Nature's Clense

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It came on after someone yelled from the abyss
Her kiss to man

I was told that the epicenter was in the Pacific
Where gifted geologist predicted to touch us in 3 hours
Reports of 40 foot waves devouring ships like tic tacs
Inact the revoking to the sea
Her douche to the impurities

Standing at the highest point possible
Infallible recognition to the weight of the situation
Gave dissapation to life, limb and liberty
She deliberately move what could give to take away
Feeling invaded
Making it possible for destruction to arise
And I see it come

It crashes the beach scattering bungalos like legos
Taking innovation and ingenuity to the recycle bin
Forge and mortar was weakened and dismembered
I look to my new home amongst the heavens....


Next: Hurricane


(please read in order)Recognition/Tsunami/Hurricane/Earthquake/Serenity

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[ItoldUIwasFat]

this here was def better than the first one. though i liked the progression of the last one i felt this was more clean and clear with a much smoother flow to it. the lines breaks here are much better maybe thats why the flow is better, no choppy bumps yah know. but i def liked this story better than the first, more vivid imagery to your words plus the overall feel to this feels whole, nothing missing...enjoyed this one