The definition of a bitch

[Trema]

when i red your piece i had to drop sommit, it is what it is..

i cant believe ya rhymes would try to dis respect a chick
when you represent a bitch with the lips that would snitch
you aint sick your just shit n pissed that ya cant get clit
i love females just admit that now ya love dick
dropping ryhmes about how men are better looking
your looking for ya soulmate so dat he could get d pushing
i would love for this clown to retaliate to ma open mic
give me a reason to merk this little prick day or fucking night
i got no respect for the small minded things you said
your the kinda guy to beg for mercy-or play fucking dead
weak minded vision blinded der some girls dat would kill you
and half of the open mic members who red it didnt even feel you
you aint worth my time but your worth a line
i just got carried away and and merk you in all my ryhmes
next time you wanna drop study the word elevation
and stop thinking about u n ya dad penetrating

waaddupp!
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[Awt333]

I like it it's a message defending women against these hating messages.

[Time__.]

Fuck a bitch, they all come with a smile, and a shopping list.
see if you want to bag a clit, you have to pay for this and this
now tell me son, you must have had to scrimp and save to keep a chick,
dont tell me how you got the game, you just a lying ass trick.
see you tell the truth to hoes, and then they leave the fucking planet
frontin how they genuine, and dump your ass in the atlantic
now, ive never had a girl without the same stupid games
cause even if i like a bitch, i had to play them all the same.
the insercurity, cause they aint never come with simple purity
they want assurety, that someone pays for all their jewllery
and house them in a place they dont deserve or never worked for.
never claim a portion of it, they just stab it like a murder
i dont know how old you are, but you can keep defending women,
all im saying is, i hope you really really good at swimming -



hey good drop, thats my response -
by the way, i can crit your peice too you have a pretty good flow,
just use a little more word play, punchlines, and some heavy finishes to your rhymes. if you think the guy posts ridiculous, then ridicule him with clever jokes and insults.

my 2 cents