You play it cool

[Kore]

I been on pluto, fighting for equal rights
then got lost finding the kore of the sun for a klondike
took a finger hike down a tramp's stamp
got hard and took off on that pus like a bike ramp
she loved it so much she bought me benz
you know I had to drive around and fuck all her friends
never knew how getting head could hurt your hands
till I gave my dick to a bitch wit bad sowed ins

But guess who's back you Been wonderin where I'm at
I heard your cries, so I came down for a chat
now the sky is black and its all for you
everbody else is freakin out, but you know im safe...
sO YOU PLAY IT COOL

[Scripter]

Hey Kore looks like we are suppose to leave feed now in Open Mic as well just a heads up

I thought this was alright although it does kinda jump around a bit. It needs some work keep upping and don't forget to leave feedback links

[Trema]

this was ayt. and i mean ayt

common dogg ya can do better man i sence the elevation in u.
keep at it and make ya pieces longer for real