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    brother

    Daybreak comes forth as im bathed in morning light
    Sun rays rain down like it says theres more to life
    than staying awake when you cant afford the night
    cause the cocaine migraines give distorted sight
    Twisted views and lack of dopamine will bring the morbid type
    Of misconstrued energy that dissolves to horrid fights
    With your friends and your family alone and forced to write
    About issues with mentality of disproportioned height
    This of course is my list of things im holdin tight
    in my brain to stay away cause playin safe's important like
    The people you keep close 'cause their support in strife
    is worth the world in gold cause it seems in short supply
    you were, are and will always be my oldest homie
    yet runnin from sobriety seems to be priority
    thought-about sayin sayonara but didnt do it solely
    for the fact that if i did, itd just be you with liquor pouring
    Seems your only mad, rarely do i see 4d
    Always making promises so much they seem phony
    To be honest its alot to grip another sad story
    worried that youll overdose go comatose before we
    go anywhere with music cause of the powder youve been snorting
    Remember back in school when we'd kick it playin tony
    hawks underground laughin loud and crackin jokes we
    Were never too concerned about these things that left you ghostly
    seemin so transparent arrogant like, "you dont know me!"
    Think about the people you affect when not controlling
    your own self image and speak derogatory
    Curses to the person feel deserves it without warning
    i guess all things pass when innocence is lost
    actin criminal, and literally bitter bout the cost
    of your own actions, satisfacton ant an option 
    when you take the low road, explode, noone can stop it
    Went from determination to lack of appreciation
    To standin face to face with me in need of mediation
    Takin all my statements as a type of instigation
    i cant sugar coat advice, if i could i would replace it
    remember recordin tracks on windows movie maker
    All in one take while in your moms basement?
    Before we had audacity let alone cubase when
    we didnt have jobs or any obligations
    it was all about the music, now im concerned that you will lose it
    you used to be intuitive but now you seem confused at
    The simplest little issue this aint a diss you should stop boozin 
    and bring it back to our childhood without the bad influences
    Last edited by iDeaLoGiK; December 16th, 2013 at 09:17 PM

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    Re: brother

    Decent piece man. Rhyme pattern was tight and flow was nice too. Vocab is decent. Its kind of a sad read, but hey life sucks and venting it out can release some of the tension. Overall I don't really have any crit.. Topic was on point through out, it was a decent read keep at it.

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