mordy(3-2) vs joe boston(1-1) boston wins

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 6

10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due THURSDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.

[Joe Boston]

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[Joe Boston]

@Mordycai

His New Years went good huh? no drunk people no fighting
See all of us made a Resolution we just hope his was to stop fucking biting
Easily point the finger looking for someone to accuse
Seeking attention u need to payless to others before I punch u out those cheap ass shoes
Never snooze on the heat I'm producing bad attitude like Dirty Harry
Better turn on your AC Mor cuz ill hit u with more hardware then that fucking store carries
Bad Larry when it comes to being in the sheets dude lets be real
If a bitch wants Cai in she's just adding more spice to her meal
Front like u have sex appeal different bitch every night up in ur spot
How can you attempt to cheat and Smash when even by that dude you got easily caught
Your not that perfect textcee at all stop acting like ur verses don't have flaws
When on the throne u either need to shit or get off the pot like the passing of the Colorado law

[Jermz $G$]

His New Years went good huh? no drunk people no fighting
See all of us made a Resolution we just hope his was to stop fucking biting

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Used to dick, get gashed if this faggot tries to hold me up and fuck me
Got this pussy raging, yet the only real wildcat was Joe B. from Kentucky

v/joe both verses were decent but not much stood out to me but overall i felt joes verse more an the opener was good

[Allen Knight]

Opener, ac more


Vs

Haircut

V/joe b, there was alot of potential in both.verses wit some bar just.wording killed yahll
I think joe took it even tho he had a playless bar come on boston. U kno better than that lol
But joe got concepts just needs to work on the execution . More had the same problem
Work on that. Joe had a extra quote an wins imo. Props yahll

[Salamander]

AC Moore and Smash were decent. Cayenne could have been dope, but you used it wrong.

Mordy had the wild cat line, but that's it. Everything else was too simple. Bury the hatchet is just played.

V. Joe Boston

[Amen]

His New Years went good huh? no drunk people no fighting
See all of us made a Resolution we just hope his was to stop fucking biting

Lol personal. Could have utilized the concept to your advantage if you worded/flipped it better but still effective.

Never snooze on the heat I'm producing bad attitude like Dirty Harry
Better turn on your AC Mor cuz ill hit u with more hardware then that fucking store carries

Not bad. Set up was relevant to the punch you delivered. Wording could have been a little better but pretty cool creativity.

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Nothing


Vote: JB

I think he had more of a consistent verse. Lacked wording in a lot of his concepts but some he managed to still pull off. I think Mord had the same issue but lacked wording and delivery. You have the concepts, but your wording makes them come off statement'ish.

Just my opinion - When the both of you are writing. Take each one of your concepts and play with them till they are effective and worded nicely. Remember when battling, the winner's always most likely have more/better personals and "Disses" - You have to give the reader that "Oh shit" feeling when reading your material.

[Sharp]

Ac Moore, cayenne

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Wildcat


I thought Joe got this. Had a few lines that were close to being quoted two but kinda got rushed like the smash line. Mordy was alright and sounded mean but didn't have much in concepts so Joe takes this one imo

V/joe

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

Rofl. Ac moore isnt a hardware store. Smash didnt caych me "biting" ,sharp did. Least my concepts made sense and I have more than one syllable rhyme scheme. yall retarded fo real. Get some knowledge children.

this isnt a debate...nor a place where you think you need to explain why you won take it to the chat

[Donshotta]

Both of yall wack, but since i have to choose... The winner has to be Mordycai..

Hopefully you guys be more impressive next time..