Joel Venom - Dot Dot Dot (Official Music Video)

[Joel Venom]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...372/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...012/index.html

[YOUTUBE]yUMthqNKEGY[/YOUTUBE]

Enjoy...

[Grizzlybeatz]

nice video, big ups big homie. Hit me up if you wanna collab

[Joel Venom]

thanks man, and i'm a check out your rocbattle as well homie.

[Dante_NY]

I liked the track you dropped, the beat was on some young money ish and you dropped the flow right for the beat. your delivery was all good you had it going in there. lyrically i wouldn't say it was super strong, but it had some one liners in there like the 'no brainer - braces' line. You came correct for this type of track. so all in all i feel like you did nothing wrong,
however i feel maybe some flow switch ups would have set this track off a bit more (like corey gunz in that wayne joint) n perhaps a few more stand out lines..however thats me being picky..I was feeling the joint..

as regards the video, im feeling the quality of the camera and like that u added a visual..right choice to do a video for this track in my opinion

btw i checked out the intro to your tape the "no muslim intro", flow was dope..im just wondering why you named it that? lol anyway dude could you please rtf:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...31#post8355431

thanks

[Joel Venom]

thanks for checking it out dante, and i named that one song no muslim because it's the ham beat lol.

[Dante_NY]

loool oh no doubt but yo when u get time bro id like to know what u think about my joint i put the link in my response

[Joel Venom]

^wordage, yeah i just left feed on your song. my man.

[00Razor00]

This track is hot man, you went in for real. The beat is ill and your flow matched it well. There were a lot of dope lines, I was epsecially feelin the "Vibrator" line though. The fact you made a video for it as well was even better, the editing and quality was nice. Hopefully you're next video will take it to an either higher level. Keep it up.

9/10

[DeathChamberz]

Video quality looks good but video doesn't match the song. Song has so much energy and the video is so laid back The screen flips were ok

Track was nice but could do with some breaks maybe a chorus or some type of breakdown in the middle

Good overall track

Refeed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...912/index.html

[J-min]

i enjoyed thi homie was a nice ride for sure the video was dope although i have to agree with DC with the lack of energy in the vid compared to the track!!!

good drop bro

rtf http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...306/index.html

[Rey]

video looks clean, you remind me of pap, ha, voice wise, just got a hint of it from this, never noticed before, you already know, did your thing.

[Joel Venom]

word rey you know what it is get at me for a track man we gotta link up.

[Well Versed]

ha thats was nice dude...but ur video does lack energy...lyrics were dope...my favorite line was def that PARANORMAL ACTIVITY one...cool shit homie...

[whyyoudumb?]

smooth man good shit. nice production. didnt really like the video but the music is good.

[Joel Venom]

thanks appreciate it you guys!