Nobody

[$The Goodness$]

Nobody love me the way you do,
treat me like a Queen.
Nobody kiss me the way you do,
your lip smooth & soft.
Nobody touch me the way you do,
wrap your warm hands around my waist.
Nobody treat me the way you do,
you comfort me day & night.
Nobody make feel the way you do,
Put a smile on my face when I'm unhappy.

[Stranger]

hall of fame this shit

[The Great Father]

You have never had the privilege of a romantic encounter with The Great Father, so this is poop. No! Your life is a frown.

[$The Goodness$]

Thanks Dia & just a Poem from off the top.

[SmokaJoka]

he was being sarcastic

it's an okay idea, but typical of a girl to write about love...do something different, try harder...don't post shit that's off the top if you want real criticism

[$The Goodness$]

okay, thanks.

[P. Mortuus]

Nobody love me the way you do
because I don't let them baby,
I'm not promiscuous and a slut.



ya ya off the top my head, hof pz out thank ma sponsors and all that jazz.

[SyNtHeSIS]

i don't honestly know what to say.. this has no real substance to it.. its regurgitated by every 15 year old girl with their first crush.. i mean its off the top of your head? thats nice.. but if your looking for someone to puss ride your drop its not going to be me. if your really looking to post poetry for criticism then put some thought behind it. this has emotion.. i can give it that.. but thats about as far as i can go. sorry.

[Q .]

yo ya'll just don't get this poem

this is yeezus in txt form, fuck ya'll

HOF, this the top poem of the year.

[Karaoshi]

Yo if my cousin's 4 year old daughter wrote this I'd be proud as punch!