Vinzr (4-6) vs Meks (2-0) MEKS WINS

[Knux]

LLL Season 15- Week 11

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
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[Vinzr]

check

[Meks.]

here

[Vinzr]

Your motto in life “fuck kids”…cause u frustrated u aint ever get fucked
You get creepy, crawly at night…& we’d think your that annoying bed bug
Trying to lead your pack by going’ “Leggo, lets chill son!”
But forget tryna play leader and shit with ‘em when you cant even build one
Your at home watching the grapples on UFC and sippin’ that bud light
You want the opportunity they are given, so now you start questionin if ur bud might
You just got back into battling…and already you claim your the best at that?
But for the record…I’ll give you a 1… to make 2-1 like you’re playing black jack
Now you spit whack rap, a black cat, you diseased infected lab rat…
You ran the circuit and had your time, and now it’s time for you to back track
Off a cliff…? Nah, off my dick, Cause I know ‘Vinzr’ been on your Google search…
Your following me surf the net - net stalking and & screaming like a poodle’s birth
You’d rather be drawin’ doodles first cause first grade teaching suits you well
& wearing clown suits as a job really does pay off as a joke to all those dude you tell

14.

[Meks.]

lol @ disease infected rat

see this dudes trash, that's why his ass and the fuckin print on my shoes match
but not cuz I kick it.... cuz after this loss he'll be fit in a boot match
"Ga'day mate!" ur accent's wack.. so it's help in speakin that u need
but I get it. he's from down under..... what's considered decent in the league
u get eaten by vets, but that's irrelevant tho I happen ta spoke it
truth be told... u wouldn't be on a quotable list if u were battlin' Token
kids need ta get def now, but in the end, ur music sadly emerged thru
cuz ur a net let down like the end of a Go Daddy commercial
from the brink it's been known, ride the wave`a battle usin ink ta just pwn
but when Vinzir goes ta rock the mic he'll just sink like a stone
i dont see u've bitten, but u should ta leave a legacy in case u die
prolly givin me dirty looks... but I'm not sure how u plagiarise
prolly at comic-con, runnin around gettin autographs and ur a rapper to boot?
fuck. this nerd prolly keyed his verse in a BattleStar Galactica suit

[Evolve]

Your motto in life “fuck kids”…cause u frustrated u aint ever get fucked
You get creepy, crawly at night…& we’d think your that annoying bed bug

vs

see this dudes trash, that's why his ass and the fuckin print on my shoes match
but not cuz I kick it.... cuz after this loss he'll be fit in a boot match
"Ga'day mate!" ur accent's wack.. so it's help in speakin that u need
but I get it. he's from down under..... what's considered decent in the league

Once again. Decent battle here. Vinzr you dropped decent my dude. It just seemed like you had the concepts but your execution was slacking a little. That Blackjack bar could of been decent if you had found a way to construct it so it had more personal effect against Meks, just my opinion though. That creepy, crawly bar was quite fresh. Meks, consistancy here, you came out and did your thing, not too much negative things I want to say about the verse. I've seen the boot match bar before, but yours had a fresher flip to it and I felt it hit quite well... Overall decent battle fella's no hate... but...

V/Meks

[#PrimeTime]

cant break this down bar by bar cuz im mobile but ima try my best votin...

Trying to lead your pack by going’ “Leggo, lets chill son!”
But forget tryna play leader and shit with ‘em when you cant even build one
Your at home watching the grapples on UFC and sippin’ that bud light
You want the opportunity they are given, so now you start questionin if ur bud might
You just got back into battling…and already you claim your the best at that?
But for the record…I’ll give you a 1… to make 2-1 like you’re playing black jack

vs.

u get eaten by vets, but that's irrelevant tho I happen ta spoke it
truth be told... u wouldn't be on a quotable list if u were battlin' Token
kids need ta get def now, but in the end, ur music sadly emerged thru
cuz ur a net let down like the end of a Go Daddy commercial
from the brink it's been known, ride the wave`a battle usin ink ta just pwn
but when Vinzir goes ta rock the mic he'll just sink like a stone
i dont see u've bitten, but u should ta leave a legacy in case u die
prolly givin me dirty looks... but I'm not sure how u plagiarise

vinzr dropped pretty well, meks dropped well too. some of ur rhymes didn't fully rhyme, maybe that was jus me i dunno.. but both punches landed, meks i think landed harder in this one, n jus came overall better wit the consistency in this 1, no hate.

v - mex.

