CONTENDERS: switch(3-0) vs untold(3-2) OPEN FOR VOTES

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 6

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[Untold.]

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[Switch.]

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[Switch.]

Dear Untold,

You been here 10 years but there's no proof you're a sick vet
It makes sense you're untold cos your accomplishments ain't saying shit yet
foreign to success cos you've never produce wonders son
Cos speaking French is the only way that Un will be number one
Any formula u have will fail so don't be confident at this position
you have a 'schu' in this battle.. since you'll be left in 'macher's' condition
Ya location screams internet geek, not someone w/ hot rap schemes
I bet your New Years resolution will be seeing 2014 on your LCD laptop screen
Lost ur verse twice vs capcom even though he gave you many days
But he understood since anything undo is worth erasing anyway

Yours sincerely,

Switch.

[Untold.]

Switch'll run in fright. fuk this pussy, this cunt aint tight
so your names 'Switch Period'? i guess cuz somedays are heavy n some are light
this fool adores his "cool" awards. i aint tryin to bend the facts
cuz ur far from bein Ridiculous.. GoW, $pit, Kontext, etc.. SO WHY ARE U IN A CONTENDERS MATCH??
i can't pretend ur whack! its reality like how u fuk dudes in seedy places
ur prolly Kraven Morebuds to suck off than that faggot does a weekly basis
if Switch asked to join Mondo Thugs, i'd blast his ass n tell him no still!
Switchboard in my crew? then i'm disconnecting his line like he didn't pay his telephone bill
you win? i'm the victor, its a shoe in! we could'a took a pole!
cuz this killin couldn't come any Sooner like Bama losing to them in the Sugar Bowl

[Kontext]

foreign to success cos you've never produce wonders son
Cos speaking French is the only way that Un will be number one
Ya location screams internet geek, not someone w/ hot rap schemes
I bet your New Years resolution will be seeing 2014 on your LCD laptop screen
Lost ur verse twice vs capcom even though he gave you many days
But he understood since anything undo is worth erasing anyway

vs

Switch'll run in fright. fuk this pussy, this cunt aint tight
so your names 'Switch Period'? i guess cuz somedays are heavy n some are light
i can't pretend ur whack! its reality like how u fuk dudes in seedy places
ur prolly Kraven Morebuds to suck off than that faggot does a weekly basis
you win? i'm the victor, its a shoe in! we could'a took a pole!
cuz this killin couldn't come any Sooner like Bama losing to them in the Sugar Bowl

vote-Switch

I felt like untold could've took this battle but he had the played telephone bill switchboard line. & the bein ridiculous had potential but I felt like it was stretched too much. Switch's opener was a cliche' on Un. & done before. shumacher was worded wierd. but u had a consistant verse and I liked your direct attack. though ur closer was dope af. & resolution was nice. Thought told's "Switch Period" bar was lotb though. good job guys

[Capcom]

You been here 10 years but there's no proof you're a sick vet
It makes sense you're untold cos your accomplishments ain't saying shit yet
Lost ur verse twice vs capcom even though he gave you many days
But he understood since anything undo is worth erasing anyway

Vs.

Switch'll run in fright. fuk this pussy, this cunt aint tight
so your names 'Switch Period'? i guess cuz somedays are heavy n some are light
this fool adores his "cool" awards. i aint tryin to bend the facts
cuz ur far from bein Ridiculous.. GoW, $pit, Kontext, etc.. SO WHY ARE U IN A CONTENDERS MATCH??
i can't pretend ur whack! its reality like how u fuk dudes in seedy places
ur prolly Kraven Morebuds to suck off than that faggot does a weekly basis
you win? i'm the victor, its a shoe in! we could'a took a pole!
cuz this killin couldn't come any Sooner like Bama losing to them in the Sugar Bowl

I got Untold winning this wit more quoteables...even though that Contenders match bar was stretched it was still funny as hell lol. Switch I aint get that Shumacher line & like kon said the french/Un line is played, And the Resolution/Laptop screen was just a geeky punch to me. I've seen you come with better shit be4 but this week just wasn't up to you usual standards IMO.

V-Untold

[Foul]

Switch
You been here 10 years but there's no proof you're a sick vet
It makes sense you're untold cos your accomplishments ain't saying shit yet
Any formula u have will fail so don't be confident at this position
you have a 'schu' in this battle.. since you'll be left in 'macher's' condition
Lost ur verse twice vs capcom even though he gave you many days
But he understood since anything undo is worth erasing anyway

vs

Switch'll run in fright. fuk this pussy, this cunt aint tight
so your names 'Switch Period'? i guess cuz somedays are heavy n some are light
i can't pretend ur whack! its reality like how u fuk dudes in seedy places
ur prolly Kraven Morebuds to suck off than that faggot does a weekly basis
if Switch asked to join Mondo Thugs, i'd blast his ass n tell him no still!
Switchboard in my crew? then i'm disconnecting his line like he didn't pay his telephone bill


close battle here, nice match. I think untold takes this by a hair but he coulda flowed little better at times... n he was a little more consistent with it. i felt like the telephone bill line was dope. could of been better if worded differently...but some of his lines were too long...like the contenders match line....
still he had the better quotable in his opener ....was just a tad bit sharper IMO. was feelin switches shu maker and his beginner alot...other quoteable was good too just fell a bit short...
v/ untold

[Spoken]

Switch- had the vet status and cap com bar

Nothing too shabby I found it to be more of a statement ish verse

Vs.

Untold.

