LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 6
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Hey, guy.
You fat fucking shut in, this fucking dough boy here was born to lies…
You live a “Half-Life 2”, which's like… 4 people of normal size…
They said going to town on this faggot's like a job, so I'm here to do business.
Lethal Lyricist? God! You just described TWO things that miracle isn't!
You know that flawless record you strive so hard for? it's tarnished, my dude.
Saying “DEATH TO ALL” in your custom title — and I will start it with you...
Throwing bitch fits on RIA to be seen as a savage...
But you ain't Mean. 2 awards in 3 years isn't even an Average!
Went to several sites to make your imprint, Mir, but you ain't leaving a mark…
I looked you up... but I guess Legendary Members was a bad idea to start..
If heroism is based on courageous efforts? than this bitch’s a Villain...
you bit a line… AFTER calling another guy a biter… wow! the coincidence’s chilling!
If you wanna shoot high? Reach this altitude first…
Cause you lost to Switch… n' changed for the absolute worst...
Really can't bank on your LLL run, you have no wealth to attack this!…
Victory isn't in your vocabulary, Mir... nor is “Healthy” or “Active”
Last edited by Celph Taut; January 2nd, 2014 at 11:29 PM
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Vincent | Sammy | Vallus | Dose Blotter | Onceawhile | Virbius | Bag Mandela | Celph Taut
my concepts are fresh/amazing/creative.. no one thinks this pricks fancey
in battles i bring shit u've never seen<--- like friends or a chicks panties
this faggot dont grip the nine n blast bullets.. dude you'll get hurt
the only time celph raising arms, is assisting his bf w/ removing his shirt
i seen your video battle verse shawn, kid beat u senseless b/c your frail
you had such a problem with mac.. apple sent your an apology letter in the mail
ur in dagels crew? lol.. u n your squad bring nothing worth quoting..
damn right celphs in Reservoir, cuz that's were i'll leave his body floating
each time we've faced i've crushed u..punchs leave u seeing double
skillwise my text is above you, like a comic speech bubble
i bring concepts that are amazing. u brainstorming? invovles sweating
if a good punch comes to his mind, it's cuz the fist i throw will cave ur head in
his chick is a scumbag whore.. she's all about handjobs n sucking
but dont worry i havent slept w/ her yet, i kick her out after were done fucking
@God of War .. if he doesnt agree to me posting please delete this verse
You fat fucking shut in, this fucking dough boy here was born to lies…
You live a “Half-Life 2”, which's like… 4 people of normal size…
lol? thought you coulda done more with this but worded nicely
They said going to town on this faggot's like a job, so I'm here to do business.
Lethal Lyricist? God! You just described TWO things that miracle isn't!
meeeh
You know that flawless record you strive so hard for? it's tarnished, my dude.
Saying “DEATH TO ALL” in your custom title — and I will start it with you...
i dont really like title flips but this wasnt bad
Throwing bitch fits on RIA to be seen as a savage...
But you ain't Mean. 2 awards in 3 years isn't even an Average!
ok
Went to several sites to make your imprint, Mir, but you ain't leaving a mark…
I looked you up... but I guess Legendary Members was a bad idea to start..
definitely would lend itself to live battling more
If heroism is based on courageous efforts? than this bitch’s a Villain...
you bit a line… AFTER calling another guy a biter… wow! the coincidence’s chilling!
same as above. I see text as like writing jokes and punchlines being more effective just cuz of the medium but this sort of shit would fly in audio
If you wanna shoot high? Reach this altitude first…
Cause you lost to Switch… n' changed for the absolute worst...
nice
Really can't bank on your LLL run, you have no wealth to attack this!…
Victory isn't in your vocabulary, Mir... nor is “Healthy” or “Active”
alright
my concepts are fresh/amazing/creative.. no one thinks this pricks fancey
in battles i bring shit u've never seen<--- like friends or a chicks panties
eh
this faggot dont grip the nine n blast bullets.. dude you'll get hurt
the only time celph raising arms, is assisting his bf w/ removing his shirt
ok
i seen your video battle verse shawn, kid beat u senseless b/c your frail
you had such a problem with mac.. apple sent your an apology letter in the mail
lol
ur in dagels crew? lol.. u n your squad bring nothing worth quoting..
