Knoxville (2-5) vs #PrimeTime (2-4) KNOX WINS

[Knux]

LLL Season 15- Week 11

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
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[KnoXville.]

Quick 10.

Dude gets stuck with vets. Any highlights you've had in the past was luck at best,
So if anybody had something to say bout' primenews, its usually on how bad he sucks at text.
Jeffery your not dominant not even from under. style is so sick i vomit with wonder,
With a record of 2-4 it'd take 2 seasons of no showers just for you to polish those numbers.
Ruin your job'll just Splatter For You. Catch u in retail all Battered n' Bruised,
Cuz you've been in enough boot matches this season that'll make timberland redesign patterns for shoes.
Hope your ready boss. You've failed every important battle & ur record has the steady cost,
Cuz if there's anything funny about primetime, its usually the audience that laughs at him after every loss.
with that many post i bet your sex life isnt validated,
This bitch been typing & loseing for so long his keyboard keys are already fucking faded.

[#PrimeTime]

LOL @ this fool-made pussy nigga

No one thinks ur dope, yet I laugh at u whenever u perform
Yet u got no medals, nothin, n uve been battlin since before i was born
Nigga please, we get it really, ur givin up, slowin ur talents for the new year
all he wants for christmas is somethin to champ, like toke bringing back LLL jr.
Im a nigga fam. I ain't a racist, fuck politics i ain't bi-partisan
ur own countrymen move away from u like pujols declinin to sign wit the marlins
This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral
on BBE u got released from a league u was modding (<-*Dead*)
so to redeem urself u pic battled miracle but couldnt keep urself from sobbing[1]

[1] = pic battled miracle but in the pic he was cryin....i think

[Evolve]

This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral
LOL I laughed...

vs

nothing that really stood out to me, Sorry.

Okay battle here guys. Knoxville it seemed you half-assed this. Im sorry, but I didnt really feel any of your verse. I mean you definatley know how to structure a bar but I found it a little bland, like there wasn't much sting atall. Thats just my opinion though. Prime that quote I gave you actually made me laugh for some reason lol. I think your verse had a few misses but you did enough to get the win..

V/Primetime

[Rapstyles]

Dude gets stuck with vets. Any highlights you've had in the past was luck at best,
So if anybody had something to say bout' primenews, its usually on how bad he sucks at text.
-Decent.
Jeffery your not dominant not even from under. style is so sick i vomit with wonder,
With a record of 2-4 it'd take 2 seasons of no showers just for you to polish those numbers.
-No.
Ruin your job'll just Splatter For You. Catch u in retail all Battered n' Bruised,
Cuz you've been in enough boot matches this season that'll make timberland redesign patterns for shoes.
-Lol.
Hope your ready boss. You've failed every important battle & ur record has the steady cost,
Cuz if there's anything funny about primetime, its usually the audience that laughs at him after every loss.
-Not really feeling this.
with that many post i bet your sex life isnt validated,
This bitch been typing & loseing for so long his keyboard keys are already fucking faded.
-Weak.


Vs.


No one thinks ur dope, yet I laugh at u whenever u perform
Yet u got no medals, nothin, n uve been battlin since before i was born
-Weak here.
Nigga please, we get it really, ur givin up, slowin ur talents for the new year
all he wants for christmas is somethin to champ, like toke bringing back LLL jr.
-Not feeling this
Im a nigga fam. I ain't a racist, fuck politics i ain't bi-partisan
ur own countrymen move away from u like pujols declinin to sign wit the marlins
-Aight.
This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral
-OK.....
on BBE u got released from a league u was modding (<-*Dead*)
so to redeem urself u pic battled miracle but couldnt keep urself from sobbing
-Weakish personal.

Man idk Jeff you seemed to've goofed around a little here and I think Knox got this.. I was just feeling him a tad more. I know you can do better man. That jackass oral line coulda been better but you made it sound real simple. Marlins line may have been ur best but it wasnt all that great. v.KNoxville.

[Lethargic]

This basically came down to Jeffry's "Jackass oral" punch and Knoxville's "Primenews/suck at text punch". I wasn't really feeling any of the other punches in either verse beyond those.

I might've given it to Jeffry if his setup was better, but Knoxville had the cleaner punch overall.

Vote - Knoxville

[Bongkers]

Dude gets stuck with vets. Any highlights you've had in the past was luck at best,
So if anybody had something to say bout' primenews, its usually on how bad he sucks at text.

vs.

This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral


aight battle.. both need to step it up a bit.. pretty close here but i got knox edging out he was a lil more creative with his bars here

V- knox

[Vinzr]

Dude gets stuck with vets. Any highlights you've had in the past was luck at best,
So if anybody had something to say bout' primenews, its usually on how bad he sucks at text.

vs.

