LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 3
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check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST (Pics due at check in)
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.
Don't forget 1st place prize goes to Verse of The Week.
Good luck @Sobe @Mordycai
Last edited by $pitacular; December 9th, 2013 at 12:52 PM
cool
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
bitch stop tagging me everywhere, ur wack and i don't want u around
plus ur verses are ignored like those threads u make in the lounge
i'm taking the crown. Mordycai's with his hands out, useless
here's some tips- something u don't know cuz that name sounds jewish
think u won't get beat full throttle once I kill this whole bottle?
kid u KNOW u fuckin suck when Dadiator's ur role model
i'm a cold hearted killer ur just a dummy pretender
here he is! the alleged Mondo Thug that nobody remembers..
that "gimme" match with professor nearly made u cry, geek
how could u be so fukin wack that u almost lose in a bye week?
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
bitch stop tagging me everywhere, ur wack and i don't want u around
plus ur verses are ignored like those threads u make in the lounge
i'm taking the crown. Mordycai's with his hands out, useless
here's some tips- something u don't know cuz that name sounds jewish
vs
nothing
I dont know mordy, like i can see it there but your not using it man or maybe ur trying to find your rhythm again but your "sting" isd lacking and your not really hitting him in my opinion, like the guillotine bar and shit it was just not really a diss at all...i dont know man it seems u got some rust or ur trying to figure out what style u want to use or how u want to write but u didnt do that this week my friend
sobe ur first 2 bars won
v/sobe
bitch stop tagging me everywhere, ur wack and i don't want u around
plus ur verses are ignored like those threads u make in the lounge
ok
i'm taking the crown. Mordycai's with his hands out, useless
here's some tips- something u don't know cuz that name sounds jewish
nice
think u won't get beat full throttle once I kill this whole bottle?
kid u KNOW u fuckin suck when Dadiator's ur role model
ehhhhhh
i'm a cold hearted killer ur just a dummy pretender
here he is! the alleged Mondo Thug that nobody remembers..
ehhhh
that "gimme" match with professor nearly made u cry, geek
how could u be so fukin wack that u almost lose in a bye week?
funny
VS
Kid you suck dick, I get an idea and instantly a page is written
Getting insight outta my lines is the only brain youll b getting
badly worded
Not even gonna come at your name cuz im sure its all been done
No one would taste this drink unless I poured out all his guts
nah
Cruising through this battle? you retarded kid just stop talking
Im the fog on your windshield dawg you better off walkng
nah
Wont last against me kid ill make sure you wont even get a breath in
Fuck a knockout, Spit gave me this guillotine to put his head in
wasn't feeling it no real punch
Ill stick to battling the fattest body parts on you and let ya neck win
Seven chins, cutting this bitches throat is the only time he be flexing
not a really good closer
kinda gotta agree with god of war but i felt his first bar had a good concept, just wasn't worded correctly. maybe if u changed the first line to "i get my dick sucked" instead of u suck dick. just didnt really make sense. no hate, sobe ez win.
v/sobe
bitch stop tagging me everywhere, ur wack and i don't want u around
plus ur verses are ignored like those threads u make in the lounge
Ouch
i'm taking the crown. Mordycai's with his hands out, useless
here's some tips- something u don't know cuz that name sounds jewish
Decent
think u won't get beat full throttle once I kill this whole bottle?
kid u KNOW u fuckin suck when Dadiator's ur role model
Ouch, good BOTM
i'm a cold hearted killer ur just a dummy pretender
here he is! the alleged Mondo Thug that nobody remembers..
Weak as fuck
that "gimme" match with professor nearly made u cry, geek
how could u be so fukin wack that u almost lose in a bye week?
