how can Ridiculous be ur byname.. since it's associated with you being a complete faggot
Rid shows intense emotion wit the text he's postin. when i rip this fool, I'm gone
soft fuck, that talks tuff.. now cats can see i easily torrid in half while remainin cool n calm
(if u got the last line then you'd vote for untold)
Rid was tuff but untold outshined him with his creative formulas
/v untold
Badass.
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I'm spittin' effective written perfection. Your shit is in question, boy.
You winning is such a Pipe dream, Mario could jump in it for extra coins.
This geek is elite with the weakest defeats? Every season's a seesaw..
And any time you show Unreal Tournaments, he ends up needing a respawn.
My last battle was close, but Untold's not as mean as me or Kon.
So the only Split Decision he'll have is whether to leave the league or not.
as i try n start this, ya chicks eaten dick, i doubt ya she'll die from starving
next, i gotta get over this hump.. n that bitch's stomach requires a pic axe n climbing harness
when I'm pumpin n sqeezin, Rid'll choke cuz his lungs'll be bleedin
funny how no chick would bedrid, yet he'll be confined to his once I'm done wit this beatin
as i bring the flames, i'll heat this lame. Rid won't know how to handle this shit
fans'll be like "Awe, Burn!" worse than what FSU did to them in the BCS championship
cool battle, even in quotes but i liked the lines i didnt quote from untold more than ridiculous. just preference at this point. props
v/untold
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Originally Posted by Clout
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v. rid for not posting a day late
I don't normally do this but Kraven's vote don't count
This fool always hate votes against me. Go peep last weeks vote
You winning is such a Pipe dream, Mario could jump in it for extra coins.
I won't be passing you any shine, just laughing through every line.
Even when you were Real competition, Spit was smashing you every time.
This geek is elite with the weakest defeats? Every season's a seesaw..
And any time you show Unreal Tournaments, he ends up needing a respawn.
I'm toe to toe with the dopest? No, he was supposed to own before.
Now he's like a failed soccer player... 10 years, 6000 posts and no awards.
vs
Rid shows intense emotion wit the text he's postin. when i rip this fool, I'm gone
soft fuck, that talks tuff.. now cats can see i easily torrid in half while remainin cool n calm
Project Mayhem? gayyy.. guess this is what happens when we let u prosper
i was hopin to Switch it up this week.. instead i face the homo above him on the crew roster
when I'm pumpin n sqeezin, Rid'll choke cuz his lungs'll be bleedin
funny how no chick would bedrid, yet he'll be confined to his once I'm done wit this beatin
my dick is better at makin women wetter. that vag seems to flood
while u never make bitches DampRid.. cuz their pussies dry up the second they see ur mug!
as i bring the flames, i'll heat this lame. Rid won't know how to handle this shit
fans'll be like "Awe, Burn!" worse than what FSU did to them in the BCS championship
Rid was original and boring, had a few cool bars
Untold had some consistent creative bars, except 2 in his beginning
Vote: Untold
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