LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 6
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Check, goin 10
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Check, aight
Allen Knight, you say nameplays on you are old? So is your style I say
U won them battles by fuckin that text up..Rape? yeah wit ya FORCED ass wordplay
Who cares what that herb say, I mean c'mon "Game Raw with a Chainsaw"? This Queer's a whore trick
Ask his Girl...After I hit her wit dat BoomShot, She asked for an active reload on some Gears of War shit
She Wanted MORE Dick...I'm sorry but how could you get that confused?
I guess when she said she wanted Mordy...AK pm'd 'em & threatened to kill him too
U're done, so screwed..your shrewd ways are pathetic I'm laughin at you fool
LMaO cuz if GoW matched you up wit him...He'd prolly Own your ass too..
And He's a Newb...
You're Bound to Lose...Loser think you'll beat me? u're insane?
It's time for you to go Night Knight Nigga..K. Hart been Put to shame
Dropped Early while I have time...GL Kid peace
Edited cuz I only had 8 lines on the 1st drop had to add 2 more my bad lol
Last edited by Capcom; January 1st, 2014 at 04:29 PM
Gotta ruger locked & loaded, I got the best tactics, c
Pistol whip till it foleys ur neck then drop back n throw a bullet thru ur chest cavity
Been beating ur girls pussy, errday she calls to bang me now
I wore that fuckin out more times than the octomom's kids hand me downs
U smell like a fucking sewer, no ho wants this suckers attention
Every bitch that compass makes them turn around an instantly go the other direction
Last week u got beaten n iced bitch, fuck ur hype kid
Shit U got cock smacked by riddick & then he put white in ur eyes like his
u hate how wavy I am, don't be mad I get hos that grind bitch
Stfu faggot ironic ur bitch ass thinks im self absorbed when ur exfoliate my dick
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Knight, you say nameplays on you are old? So is your style I say
U won them battles by fuckin that text up..Rape? yeah wit ya FORCED ass wordplay
vs
U smell like a fucking sewer, no ho wants this suckers attention
Every bitch that compass makes them turn around an instantly go the other direction
Capcom: i was liking your punchlines a little more, didn't really see any AMAZING lines, except for the one quoted above. i like the potential of this verse, definetely good set ups, some times some lines seemed forced, but for the most part it wasnt a bad verse, the only thing i didn't like is the structure. but you had him on consistency
allen
you had good multi's and the flow of the verse was good, but you lacked any personals, and consistency, for the most part I didn't mind the verse,i didn't think it was bad, but it didn't have any real stand out lines, although the line you quoted was the hardest line of both opponents, the other lines didn't really hit
so v/Capcom
Reservoir Gods
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Vote - AK
Although I found Capcom's personal approach A LOT more refreshing, his stuff was painfully long-winded and stretched out, taking the impact out of most of his lines. His rhymescheme was very lazily put together, and the punches weren't all that enjoyable... AK took the generic route... a completely superficial approach, but at the same time, I felt his punchline material was slightly better, as was his wordplay. He had better form and structure and somewhat a decent execution for some lines. If Capcom was a little more focused and set up his bars proper, it'd more than likely be going to him... but that isn't the case, so...
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CypherAlumni
Vincent | Sammy | Vallus | Dose Blotter | Onceawhile | Virbius | Bag Mandela | Celph Taut
She Wanted MORE Dick...I'm sorry but how could you get that confused?
I guess when she said she wanted Mordy...AK pm'd 'em & threatened to kill him too
You're Bound to Lose...Loser think you'll beat me? u're insane?