He had the period, switchboard and sooner bar

Felt he slacked on the other four bars but enough to snag the win for me and really do damage from those 3 bars.

MVGT- Untold

[Skully Hendrix]

Very close battle here imo..but I think switch takes it by a HAIR

v. Switch

Sorry @Untold my bad BRO ROTFFLMMFAOMFSMDWWJD

[Sharp]

You been here 10 years but there's no proof you're a sick vet
It makes sense you're untold cos your accomplishments ain't saying shit yet
seen this done on him before
foreign to success cos you've never produce wonders son
Cos speaking French is the only way that Un will be number one
but thats not how its pronounced... works visually but you say it 'oohn'
Any formula u have will fail so don't be confident at this position
you have a 'schu' in this battle.. since you'll be left in 'macher's' condition
alright idea but idk about a partial name flip for someone youre not battling
Ya location screams internet geek, not someone w/ hot rap schemes
I bet your New Years resolution will be seeing 2014 on your LCD laptop screen
This is an old joke... I saw New years resolution and basically knew the punch was coming
Lost ur verse twice vs capcom even though he gave you many days
But he understood since anything undo is worth erasing anyway
Solid



Switch'll run in fright. fuk this pussy, this cunt aint tight
so your names 'Switch Period'? i guess cuz somedays are heavy n some are light
cool
this fool adores his "cool" awards. i aint tryin to bend the facts
cuz ur far from bein Ridiculous.. GoW, $pit, Kontext, etc.. SO WHY ARE U IN A CONTENDERS MATCH??
eh
i can't pretend ur whack! its reality like how u fuk dudes in seedy places
ur prolly Kraven Morebuds to suck off than that faggot does a weekly basis
kinda weak
if Switch asked to join Mondo Thugs, i'd blast his ass n tell him no still!
Switchboard in my crew? then i'm disconnecting his line like he didn't pay his telephone bill
solid
you win? i'm the victor, its a shoe in! we could'a took a pole!
cuz this killin couldn't come any Sooner like Bama losing to them in the Sugar Bowl
nice


good battle, but I thought untold got this with consistency. switch had too much stuff I've seen before to work for me

v/untold

[Jermz $G$]

You been here 10 years but there's no proof you're a sick vet
It makes sense you're untold cos your accomplishments ain't saying shit yet
Lost ur verse twice vs capcom even though he gave you many days
But he understood since anything undo is worth erasing anyway

vs

this fool adores his "cool" awards. i aint tryin to bend the facts
cuz ur far from bein Ridiculous.. GoW, $pit, Kontext, etc.. SO WHY ARE U IN A CONTENDERS MATCH??
i can't pretend ur whack! its reality like how u fuk dudes in seedy places
ur prolly Kraven Morebuds to suck off than that faggot does a weekly basis

un went a harder overall

v/ untold

[Allen Knight]

Shu, closer

Vs

Opener, kraven, sugar bowl

V, untold...cool battle both dropped solid, this was really close
I just think told was a lil more consistent wit one more quote here
but it cold go either way tbh, props on the battle yahll.

[Salamander]

Switch had his opener and closer both hitting, but fell off in between. Un in french was forced, Schu was ehhh and resolution is played out. Seen Switch drop better, but again.. his opener and closer were both on point.

Untold also hit with his opener and closer. I thought the 3 in between were way too simple. Well, 2. The Switchboard line wasn't too simple, but I JUST used a Switchboard line on him in FL.

So I got 2 from each. Not voting, I'm just leaving some feedback.

[Joe Boston]

Switch

You been here 10 years but there's no proof you're a sick vet
It makes sense you're untold cos your accomplishments ain't saying shit yet
good personal flip with the nameplay usage

foreign to success cos you've never produce wonders son
Cos speaking French is the only way that Un will be number one
wasn't feeling this nameplay flip here


Any formula u have will fail so don't be confident at this position
you have a 'schu' in this battle.. since you'll be left in 'macher's' condition
ok not sure if u was going for a nameplay/or wordplay personal here? nit a bad concept


Ya location screams internet geek, not someone w/ hot rap schemes
I bet your New Years resolution will be seeing 2014 on your LCD laptop screen
not really a punch

Lost ur verse twice vs capcom even though he gave you many days
But he understood since anything undo is worth erasing anyway
ok nameplay

Untold


Switch'll run in fright. fuk this pussy, this cunt aint tight
so your names 'Switch Period'? i guess cuz somedays are heavy n some are light
lol good nameplay flip

this fool adores his "cool" awards. i aint tryin to bend the facts
cuz ur far from bein Ridiculous.. GoW, $pit, Kontext, etc.. SO WHY ARE U IN A CONTENDERS MATCH??
mild personal

i can't pretend ur whack! its reality like how u fuk dudes in seedy places
ur prolly Kraven Morebuds to suck off than that faggot does a weekly basis
ok nameplay/wordplay flip

if Switch asked to join Mondo Thugs, i'd blast his ass n tell him no still!
Switchboard in my crew? then i'm disconnecting his line like he didn't pay his telephone bill
ok nice nameplay concept

you win? i'm the victor, its a shoe in! we could'a took a pole!
cuz this killin couldn't come any Sooner like Bama losing to them in the Sugar Bowl
ok nice wordplay concept

Well Switch kind of focused on some nameplay hits his opener and closer wasn't bad. the French Un nameplay missed though. the schu bar was ok didn't really get if he was doing a personal reference or what??? other the that some misses. Untold good opener switch board nameplay was cool and his closer. Felt the bars untold had hit better and he was more consistent according to his punches. slightly better creativity wise.

V/Untold