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Smoothtung
Illustrious.
12 lines
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this is my check
U droppin first?
drop whenever you're ready before the time limit, i'll do the same
Check...
I paint luscious illustrations in 'illustrious' fashion;
Wondrous alitteration with industrious rapping.
You're gutless acting..
You ain't fun or wise - ill smak that 'backwards'
You're not 'front lines' but your lines-front rapper...
I'm much faster - a bragger, but swagger says its worth it.
You're haggard - not a master crafter. Grasp for work ethic.
In fact listen, your lines are straight up - ill leave them sideways
An 'shells' will turn back like the seas when the tides change....
This faggot is a fake rapper & he's clearly not a boss
He couldn't be found "red hot" inside boiling pasta sauce
Stop posing like you're a nasty emcee becuz ur not one
Eating Tabasco is the only time peeps be feeling a hot tung
Stop son, i'll pop with shot guns repeatedly and effortless
And that reminds me a lot like when i usually sex your chicks
I'm the best at this while you blow and suck like ur giving head
Your verse has no signs of life it's almost like the living dead
Your mom packing you a lunch is the only time you be gettin bread
Twist ya leg, drink a keg and i could still fill you with the lead
You're a pussy ass mutha fucka, skills compared to some glaciers
Cold ass flows making niggaz in this forum need wind breakers
yo good verse, lets get some votes.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=465615
um can i just say that illustrious wins becuase the other guy didnt have one punchline or a diss in either of his verses?
EVEN THOUGH ILLUSTRIOUS VERSE WAS BARELY BETTER lol
.. im back
This faggot is a fake rapper & he's clearly not a boss
He couldn't be found "red hot" inside boiling pasta sauce
Stop posing like you're a nasty emcee becuz ur not one
Eating Tabasco is the only time peeps be feeling a hot tung
Stop son, i'll pop with shot guns repeatedly and effortless
And that reminds me a lot like when i usually sex your chicks
I'm the best at this while you blow and suck like ur giving head
Your verse has no signs of life it's almost like the living dead
Your mom packing you a lunch is the only time you be gettin bread
Twist ya leg, drink a keg and i could still fill you with the lead
You're a pussy ass mutha fucka, skills compared to some glaciers
Cold ass flows making niggaz in this forum need wind breakers
lol the only verse dat was remotely hot to me...smoothtung isnt a battler he is a song writer...kool but dis RB playa
W=ILL
Illustrious got this pretty easily imo, he made disses and had a few punches while the other dude was just rhyming emptily without dissin his opponent...no hate though....
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upp will get 3rd link later
V/ ill
Basically, he had attempts which gave him the win. Smooth's verse was more of like a freestyle, it wasn't much of a battle verse.
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