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Thread: morning keystyle..feed appr.

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    Smile morning keystyle..feed appr.

    Just woke up 10 min keystyle
    Feed is apreciated/ remember this is
    10min key so feed on that
    First post..

    Minds always flowin like water/
    Raised myself-no mothr or father//
    Prayed for a girl-
    God blessed me with 2 sons-no daughter/
    No-job-no-money-25-no-notta!/
    Still heart as gold-need help..I gotch ya//
    Bailey be einstein-mathmatecian
    Problem-solva/
    Learned wisdom from the streats/
    How to take words an mix em wita beat//
    Like my women-i know I have rythm in the sheets/
    A viciouse lyrical beast/
    Made a lot of mistakes-fell on my face/
    Learned at a young age-
    Pick myselfe up-and get on in a rage//
    Big time sinna/
    pussie for breakfest-lunch-an dinna/
    New beginna/
    Always get shit for being white/
    More or less for being so nice/
    Banged my ex-yesterday-twice/
    Big mistake-now I have feelings come back/
    Need an out-a nice pussie to get back on track/


    P.s (-) are pauses either brief or slow

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    Re: morning keystyle..feed appr.

    Eh, certainly a modest effort. You have stuff to talk about. OK writing/wording through out. The subject isn't half bad. Something that'd be more appreciated in audio. Decent structure. Alright wording and material overall. Keep elevating...



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    Re: morning keystyle..feed appr.

    thanks my man!
    And ya everyone says I'm better on audio
    That's why I'm tryin to get into good writing

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    Re: morning keystyle..feed appr.

    you suck

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