LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 3
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check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST (Pics due at check in)
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.
Don't forget 1st place prize goes to Verse of The Week.
Good luck @Alphabet @Ridiculous
Nice, I'm thinking 16?
word down for whatever brotha. g'luck lets make it dope.
I got 16, GL to you too.
Originally Posted by Butler, 2004
So you stole a line and used it twice? You fell hard, pimpin'.
Got a bite and re-use style that could reinvent the mouthguard business.
Consider me a hater when I drop on ya, I'll cater if you want drama.
It's obvious the archive is your getaway 'cuz you stay there more than Bots wana.
God of War seen me, said I should be teaming with the hardest crew.
Now it's Project May Ham, so I'll keep this pig in the freezer 'til the barbeque.
Yes we're the dope kids, you can bet I'm the spokesman.
It's just funny how you dubbed it PM 'n that's what you get all your votes with.
Don't make me make the chopper spit to off you quick, groupie.
I'd show Al a sin wonderland before he could figure out it's not a kids movie.
You find hogs in the street, but the finest broads are indeed spared.
Any bitch giving herself Tibet wants to jump off the highest possible peak there.
I'm supposed to believe you're rich 'n you sit in a pimped car?
Sorry but I can't give you any Credit after begging Spit for a Gift Card.
I saw your user title, but I have no doubt that you'll lose mate.
So if you got it in the bag, it's garbage and it doesn't go out until Tuesday.
16
Last edited by Salamander; December 13th, 2013 at 12:33 PM
yo @Ridiculous will be posting on friday/saturday might need the ext, busy w/ work and have two xmas parties to go to one on friday, one on saturday so i'm going to be pressed for time trying to write a verse with that going on as well as work.
so take ya verse down til then if ya want
All good, just drop when you can.
ext bro partyinh
project mayhem reppin? yeap...
our crew is homies, but the way u n gow been getting at me is on some bitch shit
the way u two've gotten together u'd get on ur knees for god n ur not even relgious
i'll drop this nerd. its the weekend faggot so fuck text u need to stop it jerk
my Saturday'll b spent at an xmas party..urs is spent on rb begging me to drop a verse
for me this match is an easy dub when everything u write is whack/so played
voters might say this battles cut throat til' I cut yours open w/ an exacto blade
I’ll lose when hell freezes over, which isn’t happening so I’m beating this maggot
U winning is as likely as Morydicai dropping a dope verse or dadiator not being a faggot
what i raps beauty so i have mad groupies, ne kid vibin ur shit is a whack noobie
cause ANYONE feeling the chronicles of ridic are as blind as vin diesel in that movie
I get dime bitches, thick fly ones. rid couldn’t even bang any chick I’ve shunned
ery girl I fucks a bombshell..every slut u fuck looks like her face was hit by one
I’m dapper as fuck, classy w/ style that ur not matching u chump, believe it son
If this battle ends up being anywhere close to a tie I’ll hang u from a tree w/ one
in chat u've bin gettin defiled n bruised.. u gettin sonned by iator is wild but true
the way Dad slapped u down so many times your trying to charge him w/ child abuse
Nice Battle here def worthy of the headliner title. Lots of personals too but at the end of the day I gotta go with Ridiculous his bars had a lil more sting to em and I'm not usually a big fan of quotes before a battle but his actually served their purpose here giving him an immediate edge with a nice opener. A ton of quotables in here, nice wordplay on both ends won't be surprised if this one comes down to the wire as far as votes go. Nice job by both bringin that fire back in the league this reminds me of the battles from old.
V-Ridiculous
So you stole a line and used it twice? You fell hard, pimpin'.
Got a bite and re-use style that could reinvent the mouthguard business.
You find hogs in the street, but the finest broads are indeed spared.
Any bitch giving herself Tibet wants to jump off the highest possible peak there.
I'm supposed to believe you're rich 'n you sit in a pimped car?
Sorry but I can't give you any Credit after begging Spit for a Gift Card.
vs
what i raps beauty so i have mad groupies, ne kid vibin ur shit is a whack noobie
cause ANYONE feeling the chronicles of ridic are as blind as vin diesel in that movie
I get dime bitches, thick fly ones. rid couldn’t even bang any chick I’ve shunned
ery girl I fucks a bombshell..every slut u fuck looks like her face was hit by one
those hit pretty solid imo. there were several bars from both sides that were right there, just needed a little more out of the concept or some better wording for them to really land. Ridics verse came across more polished and consistent. Alpha, you started off too slow. the first half of your verse killed you, looks like you wrote that last and rushed it.
vote Ridic
The Last Level
So you stole a line and used it twice? You fell hard, pimpin'.
Got a bite and re-use style that could reinvent the mouthguard business.
Consider me a hater when I drop on ya, I'll cater if you want drama.
It's obvious the archive is your getaway 'cuz you stay there more than Bots wana.
Yes we're the dope kids, you can bet I'm the spokesman.
It's just funny how you dubbed it PM 'n that's what you get all your votes with.
You find hogs in the street, but the finest broads are indeed spared.
Any bitch giving herself Tibet wants to jump off the highest possible peak there.
I'm supposed to believe you're rich 'n you sit in a pimped car?
Sorry but I can't give you any Credit after begging Spit for a Gift Card.
vs.
our crew is homies, but the way u n gow been getting at me is on some bitch shit
the way u two've gotten together u'd get on ur knees for god n ur not even relgious
I’ll lose when hell freezes over, which isn’t happening so I’m beating this maggot
U winning is as likely as Morydicai dropping a dope verse or dadiator not being a faggot
what i raps beauty so i have mad groupies, ne kid vibin ur shit is a whack noobie
cause ANYONE feeling the chronicles of ridic are as blind as vin diesel in that movie
cool battle. ridiculous was meaner and had nice nameplay... the dad punchlines are done for me now lol. wasn't feeling a lot of alphabet's punches but he had some good stuff. ridic takes this fairly easily tho
v/ ridiculous
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
Dope battle. @Alphabet
Word bro wish I didn't have to rush it, dope drop. Upping more votes
So you stole a line and used it twice? You fell hard, pimpin'.
Got a bite and re-use style that could reinvent the mouthguard business.
Consider me a hater when I drop on ya, I'll cater if you want drama.
It's obvious the archive is your getaway 'cuz you stay there more than Bots wana.
You find hogs in the street, but the finest broads are indeed spared.
Any bitch giving herself Tibet wants to jump off the highest possible peak there.
Vs
what i raps beauty so i have mad groupies, ne kid vibin ur shit is a whack noobie
cause ANYONE feeling the chronicles of ridic are as blind as vin diesel in that movie
in chat u've bin gettin defiled n bruised.. u gettin sonned by iator is wild but true
the way Dad slapped u down so many times your trying to charge him w/ child abuse
The number of quotable suggest this battle was close but I think ridiculous claimed the win quite comfortably. His verse was overall more aggressive and personal I feel..the opening line was one of my faves of the battle. The word play, wit and comedy was there, an entertaining verse. Alpha's verse seemed to lack some sting apart from the lines I picked out, also felt the lines were a tad long and could've been a little more concise. Also there were a couple played lines/lines I'm sure I've seen before like the bombshell and the knees for god line..these factors didn't help unfortunately. Still an okay battle though. Well done guys.
V/ridic
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