This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral


To me...those were the only two lines worth mentioning and actually both werent too bad but I gotta go with Knox...just seemed he had the better verse

v/ knox

[The Gwapfather]

Dude gets stuck with vets. Any highlights you've had in the past was luck at best,
So if anybody had something to say bout' primenews, its usually on how bad he sucks at text.

vs


This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral


OVERALL:

Decent battle here, Knox needs to work on wording a bit more, just deliver his punches better, not bad though.. Jeff has some solid ideas, but doesn't capitalize on them enough, it's almost like you just think of a concept and slap the bar together real quick instead of really thikin and bringing the punch to it's full potential, I got Knox BARELY taking this battle..


VOTE: KNOXVILLE

[Meters]

Dude gets stuck with vets. Any highlights you've had in the past was luck at best,
So if anybody had something to say bout' primenews, its usually on how bad he sucks at text.
(eh, okay)
Jeffery your not dominant not even from under. style is so sick i vomit with wonder,
With a record of 2-4 it'd take 2 seasons of no showers just for you to polish those numbers.
(not feeling)
Ruin your job'll just Splatter For You. Catch u in retail all Battered n' Bruised,
Cuz you've been in enough boot matches this season that'll make timberland redesign patterns for shoes.
(hah, pretty cool)
Hope your ready boss. You've failed every important battle & ur record has the steady cost,
Cuz if there's anything funny about primetime, its usually the audience that laughs at him after every loss.
(coulda been worded better)
with that many post i bet your sex life isnt validated,
This bitch been typing & loseing for so long his keyboard keys are already fucking faded.
(nah)

Vs.


No one thinks ur dope, yet I laugh at u whenever u perform
Yet u got no medals, nothin, n uve been battlin since before i was born
(eh)
Nigga please, we get it really, ur givin up, slowin ur talents for the new year
all he wants for christmas is somethin to champ, like toke bringing back LLL jr.
(heh, ok)
Im a nigga fam. I ain't a racist, fuck politics i ain't bi-partisan
ur own countrymen move away from u like pujols declinin to sign wit the marlins
(not bad)
This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral
(heh, not bad)
on BBE u got released from a league u was modding (<-*Dead*)
so to redeem urself u pic battled miracle but couldnt keep urself from sobbing
(not great)

I got Prime taking it but just a little bit i think

[Joe Boston]

knox

Dude gets stuck with vets. Any highlights you've had in the past was luck at best,
So if anybody had something to say bout' primenews, its usually on how bad he sucks at text.
lol nice setup good flip on finisher with np reference

Jeffery your not dominant not even from under. style is so sick i vomit with wonder,
With a record of 2-4 it'd take 2 seasons of no showers just for you to polish those numbers.
wasnt feeling setup but finisher was ok couldve flipped a little better due to wording

Ruin your job'll just Splatter For You. Catch u in retail all Battered n' Bruised,
Cuz you've been in enough boot matches this season that'll make timberland redesign patterns for shoes.
lol this concept was good on the finisher

Hope your ready boss. You've failed every important battle & ur record has the steady cost,
Cuz if there's anything funny about primetime, its usually the audience that laughs at him after every loss.
lol but the wording coulda been polished a bit better

with that many post i bet your sex life isnt validated,
This bitch been typing & loseing for so long his keyboard keys are already fucking faded.
nah the setup and finisher didnt seem relevant to me

Jeff

No one thinks ur dope, yet I laugh at u whenever u perform
Yet u got no medals, nothin, n uve been battlin since before i was born
this wasnt bad but wording hurt ur finisher


Nigga please, we get it really, ur givin up, slowin ur talents for the new year
all he wants for christmas is somethin to champ, like toke bringing back LLL jr.
lol this was cool nice concept good flip off the setup



Im a nigga fam. I ain't a racist, fuck politics i ain't bi-partisan
ur own countrymen move away from u like pujols declinin to sign wit the marlins
not bad man seeing the finisher was a recent event so cool concept but setup coulda been worded a tad better


This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral
ok lol best bar here

on BBE u got released from a league u was modding (<-*Dead*)
so to redeem urself u pic battled miracle but couldnt keep urself from sobbing[1]
nah not too good attempt at personal

V/Knox

I think Knox had some better concepts the timberland line alone was real funny and a good concept. Jeff had a couple funny lines but then some wording issues which hurt a bit along with a couple misses. His jackass oral line seemed to be the only one that hit too me.

[Flash]

Ruin your job'll just Splatter For You. Catch u in retail all Battered n' Bruised,
Cuz you've been in enough boot matches this season that'll make timberland redesign patterns for shoes.

vs.

This fool not made for tv fuck this what cat whos abnormal
see i live near knoxville, u jus give that guy from jackass oral

good showing from jeff but i think ricantheoryz had a better verse overall cuz he almost made me quote that primenews line but i coudn't find anything else from jeff.

v-ricantheoryz

[Alphabet]

both should get the boot tbh but i have knux getting the slight edge for having more thought out concepts.

[KnowP]

Ruin your job'll just Splatter For You. Catch u in retail all Battered n' Bruised,
Cuz you've been in enough boot matches this season that'll make timberland redesign patterns for shoes.


vs



nada



PT's punches as well as Knox's were very vague and basic. nothing really hit except that timbo line i quoted. that was funny.


v. knox

[Knux]

Knoxville wins