Started almost a year ago, did this shit about 4 months ago, not my finest work but just seeing what you retards think
Started almost a year ago, did this shit about 4 months ago, not my finest work but just seeing what you retards think
just changed my name to Wayward from Tha Hetero 1
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Last edited by Wayword; December 10th, 2011 at 11:28 PM
I listened to the song and I liked it for support on youtube. The lyrics and the flow of the song is alright but I think what would make it better is if you put a lot more emphasis on your lines to make it seem like the have more depth. It just sounds like you've rapped with the same tone for a while through out the song. Can you critique my song? I posted it up on here called "Learning how to Rap, Critique Song"
getting better
nice flow some good multis in there
cool beat, cool flow, i like it.
good beat choice...def need more emotion still in the vocals, maybe learn your verse more before spitting it? that way you can sound more natural instead of forced...flow is getting there
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thanks for the feed, appreciate it
Issue is that it sounds like you are totally reading the verse and not rapping hardly and changes in your voice tone know shows of emotion changes in pitch or speed or anything. But you were on beat
your writting is interesting
refeed
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cool beat choice. sick lyrics as well. flow isnt bad but will improve. the first thing i noticed when you started spitting was your mic presence. you sound bored or tired. throw some energy in there. mic quality seems horrid as well. but i see a lot of potential in you dude. i like the style you choose and rock. keep it up dude.
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you have talent man keep doing what you do, i like the beat aswell. just improve a bit on the flow on some parts but the overall is pretty good
RTF
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Last edited by itsToby; December 9th, 2011 at 11:53 PM
the beat is alright you got your flow and lyrics down u need to work on your delivery and presence though you definitely got potential return the favour checkout my track http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...147/index.html
really appreciate it, all feed has been returned, keep it comin'
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