Dope n Harmony (w/lyrics) - Tha Q

[Tha Q]

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Beat: Mr. Kooman Productions (always dope on the drums)
Hook: Q (3 layers with harmony for added effect)
Verses: 1,2,3 Q
Mixing: Q (I tried a new compressor setting this time out)

Concept: Defying the odds and achieving your purpose.

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Verse 1

I been tryna make it up, like a liar on the fly
Aye luck, I'mma need you take me higher, cuz my eye is on
The prize...plus, I'm entitled to my mind
I been tryna find my kind...ness, it left...
The buildin of a new era...carved in concrete
Imagery, remember he's a starvin, con...emcee
Is all a deed to this house of pain
Not a dime, not a drop, not a ounce of rain
And how do I explain these loud complaints
That imma sell-out like Concords, how deranged
And strange in my brain lies the gray matter
That may add up to a step up from a plain ladder
That ain't the matter, energy, interchangeable
That means the energy that matters, you should be savin', yo
So this case is closed, like my trip is all planned
...and I'm sick of demands for me to give it to chance
uh

Verse 2

Thoughts come, thoughts go, I won some, I lost some
U Want some awesome punches? I Blocked em...
I got a pair of Pradas, shit, I mean Dockers
If experience my door, then bitches, u come knock it
If the shoe don't fit don't stick...your foot in it
It wouldn't be a fit, if you couldn't, it shoulda been
Put a pen in my hands, I go D.A.Y.U.M.
Detrimental Always, Y'all Understand Mane...
Y'all Stan fans, damn, I'm an ampersand
I'm never satisfied, always goin "AND MAN"...
I'm not playin' man, disconnect controller
Strip club politics, nigga set the poles up
Vote me...meaning I...like a meeting
I am leading...never leaving heaven's greeting
I'm blessed all day...and all night, da same thing
This nigga all flight, the same plane...uh

Verse 3:

I been rockin' like the bizzoat, chalky waters dizzont
Phase me...niggas is lazy, I get so
Crazy, mainstream will never bait me
Political...maybe, but never critical
Ladies, n gentlemen, a gentle pen..may lead
To penitence, intense...intros and rabies
Lawd, he's been dope, been chose the 80s
808 codes, been froze way I blaze beats
Praise the streets like "Lord hammercy"
Hammer me down mean I just stand sturdy
Niggas, I ain't late, y'all are just 'gy' early
Rise early, I will 'touch down' Mike Irving
Slightly irk me...n I will fight dirty
Mud make a mud pie...dey stuck in lies
You fuckin' blind? well try focusin on I
Bye foes, go in get bi-focals if you blind



Hook: 2x
I'm not small, I'm not little
Not at all, I'm not a quitter
I'm tryna ball like Lebron, guilty
As charged, I need acquittal, my God

Harmonize with: Naaaah, Naaah
Layer Harmony with: Da da da da dahhhh



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[I-M-E]

pretty good track man, hook was good, i didnt think it was something super special tho, the "da da da da" sounded kidna corny on this...flow was smooth, lyrics are pretty nifty haha delivery fits the atmosphere the beat creates.

[Fo Twenty]

This is dope bro, all around I really like this track. I really feel the hook, I'm not 100% sure why, it just catches me, it's def catchy. I like the harmonies alot. Your flow is nice on the verses to, a nice way of going about it. However I do feel like the verses could have a little more presence, not in your delivery but just in the mixing. They felt a little sunken, which is something I always have a problem with, but honestly, this is definitely a dope drop!

RTF?
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[Tha Q]

Yea...combo of older laptop wit less processing power...and a room that echoes like the grand canyon

Appreciate da feedback