LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 3
10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST (Pics due at check in)
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.
Don't forget 1st place prize goes to Verse of The Week.
Good luck @FoulMonoply @Professor Frost
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match me with 16 lines bruh
16 it is.
I could tell by his name he ain't bringin heat wit them texts, he ain't a vet,
so watch him freeze since he even ain't even a threat
The day you beat mes the day beavis has sex, you lookin light boy
so i'm not cuttin off all my connects when im done servin this white boy(omfg)
you like noise, so when i clap like theres no beat for an acapella
these arms dance in front of me and dont think its the macarena!!!
Hes faker than barbies breasts, 0-2 so if he tries to hardly flex
'll smell the lye comin out his mouth like he got marleys breath!!!
I feel like i'm writing this verse in time square with your corny record
Cuzs thats about the amount of time i spent on it, FORTY SECOND(42nd)
you hardly reppin, his mom told me he calls the jakes
so We know he ain't a serial killer, cuz frosts a flake!
my value goin up like the cost of cake, you goin down like the abortion states
so you dont want no beef unless of course its steak
i know in school he carry sausage in bags,so of course he is mad
I dont usually argue wit professors but theres no debate frost is a fag
Last edited by Foul; December 13th, 2013 at 01:41 PM
You Little Bitch I roast, the Based God of Cookin'
My blind ass will sneak-peek you in the chin without Lookin'
Cave in your chest, your ribs will turn to pages; that's called Central Bookin'
Then I took your two daughters Brook & Lynn, made Lynn do Brook then Brook-lynn
I'll slice & dice ya body in 2 bags, 3 body parts bind-a-piece
I'll package em in a circle of 3 sections each, that's the opposite sign-of-peace
Geez, I'm no Christopher Wallace nor Christopher Columbus
I turn ya free properties to my properties, the true player comes runs this
Bullets walk around your block's board like I'm taking turns with gun clips
Ya childish games be on some silly square shit, I'll slant ya ass like how a rhombus sits
Shit, you wanna know what's true robbery? That foul monopoly runnin' free
You get your welfare check while I work, passing go for 2 hunna monthly
You must think you're real clever & funny?
Well let's see how many punchlines you take till' your nose runny
I'm sick of wasting these gold bars, no profit from 1 win, no cred money
On that note. You just got merked like a bitch. I feel like Ted Bundy
Much respect young blood.
Last edited by OG Maestro; December 13th, 2013 at 03:04 PM
cool. respect back
the fuck are you doing man???Originally Posted by Professor Frost
Go ahead and vote man, Spit cleans freeposting anyway. Just letting the respectable guy know that I enjoyed some of his verse.
but still bro ur swaying.....you know that shit is frowned upon.....
Swaying is telling him "Oh I liked this bar, but I heard that one from Ajsjssj versus sjsjsjsj battle." That's tipping favor. But w.e I'll edit it out.
LMaO @God of War lololol Do I really need to explain this vote...Frost, dawg u got a lot of work to do homey u might wanna hit the frontlines a lot more or do side battles on different sites, cuz your punches is outta control bruh...correct me if I'm wrong but I think you dissed yaself on your 1st Bar. "My Blind-ass will sneak-peek you in the chin w/o looking" ... WTF? and then the whole "Brook & Lynn/Brook-Lynn" thing...Once again no. No disrespect homey but you need some work keep practicin you'll get there.
V-FM for obvious reason
Hes faker than barbies breasts, 0-2 so if he tries to hardly flex
'll smell the lye comin out his mouth like he got marleys breath!!!
vs.
You must think you're real clever & funny?
Well let's see how many punchlines you take till' your nose runny
Both verses had bad wording here and there, and i really only liked 1 couplet from each, as seen above. I feel Foul's punch was a little harder, but Frost, you stay up, i see potential in your writing. Work on your concepts, wording, and polish your verses. Foul, i see potential in you as well. Keep it up!
vote = Foul
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