Good
Satisfactory punchlines, a good rhyme schemes. Btw, can't wait till we have our "gimme" match in LLL. :-)
Versus
Kid you suck dick, I get an idea and instantly a page is written
Getting insight outta my lines is the only brain youll b getting
Nice
Not even gonna come at your name cuz im sure its all been done
No one would taste this drink unless I poured out all his guts
Poorly worded, had potential
Cruising through this battle? you retarded kid just stop talking
Im the fog on your windshield dawg you better off walkng
This is the corniest thing ever, no offense
Wont last against me kid ill make sure you wont even get a breath in
Fuck a knockout, Spit gave me this guillotine to put his head in
You were better off not dickriding Spit, nonetheless it was good
Ill stick to battling the fattest body parts on you and let ya neck win
Seven chins, cutting this bitches throat is the only time he be flexing
Concept was there, wording wasn't good, at all
Mordy your wording and lack of intense punchlines...killed ya.
Wording truly did hold you back Mordycai. Like the "guts" punchline. You should have said something involving you puncturing a can or something, hinting at you stabbing him. Idk
Sobe had basic stuff that ultimately were consistent enough, in my opinion, to clinch this win. I liked the Role Model line the best. Bar of the match.
Vote/ Sobe
Last edited by OG Maestro; December 13th, 2013 at 02:29 PM
I just read this...
Anybody who idolizes The Great Father sees the bigger picture. Being good at rapping isn't going to carry anybody here. Being a successful businessman who can manipulate and feeding people lines to make them believe what one wants them to believe... that is the way of The Great Father. At the age of 40, Moodecai will be more successful than the "good rappers" here.
The Great Father has spoken. I have also voided my right to vote in this thing, but what I spoke was needed. It was still more useful than anything the mods here will do with this thread this year.
Also... one out of every two battles has a Dadiator reference. Thanks for keeping the trend alive. I'm the most polarizing individual on this thing.
Last edited by The Great Father; December 13th, 2013 at 02:30 PM
bitch stop tagging me everywhere, ur wack and i don't want u around
plus ur verses are ignored like those threads u make in the lounge
vs.
Kid you suck dick, I get an idea and instantly a page is written
Getting insight outta my lines is the only brain youll b getting
alright, this was a weak battle. I give the edge to Sobe because I liked the above quote better than Mord's above quote. Both of you were making alot of statements with no actual punch. Sometimes this works, like Sobe's opener for example, but other times it does not work. I was expecting alot from Sobe, because he said some of my concepts were very weak this week, but it turned out the concepts he thought were weak are better than his whole verse this week. Although, Mordycai still didn't bring enough to beat him. Even the quote above from his verse wasn't that great, but it was decent. The rest of his verse was just statements pretty much, and it's the same for Sobe. Where are the punches? But either way, Sobe had the best statement, lol.
vote = sobe
i'm taking the crown. Mordycai's with his hands out, useless
here's some tips- something u don't know cuz that name sounds jewish
^^LOL
vs
Kid you suck dick, I get an idea and instantly a page is written
Getting insight outta my lines is the only brain youll b getting
^^ok i guess but really needed to be worded better
Overall this battle was underwhelming but sobe edged it with the better quotable and just came more personal with the rest of his bars compared to mordy. I think the rest of mor's verse was badly written and quite basic.
v/sobe
bitch stop tagging me everywhere, ur wack and i don't want u around
plus ur verses are ignored like those threads u make in the lounge
i'm taking the crown. Mordycai's with his hands out, useless
here's some tips- something u don't know cuz that name sounds jewish
vs
Kid you suck dick, I get an idea and instantly a page is written
Getting insight outta my lines is the only brain youll b getting
v/sobe.. rather easy win for him , mor didnt bring enough attack in his verse n mild hits dont win battles
Sobe won this pretty easy. Mordy I see what @God of War was talkin about now it seems like you gettin there just ain't quite fully polished ya skills yet. I'd say do a couple of FL battles and practice on some of your concepts and I can see you gettin some Dubs here pimpin
V-Sobe
Sobe Wins (3-0)
Mordycai Loses (1-2)
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