damn right celphs in Reservoir, cuz that's were i'll leave his body floating
kind of obvious but alright
each time we've faced i've crushed u..punchs leave u seeing double
skillwise my text is above you, like a comic speech bubble
i feel like most 'text' flips are done but this was ok
i bring concepts that are amazing. u brainstorming? invovles sweating
if a good punch comes to his mind, it's cuz the fist i throw will cave ur head in
well worded hit nice
his chick is a scumbag whore.. she's all about handjobs n sucking
but dont worry i havent slept w/ her yet, i kick her out after were done fucking
lol ok
celph's verse woulda been great in a live battle lol... but i feel like the text medium keeps him down. I feel like you gotta word it like a joke, where the most effective ones have some kinda twist in there. miracle was a little more consistent, a few more bars i'd quote from him so i'd give him this one
v/mir
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fuck what happened to my vote @God of War lol
sorry guys I had everything typed out for my vote must of not submitted the shit and went back to homepage by mistake if battles r still open tomorrow ill hit this up my eyes hurt from voting right now lol.
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Mir
this faggot dont grip the nine n blast bullets.. dude you'll get hurt
the only time celph raising arms, is assisting his bf w/ removing his shirt
i seen your video battle verse shawn, kid beat u senseless b/c your frail
you had such a problem with mac.. apple sent your an apology letter in the mail
ur in dagels crew? lol.. u n your squad bring nothing worth quoting..
damn right celphs in Reservoir, cuz that's were i'll leave his body floating
each time we've faced i've crushed u..punchs leave u seeing double
skillwise my text is above you, like a comic speech bubble
i bring concepts that are amazing. u brainstorming? invovles sweating
if a good punch comes to his mind, it's cuz the fist i throw will cave ur head in
his chick is a scumbag whore.. she's all about handjobs n sucking
but dont worry i havent slept w/ her yet, i kick her out after were done fucking
Thought u had some very creative flips in these four bars ive picked. also packed some humor factor
Celph
You fat fucking shut in, this fucking dough boy here was born to lies…
You live a “Half-Life 2”, which's like… 4 people of normal size…
They said going to town on this faggot's like a job, so I'm here to do business.
Lethal Lyricist? God! You just described TWO things that miracle isn't!
You know that flawless record you strive so hard for? it's tarnished, my dude.
Saying “DEATH TO ALL” in your custom title — and I will start it with you...
If you wanna shoot high? Reach this altitude first…
Cause you lost to Switch… n' changed for the absolute worst...
Really can't bank on your LLL run, you have no wealth to attack this!…
Victory isn't in your vocabulary, Mir... nor is “Healthy” or “Active”
Celph very impressed with ur appearance in this battle this week u had some cool personal shots what killed u is how u formatted some of ur bars in audio format whick took away from the sting factor that u look for in text format.
I got mir taking this for creativity and overall decent flips and more consistency but if Celph worded the legendary member bar and the biting personal as text battling format would've turned tables. good battle though one of ur better text verses ive seen.
V/Miracle sorry had a detailed breakdown but forgot to submit and backed out
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I kind've liked CT's opener, but he could've went in a total different direction with that concept and it would've been 10x better, IMO. His last 2 were also decent. I don't wanna beat a dead horse here, but I too think some of CT's shit would work a lot better in an acapella battle or something. Technically speaking he has what it takes, he's just not getting creative enough with his ideas. I don't know, textwise something's missing.
Mir came pretty good. Raising arms, problem with Mac, reservoir.. all good. Good punch comes to mind was also decent. Pretty cool verse, he did more than enough to take it.
V. Miracle
Miracle had some great quotes in this best line i think was:
"each time we've faced i've crushed u..punchs leave u seeing double
skillwise my text is above you, like a comic speech bubble"
And celeph had nothing really worth rembering, sorry you need to come harder man
THE WINNER IS MIRACLE...
my concepts are fresh/amazing/creative.. no one thinks this pricks fancey
in battles i bring shit u've never seen<--- like friends or a chicks panties
this faggot dont grip the nine n blast bullets.. dude you'll get hurt
the only time celph raising arms, is assisting his bf w/ removing his shirt
each time we've faced i've crushed u..punchs leave u seeing double
skillwise my text is above you, like a comic speech bubble
was feelin those bars from miracle wasnt feelin much from celp to keep it 100
v/miracle
CT's 1st 2 bars were decent. Everything else just wasn't extremely effective, IMO.
Mir had a few stand out bars that landed pretty hard, opener got a quick lol tho, can't front. Props on that one, 2 bar was nice too. Few bars I did not like were the crew name concept and the text over you/speech bubble. Felt those were extremely basic and obvious, IMO. However Mir did have just a few more effective punches, I'd say he took it.
Vote - Mir
Defintely nice battle tho.
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