Forums are Dead

[Art.]

Every forum is dead, Cut down Torn into shreds.
Theres no importance in threads, yet they're boring instead.
and it seems the more that i read, the more corny it gets
crews not supporting their sets, trolls still ignoring the vets
if i break it down, theres a few that care that make arounds
vote, stay, get down, encourage, debate the crowds
battle, take the crowns, winning makes them proud
competition is now whats missing so its painful now..
Then theres few dudes with acts, who play like kids or brats
act tough like they "split the crack" or have girls "strip for cash"
on the net i see this shit and laugh, cause dudes omit the facts
if they're so sick and bad , why are they here to spit these raps
see i rip these tracks for the Art of it, hence my name
but the inactivity with feed is really what i present as lame
its why users lose interest in the site or the net set they claim
so correct the game, drop a vote, feed and set the lane
I honestly don't give a shit, bored just rhyming words
but the timing first is really what came to define my verse
Cause every lines absurd, but became the truths of these giant turfs
I jumped back on the net to try to surf, but the tides disperse
and if this gets no feed it just proves that the title works…


Forums are Dead …


Reallly just bored and felt like rhyming words… forums are dead is just the first 3 words that came to mind

[Celph Taut]

The starting scheme was real nice, the body's cool and and it kind of keeps consistency from there. Cool concept, Art. Yeah, it sucks that boards are dying off, but you got the new generation technology to blame for that. FB, Twitter, and what have you. Structure gives it good fluidity and form. The readability is nice, and you articulated your points fairly well. Overall, it's enjoyable. More so cause I agree with it. Keep it up!

[Brandon Cee]

The last 4 bars were heavy fam, so true. I'll come back with more feed, just gimme a minute.

[Well Versed]

it is what it is...a nice lil verse...not bad

[Soule]

^ the reason forums are dead.


Cool little piece. Flow stayed consistent and wording was straight. Last four bars were the standout bars. Middle was okay but below average compared to the beginning and end.

[Fresh]

Haha this was awesome. The rhyme scheme was tight as was the flow. You definitely nailed the topic, and shed some light on it. I couldn't agree more about the "Then theres few dudes with acts, who play like kids or brats
act tough like they "split the crack" or have girls "strip for cash" line. Hit the nail on the head there.

I can't give any crit. for this so I'll just say good job.

[Child-Raising Badass]

twitter killed forums