It's time for you to go Night Knight Nigga..K. Hart been Put to shame
vs
Been beating ur girls pussy, errday she calls to bang me now
I wore that fuckin out more times than the octomom's kids hand me downs
U smell like a fucking sewer, no ho wants this suckers attention
Every bitch that compass makes them turn around an instantly go the other direction
overall-cap your opener was too plain for a contenders match and lacked sting. the gears of war line had nice potential but was too stretched.Allen. the compass line was nice. seen before but I like the flip. but your opener was wtf?. like it was just a visual. no wit. white eyes. riddick concept i just saw on ridiulous spomewhere . but either way its played. ands your closer was worded poorly
vote-Cap
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
Allen Knight, you say nameplays on you are old? So is your style I say
U won them battles by fuckin that text up..Rape? yeah wit ya FORCED ass wordplay
COM YOU SHOULD KNOW BETTER THEN to used forced/rape wordplay
Who cares what that herb say, I mean c'mon "Game Raw with a Chainsaw"? This Queer's a whore trick
Ask his Girl...After I hit her wit dat BoomShot, She asked for an active reload on some Gears of War shit
this was aight
She Wanted MORE Dick...I'm sorry but how could you get that confused?
I guess when she said she wanted Mordy...AK pm'd 'em & threatened to kill him too
this wasnt even a hit broham
U're done, so screwed..your shrewd ways are pathetic I'm laughin at you fool
LMaO cuz if GoW matched you up wit him...He'd prolly Own your ass too..
another statement
And He's a Newb...
You're Bound to Lose...Loser think you'll beat me? u're insane?
It's time for you to go Night Knight Nigga..K. Hart been Put to shame
no
vs
Gotta ruger locked & loaded, I got the best tactics, c
Pistol whip till it foleys ur neck then drop back n throw a bullet thru ur chest cavity
ok
Been beating ur girls pussy, errday she calls to bang me now
I wore that fuckin out more times than the octomom's kids hand me downs
no
U smell like a fucking sewer, no ho wants this suckers attention
Every bitch that compass makes them turn around an instantly go the other direction
nice
Last week u got beaten n iced bitch, fuck ur hype kid
Shit U got cock smacked by riddick & then he put white in ur eyes like his
meh
u hate how wavy I am, don't be mad I get hos that grind bitch
Stfu faggot ironic ur bitch ass thinks im self absorbed when ur exfoliate my dick
naw
well this battle should of been much better imo, but com you came wierd as fuck, ur flow was off, ur schemes was lacking and it literally looked like u just rushed a verse so yuo wouldnt no show, while i appreciate that i think you should of put more time into it ..allen u seemed rushed here to but you can literally tell that you are more seasoned then com cuz even ur bars that missed was close to hitting while his was way off
v/knight
AK took this battle pretty easily, caps verse was very underwhelming.. Lack of creativity, wit and impact of lines really. It came across like not a lot of effort was put in. This set it up for AK to decide whether or not he wanted to win and he decided to win. The compass and closing line were enough to take the battle.
V/AK
Capcom
Who cares what that herb say, I mean c'mon "Game Raw with a Chainsaw"? This Queer's a whore trick
Ask his Girl...After I hit her wit dat BoomShot, She asked for an active reload on some Gears of War shit
She Wanted MORE Dick...I'm sorry but how could you get that confused?
I guess when she said she wanted Mordy...AK pm'd 'em & threatened to kill him too
vs
Allen
U smell like a fucking sewer, no ho wants this suckers attention
Every bitch that compass makes them turn around an instantly go the other direction
u hate how wavy I am, don't be mad I get hos that grind bitch
Stfu faggot ironic ur bitch ass thinks im self absorbed when ur exfoliate my dick
allens closer was worded a lil fucked up but the concept mde me laugh and that combass was line was good shit, other than that he didnt have much....capcom the intro was played....i liked the gears of war play and you could of had this if u focused more on the schemes...were kinda basic...decent battle anyway but ak gets it
V/AK
"Chrome 4 5 singin cuz they still snitchin
Pools in da livin room, swim to the kitchen"
Ak- takes this easily for me with more flips and direct punches that did some damage. Almost felt the personality side of cap was just getting a bit too story ish and it was long winded making it inaffective @ the end of it all
Got a/k 3 over 1 quotable
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
Allen Knight, you say nameplays on you are old? So is your style I say
U won them battles by fuckin that text up..Rape? yeah wit ya FORCED ass wordplay
idea's kinda done
Who cares what that herb say, I mean c'mon "Game Raw with a Chainsaw"? This Queer's a whore trick
Ask his Girl...After I hit her wit dat BoomShot, She asked for an active reload on some Gears of War shit
lol cool
She Wanted MORE Dick...I'm sorry but how could you get that confused?
