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    Lock loaded, im hip hops explosive pop, top bloated with thoughts ferociously growin like crops, verbal glock opening shots mostly at cock blowing jocks showing their inability to walk lonely, I was taught holding my spot only, stopped roasting pot coasting slowly n got going, I'm not joking so watch closely I lost closeness with competition cuz I'm both hot cold n on a mission to drop dope flava that'll make ya resemble iguanas licking, to many non existing skills I'm iLL beyond the distance seen through strongest visions, I play the proper position, drama skippin no baby momma bitchin stickin to one gettin all of my Johnson's inches, marijuana didn't, lift me high enough to rise above n conquer itchin,desires to make an honest living, passin it on to children , tickling thoughts thinking a lot different, decisions to not give in to block headed idiots plots has risen me far above the rest who r piddling on, driven by heart,incisions n scars to keep giving my all n stay ahead like its November n I'm in the middle a march,

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    problem with ur writing is that, you take a cool ass flow and misuse it. listen to an eminem track he goes off with this same flow but only a couple bars. then he changes his pace and reduces the flow and amount of rhymes within the bars. its hard to explain but yeah

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    Lol... Ok.. Listen to em? Hmmmm...

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    People dont want too much of a good thing u know? if u showcase a flow like this it just has to be a flex within ur verse then go back to being normal. lots of artists use that technique ems just one of him.. but lyrically his new album is real technical. u cant make this complex flow ur identity cause thats what artists did in the golden age of hip hop when it was underdeveloped. now ppl want more than that

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    Ok I'll accept they opinion.. Thanks homes

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