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    Question "Leah" (Reply...)

    yo....

    picture a pretty libyan woman,liberal and ex-les-b-ian
    chilling with the homies at home watching e-s-pn
    sipping lemondade,skin smooth as pomade,hair separated by five braids
    thinking about her sometimes i guess she got me mind trained
    a young hustlers with a goatee,named Horatio,he say"there the pretty lady go"
    asked for her number
    but turned him down like a loud radio
    me,lighting a ciggy,not liking my vision,fighting the dizzies,like the sprite,sipping right after the fizzing
    suddenly i found myself kissing,and jizzing,cerebellum tryna figure this business
    that night still a wonder,like the bread in ya kitchen,and i aint mind it at all
    hung out with her after that and i wasnt blinded at all
    i thought a real down lady i wouldnt gonna find it at all
    but now she say the boy is mine
    like a baby daddy with his son,listening to that Monica song
    i used to have more hoes than Harmonicas yall
    from the same place as jay electronica yall
    back to us,we turned our back to the world,when it backed out,from the night we was in a blackout,got kicked out,and got put back out
    hardships,this boat tough,hard to swallow,even if taken with
    a deep throat,reagan's snitch
    this the one i wanna be againg with
    outta the panties i could persuade her if
    she was swayed by the suede and if i grazed her lips
    but now theres a chance she might leave
    but if she dont,its chance i might breathe...

    so far ,so good?
    everyday's a questions will I live to the next? i feel a cold hand on the back of my neck.

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    Re: "Leah" (Reply...)

    yo man this place is dead come through here http://lyricalthreats.com/forum/

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    Re: "Leah" (Reply...)

    yo this drop was ayt i loved some of the ryhmes. you had some good lines in this piece. some of the lines in the middle of ya piece for me was a lil stretched but u got skills and i would like to read more from you. keep at it
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