Pouring Rain [feat Kim]

[Endeva.]

[sc]https://soundcloud.com/endeva/pouring-rain-ft-kim-prod-by[/sc]

me and my Girlfriend filling in a sunday afternoon

[Daz]

to be honest, i can't really understand what you are saying. i need to see the lyrics

[Endeva.]

must be the accent lol, i'll post the lyrics in here

[Endeva.]

here's the lyrics Daz...



Can we pretend the tear drops,
falling from my eyes
are just pouring rain?
Coz I could really use a break right now
break right now
break right now
Can we pretend the tear drops,
falling from my eyes
are just pouring rain?
Coz I could really use a break right now
break right now
break right now

Aye, I could use a scheme to get iz really really rich
Cos im skint and cannit think how to fix the glitch
Now that the walls are Darkening, and collapsin’ an’ crackin’
And all the shits hit the fan, man I’m gasping
Standing on the podium, alone and stranded
Running blind in troubled times, my girls in sadness...
The final demands in, on ma phone contract
And I’m running low on ma mains electric and gas
Yes, that’s when you know it’s really getting cold
Dressing’ in old clothes, worn, warming up ya toes
Even frozen hands can’t stop my pen hand
Dev’s brand on the north shore withstanding all the slams
Fair play when the air’s grey, everybody hates
Waitin’ for the rain to go, and evaporate...
Pain fades back to white, it lifts an’ gets bright
Until then I’ll stay wrapped, till I manage to flip it right

Can we pretend the tear drops
falling from my eyes
are just pouring rain? (Pouring rain)
I could really use a break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)
Can we pretend the tear drops
falling from my eyes
are just pouring rain? (Pouring rain)
I could really use a break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)

Aye, somebody shake iz, back from the haze
Before im lost in fog, before it’s too late
Before im in tatters, lost sad and I’ve sank
In the quicksand dying, slipping down to my grave
Off track and thrashing in the Hell of it
Now’s the day to tackle an’ brave the elements
I’m guessing that if we can make the tears turn into rain...
Then maybe oh maybe I can crack all this pain
Before it swallows iz ill crawl back from the shame
And blast away the dodgy shit that’s drifting my way
Before I die, and get smothered by the flames
I’m a formulator just lost touch for a day!
Now I’m set to ditch...
Put an end to the glitch
Get back into pursuing...
The darkness lifts!
So here I stand and then again I say
Im hoping we can make the tear drops turn into rain

Can we pretend the tear drops
falling from my eyes
are just pouring rain? (Pouring rain)
I could really use a break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)
Can we pretend the tear drops
falling from my eyes
are just pouring rain? (Pouring rain)
I could really use a break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)
break right now (break right now)

I could really use a break right now [oh oh, oh-oh oh]
I-I-I could really use a break right now
[right now]
Tears tears tears to Pouring rain [oh, oh... oh oh oh oh oh]
I-I-I could really use a break right now]
[break right now]
A break a break right now
[A break right now]

[ILLunatic]

No player or is it my iPad?

[Endeva.]

must be your end ILL

[Puma1996]

Shaky quality... but you can hear it so I won't knock you too bad.. i'm sure with time you will either upgrade equipment or mixing ability. Anyway I wasn't really a fan of the young lady on the hook's voice or your voice... however I do feel your voice complexion helped give it an original type of feel at some point's. Lyric's are pretty average but they aren't bad. overall decent piece.

[K.B.]

pretty good man i liked it. u may have the wrong audience critiquing you though, because I'm assuming the accent's going to be difficult to understand for most on this website. Outside of that, one recurring theme you'll hear from most of the heads on this sight is how important quality is. And as unfortunate as it may be, it's just true. Quality goes a long long way with music. Anyway, I thought your girlfriend had a great voice. She kilt the chorus. The lyric were pretty solid too man. It was interesting knowing that you and your girlfriend collaborated on this together because that opens my eyes to a whole new potential meaning behind the song. As far as your parts go, lyrically I'm pretty impressed. You have a pretty well developed sense of flow, and you rhyme nicely. What stuck out most for me though was the way you incorporated these everyday realities and struggles into your verses, more specifically verse 1, but with great imagery because of the recognizable simplicity of examples for these struggles that you use.

Anyway, great stuff. I definitely would like to hear more from you. Just a word of advice though, the heavy accent you have--which should not be seen as a weakness but a strength you can use to write/rhyme--is tough to understand, and even tougher without great quality. The next track you post, just my suggestion, see if you can find a way to get better quality out of your recordings.

[Joel Venom]

the quality isn't much but i can understand some of the lyrics, i would try to fix up the mixing a bit that way we can understand you clearer. im reading the lyrics you have some good imagery but nonetheless fix up the quality to compliment your style.