I guess when she said she wanted Mordy...AK pm'd 'em & threatened to kill him too
after all that shit in the lounge youre still gonna try to use this flip?
U're done, so screwed..your shrewd ways are pathetic I'm laughin at you fool
LMaO cuz if GoW matched you up wit him...He'd prolly Own your ass too..
didnt really hit
And He's a Newb...
You're Bound to Lose...Loser think you'll beat me? u're insane?
It's time for you to go Night Knight Nigga..K. Hart been Put to shame
night/knight's done to death
Gotta ruger locked & loaded, I got the best tactics, c
Pistol whip till it foleys ur neck then drop back n throw a
bullet thru ur chest cavity
didnt work for me
Been beating ur girls pussy, errday she calls to bang me now
I wore that fuckin out more times than the octomom's kids hand me downs
ok
U smell like a fucking sewer, no ho wants this suckers attention
Every bitch that compass makes them turn around an instantly go the other direction
kind of a slant in pronouncing 'cahm' and 'com' but i let it slide
Last week u got beaten n iced bitch, fuck ur hype kid
Shit U got cock smacked by riddick & then he put white in ur eyes like his
lol cool
u hate how wavy I am, don't be mad I get hos that grind bitch
Stfu faggot ironic ur bitch ass thinks im self absorbed when ur exfoliate my dick
ex fully ate? lol
Allen got this on consistency. Liked caps gears of war line but not much else. good battle
v/ak
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Originally Posted by Clout
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Didn't really enjoy anything from Cap this week, which is surprising but also understandable. I thought he'd come out swinging after last week, but dude obviously has a busy schedule. This just felt rushed TBH.
AK wasn't much better, but he did enough to take it. Riddick personal was decent and so was the octomom shit. The others were forced.
V. AK
Cap
Allen Knight, you say nameplays on you are old? So is your style I say
U won them battles by fuckin that text up..Rape? yeah wit ya FORCED ass wordplay
this was a mild personal felt it also could've been worded better
Who cares what that herb say, I mean c'mon "Game Raw with a Chainsaw"? This Queer's a whore trick
Ask his Girl...After I hit her wit dat BoomShot, She asked for an active reload on some Gears of War shit
lmao nice concept
She Wanted MORE Dick...I'm sorry but how could you get that confused?
I guess when she said she wanted Mordy...AK pm'd 'em & threatened to kill him too
More D nameplay wordplays however u use it is played and basic
U're done, so screwed..your shrewd ways are pathetic I'm laughin at you fool
LMaO cuz if GoW matched you up wit him...He'd prolly Own your ass too..
mild flip
And He's a Newb...
You're Bound to Lose...Loser think you'll beat me? u're insane?
It's time for you to go Night Knight Nigga..K. Hart been Put to shame
seen knight night nameplays done to death as well but the concept flip and reference wasn't bad
AK
Gotta ruger locked & loaded, I got the best tactics, c
Pistol whip till it foleys ur neck then drop back n throw a bullet thru ur chest cavity
direct hit but for me the hit wasn't displayed hard sting factor wise
Been beating ur girls pussy, errday she calls to bang me now
I wore that fuckin out more times than the octomom's kids hand me downs
lol polish up the wording thought good humor factor
U smell like a fucking sewer, no ho wants this suckers attention
Every bitch that compass makes them turn around an instantly go the other direction
played nameplay
Last week u got beaten n iced bitch, fuck ur hype kid
Shit U got cock smacked by riddick & then he put white in ur eyes like his
lol ok nameplay/wordplay concept nice flip good humor
u hate how wavy I am, don't be mad I get hos that grind bitch
Stfu faggot ironic ur bitch ass thinks im self absorbed when ur exfoliate my dick
wp little forced but humor factor was there the idea itself was good
Cap Gears of war line was creative the closer was cool but the nameplay has been done but cant bag him cuz the concept was good. Allen had some nice wordplay overall humor factor octomom metaphore Riddick and the exfoliate lines were creative.
V/Allen Kinight just thought he was better according to humor factor and creativity
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