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She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
Dead lol
that's how you feel son
ya future living space is a casket, my punches leave craniums rocked, split
he'll end up like Kim on camera cause it'll take only one shot to leave this bitch topless
His chick got no knockers, that's cuz she a dude, know stay chasin dem balls he pro soccer
I eat pussy and rappers, if pikachu anything it be a dick, and that's no shocker
decent battle.. knowp had a good concept but it could have been worded much smoother.. lls had original wordplay as far as I know but probably wasn't executed the best
i'd say lls edges this
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
vote!!
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
Source- The Great Father vs Illunatic. Written well before this.Originally Posted by Dadiator
See: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...980/index.html
Coincidence?.... or is it? The whole punch was based on that part that was oddly written very similar to The Great Father's opener...
played concept. it happens a lot. and it wasn't even the main concept of his punch
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
I vote for knowp..
simply because lls's bar was crazy stretched and choppy, on top of that pikachu concept is old as the fuck & the flip on it wasn't so smooth, I'd say if you would've shortened your opener and smoothed the end of the last bar it would of been dope...Knowp that concept was decent but you executed better & had a better read as far as wording's concerned even though it was worded too harshly but it was more effective in this case
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
2-1....
guess we gotta move on
lls wins
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
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