LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 6
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FoulMonoply -
He's hyped because King didnt show?! Ill chin check this princess..
We wouldnt consider Mono cool...if we had one eye and needed corrective lenses!
This whack kid? He blows and sucks more than a fag who deep throats...
So its no surprise that all Foul shots missed like Shaq with freethrows.
If he says he's packing? Disreguard what this fool said.
If 'Ply would hold up that ratchet...Its the walls of a tool shed.
Im A+ calibre...So why's this clown in a bout with me?
It just doesn't make sense..guess that's why we consider fallacy.
Ill go ahead and stop beating this geek and close...
P.S. Didnt I just beat you two weeks ago?
stare into these devilish eyes, and realize your irrelevelent guy
Cuz Even after droppin acid...we wouldn't see that PH level is high
Ur such a faggot your moms embarassed ur one of her sons
the only person he made say holy shit was her, when she caught him fapping to 100 nuns
So i can't understand why this dyslexic guy stepped in line to get torchured a second time
with his infected mind thinkin "whys this guys penis extra wide next to mine"
only queers talk about past battles, you proved my theory accurate
his mom told me bout his needle dick, so when he says "you'll get the point' most likely a faggots in back of it
He won't be breathin cuz i murder shit, after i choke him, he'll be bleedin from a tourniquet
watch me Leave P stored in the freezer But i ain't cheating on a urine test
Decent match up.
Both should a good array of lines, concepts and execution in punches. What it really came down to me was with the rhyme scheme. Here, I felt Foul came a little more sharper with his. PH's closer sort of dropped off, and I wasn't really feeling the Mono cool line, it was a bit forced. The line that stood out to me though was the fallacy line. On Foul's end it'd be his opener. Overall, Foul was packing more sting to me and earns my vote.
Vote - FoulMonopoly
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CypherAlumni
Vincent | Sammy | Vallus | Dose Blotter | Onceawhile | Virbius | Bag Mandela | Celph Taut
Was gonna give it to FM but he fed off PH's verse which is a big no no bruh. Both of ya'll had mediocre verses but like CP said the Fallecy bar was like the only stand out really, the PH lvl concept has been done be4 so it wasn't really new to me
V-Phalanx
If he says he's packing? Disreguard what this fool said.
If 'Ply would hold up that ratchet...Its the walls of a tool shed.
vs
stare into these devilish eyes, and realize your irrelevelent guy
Cuz Even after droppin acid...we wouldn't see that PH level is high
He won't be breathin cuz i murder shit, after i choke him, he'll be bleedin from a tourniquet
watch me Leave P stored in the freezer But i ain't cheating on a urine test
vote-foul....but u fed. so Iunno
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
stare into these devilish eyes, and realize your irrelevelent guy
Cuz Even after droppin acid...we wouldn't see that PH level is high
He won't be breathin cuz i murder shit, after i choke him, he'll be bleedin from a tourniquet
watch me Leave P stored in the freezer But i ain't cheating on a urine test
vs
He's hyped because King didnt show?! Ill chin check this princess..
We wouldnt consider Mono cool...if we had one eye and needed corrective lenses!
This whack kid? He blows and sucks more than a fag who deep throats...
So its no surprise that all Foul shots missed like Shaq with freethrows.
If he says he's packing? Disreguard what this fool said.
If 'Ply would hold up that ratchet...Its the walls of a tool shed.
aight this was actually a dope battle, i thought foul lost but its cuz he had 2 bars i ahted while phalanx also had wo i thought the tool shed line was boss. and was lotb easily ...glad both c ats is int he league this was nicer then i thought it would be
v/phalanx
Tool shed, free throws
Vs.
Ph level
Coo battle feel that ph tool shed line took it even though foul feed
V/ph
This whack kid? He blows and sucks more than a fag who deep throats...
So its no surprise that all Foul shots missed like Shaq with freethrows.
If he says he's packing? Disreguard what this fool said.
If 'Ply would hold up that ratchet...Its the walls of a tool shed.
Vs
stare into these devilish eyes, and realize your irrelevelent guy
Cuz Even after droppin acid...we wouldn't see that PH level is high
He won't be breathin cuz i murder shit, after i choke him, he'll be bleedin from a tourniquet
watch me Leave P stored in the freezer But i ain't cheating on a urine test
Alright I thought this battle was ok.. Even on quotables but phal was defo stronger overall. Foul had some stretched lines and weak punches other than his quotable whereas the rest of phals verse didn't miss as much as fouls.
V.phal
He's hyped because King didnt show?! Ill chin check this princess..
We wouldnt consider Mono cool...if we had one eye and needed corrective lenses!
thought this coulda hit harder but liked the idea
This whack kid? He blows and sucks more than a fag who deep throats...
So its no surprise that all Foul shots missed like Shaq with freethrows.
lmao cool
If he says he's packing? Disreguard what this fool said.
If 'Ply would hold up that ratchet...Its the walls of a tool shed.
iffy about this one cause you say it 'plee' and its 'plywood'
Im A+ calibre...So why's this clown in a bout with me?
It just doesn't make sense..guess that's why we consider fallacy.
cool
Ill go ahead and stop beating this geek and close...
P.S. Didnt I just beat you two weeks ago?
alright guess your verse is over
stare into these devilish eyes, and realize your irrelevelent guy
Cuz Even after droppin acid...we wouldn't see that PH level is high
ok
Ur such a faggot your moms embarassed ur one of her sons
the only person he made say holy shit was her, when she caught him fapping to 100 nuns
not feeling this
So i can't understand why this dyslexic guy stepped in line to get torchured a second time
with his infected mind thinkin "whys this guys penis extra wide next to mine"
this was kinda more about flow than anything else, no real punch
only queers talk about past battles, you proved my theory accurate
his mom told me bout his needle dick, so when he says "you'll get the point' most likely a faggots in back of it
too stretched to do any damage
He won't be breathin cuz i murder shit, after i choke him, he'll be bleedin from a tourniquet
watch me Leave P stored in the freezer But i ain't cheating on a urine test
lol... ok
phalanx was nice, even with not really using his last bar i thought he had more quoteables than foul. foul seemed a lil more about flow and his wording didnt really do too much damage as a result
v/phalanx
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uppppppp
phalenx had one really good line which was:
He's hyped because King didnt show?! Ill chin check this princess.We wouldnt consider Mono cool...if we had one eye and needed corrective lenses!
fOULMONOPLY best line was:
"stare into these devilish eyes, and realize your irrelevelent guy
Cuz Even after droppin acid...we wouldn't see that PH level is high"
And the winner is Phalenx
Cool battle, refreshing.
Phal had Mono cool, Foul shots and Plywood. Wasn't feelin' fallacy and your closer was obviously filler.
FM, I've seen like 2-3 PH concepts but this was one of the better ones and needle dick/get to the point was creative but also a bit too stretched out.
Phal had the extra standout, plus LOTB. Both did well but Phal was more polished.
V. Phalanx
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