w4: King (0-0) vs jermz(0-0) KING WINS

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 4

10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.

Good luck @King @Hermn As

[King]

10..

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

@King @JERMZ $G$

[Jermz $G$]

word check

im down to drop by tonight if you wana end this one early bruh

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[King]

i'll drop tonight.

[King]

U better get it straight from the gate, I obliterate herbs
Bitch my hits land clean as fuck, so of course a verse'll eliminate jermz
But I know ur new here so I'll show u the breaks quick...
Like how my fist breaks mach 5 before breaking thru ur fucking face kid
He'll get forced outta the league, Gow saved this wack kid unneededly
It's ironic as fuck, u dodged boot matches only to get ya ass kicked repeatedly
I'm a beast, u can see it easily. read it n weep faggot ya done
I mastered this son. ur gettin raped in a cypher, with that fact alone I've practically won
This is savagery, masterfully done. n I aint even mention ur ho n shit
She's the Spit type ...not that she don't swallow, I mean she likes to blow n split

[Jermz $G$]

outta all kings your the easiest king i could kill
im like king james dawwg your like king of the hill
so youll never go past text, niggas know that u trash
life is like a chess game, king is movin no where fast
been here since 04, funny cuz your still like my seed
youll probly be here so long youll champ the senior citizens league
an ya bitch ugly 2 u musta been rippin a bong
your "king" but your queen look more like a pawn
an its good you picked 10 cuz niggas are never supporters
by your 4th bar they usually wana press the red x in the corner

[Switch.]

V/king

King was a little rusty but got this pretty easily to be honest, his first bar and the boot line were pretty cool and the cypher one was a little funny too..not sure about your last line there though, don't know if there was a spelling error or maybe I just didn't get it. For me jermz verse was pretty weak, the first chess line was only ok but to make a chess reference again in the verse seemed to me you were running out of ideas and not keeping it fresh.

[Salamander]

I think King's blow 'n split line was referencing Spit blowing up and splitting from the league. @Switch.

Anyway, that had potential. Wording was a little off though. Opener was cool, boot matches was dedent.

Jermz didn't have much, but showed future potential. King moving nowhere fast was decent. Stay up Jermz, you'll get better quickly I think. Read a lot of LLL battles and take notes, you'll get there.

V. King

[Foul]

V/ King

U better get it straight from the gate, I obliterate herbs
Bitch my hits land clean as fuck, so of course a verse'll eliminate jermz
But I know ur new here so I'll show u the breaks quick...
Like how my fist breaks mach 5 before breaking thru ur fucking face kid
He'll get forced outta the league, Gow saved this wack kid unneededly
It's ironic as fuck, u dodged boot matches only to get ya ass kicked repeatedly



His verse was pretty good, most of it. he had some wording problems and idk if its true if hes "rusty" . that forced out of the league line was here though.


for king





most of shit was played tbh. heard most of it.


been here since 04, funny cuz your still like my seed
youll probly be here so long youll champ the senior citizens league

[Joe Boston]

King

U better get it straight from the gate, I obliterate herbs
Bitch my hits land clean as fuck, so of course a verse'll eliminate jermz
ok nice flip on the concept here

But I know ur new here so I'll show u the breaks quick...
Like how my fist breaks mach 5 before breaking thru ur fucking face kid
not a bad hit wording could've been better though

He'll get forced outta the league, Gow saved this wack kid unneededly
It's ironic as fuck, u dodged boot matches only to get ya ass kicked repeatedly
lol

I'm a beast, u can see it easily. read it n weep faggot ya done
I mastered this son. ur gettin raped in a cypher, with that fact alone I've practically won
nah


This is savagery, masterfully done. n I aint even mention ur ho n shit
She's the Spit type ...not that she don't swallow, I mean she likes to blow n split
nah

jermz


outta all kings your the easiest king i could kill
im like king james dawwg your like king of the hill
nameplayys like this are overused sorry

so youll never go past text, niggas know that u trash
life is like a chess game, king is movin no where fast
sane with this concept

been here since 04, funny cuz your still like my seed
youll probly be here so long youll champ the senior citizens league
mild humor factor

an ya bitch ugly 2 u musta been rippin a bong
your "king" but your queen look more like a pawn
ok lol

an its good you picked 10 cuz niggas are never supporters
by your 4th bar they usually wana press the red x in the corner
nah played

few played nameplays from jermz and concepts the king/pawn line was ight. King first 3 bars hit then fell off with the last two but still was more consistent concept wise.

v/King

[Phalanx]

King - I'm feeling the opening bar; very solid execution. I like the build up and concept in the next bar. Cool little jab. Im taking the personal at face value, and I like your flip on the concept. Good shit. Moving on,he flow here was solid..but as far as sting? This bar contributed little. Closer was also kind of bland.

Jerms - Opener was bad simple. But it works as a light jab. I like the chess flip. Reworded it could have been dope; as is its decent. Third bar wasnt bad. Another jab, this time with a personal tie in. Fourth bar was a big stumbling point. I found the concept dull. Your closer was kind of anticlimatic.

Overveiw - King opened strong. He came out of the gate swing and landed some clean shots. Jerms got in a few jabs, and started with some humor. But he never really picked up any steam; and in the last few lines, you seemed to be struggling. At the end of the day, King had the more impactful shots.

Vote - King

[miracle]

U better get it straight from the gate, I obliterate herbs
Bitch my hits land clean as fuck, so of course a verse'll eliminate jermz
He'll get forced outta the league, Gow saved this wack kid unneededly
It's ironic as fuck, u dodged boot matches only to get ya ass kicked repeatedly


vs


nothing


v/king i think once jerm gets our style on rb down n learns to think outside the box he'll do alot better but for now king took this rather easy..he didnt bring fire like ive seen in the past but he did bring enough