[Lethargic]

I wasn't really feeling Vinzr's verse all that much. There was a lot of potential with the concepts, but the execution just killed a lot of the punches. Meks first two bars pretty much ended the battle and he was fairly consistent the rest of the way through. No hate to Vinzr, but this was a pretty one-sided battle.

Vote - Meks

[Bongkers]

Your motto in life “fuck kids”…cause u frustrated u aint ever get fucked
You get creepy, crawly at night…& we’d think your that annoying bed bug
cool concept, wording ruined it though
Trying to lead your pack by going’ “Leggo, lets chill son!”
But forget tryna play leader and shit with ‘em when you cant even build one
not a bad concept but again.. wording issues
Your at home watching the grapples on UFC and sippin’ that bud light
You want the opportunity they are given, so now you start questionin if ur bud might
ehh nah
You just got back into battling…and already you claim your the best at that?
But for the record…I’ll give you a 1… to make 2-1 like you’re playing black jack
ehh not bad bad..
Now you spit whack rap, a black cat, you diseased infected lab rat…
You ran the circuit and had your time, and now it’s time for you to back track
too basic flow was hot though lol
Off a cliff…? Nah, off my dick, Cause I know ‘Vinzr’ been on your Google search…
Your following me surf the net - net stalking and & screaming like a poodle’s birth
too random, no build up
You’d rather be drawin’ doodles first cause first grade teaching suits you well
& wearing clown suits as a job really does pay off as a joke to all those dude you tell
nah


vs


see this dudes trash, that's why his ass and the fuckin print on my shoes match
but not cuz I kick it.... cuz after this loss he'll be fit in a boot match
cool
"Ga'day mate!" ur accent's wack.. so it's help in speakin that u need
but I get it. he's from down under..... what's considered decent in the league
decent
u get eaten by vets, but that's irrelevant tho I happen ta spoke it
truth be told... u wouldn't be on a quotable list if u were battlin' Token
seen this concept too many times
kids need ta get def now, but in the end, ur music sadly emerged thru
cuz ur a net let down like the end of a Go Daddy commercial
meh
from the brink it's been known, ride the wave`a battle usin ink ta just pwn
but when Vinzir goes ta rock the mic he'll just sink like a stone
lol, okish
i dont see u've bitten, but u should ta leave a legacy in case u die
prolly givin me dirty looks... but I'm not sure how u plagiarise
nah this was forced.
prolly at comic-con, runnin around gettin autographs and ur a rapper to boot?
fuck. this nerd prolly keyed his verse in a BattleStar Galactica suit
lmao. aight.


Vinny had some cool concepts.. but the wording was just bad.. all round.. I keep saying it man you gotta fix it before you can improve cause you have the concepts but you can't deliver em yet.. Meks.. nothing crazy from you but enough for the win.

V - MEKSICAN

[Knux]

Sorry Vinz, nothing did it for me this time around, im always rooting for u bro, waiting for u to kill shit but this time it just wasnt ur best at all man..

vs

see this dudes trash, that's why his ass and the fuckin print on my shoes match
but not cuz I kick it.... cuz after this loss he'll be fit in a boot match
"Ga'day mate!" ur accent's wack.. so it's help in speakin that u need
but I get it. he's from down under..... what's considered decent in the league


Meks first 2 bars were ok/good .. the rest fell off IMO, the quote/token reference has been done to death, and the rock the mic flip just wasnt fresh enough of a flip on a super old concept for me to see it as dope... I was feeling Meks verse last week more.. maybe he just wrote for the opponent's level.. anyway Meks took this

V-Meks

[The Gwapfather]

I don't really have any quotables for this battle, no hate.. Meks was pretty solid through out, no huge misses or anything, but failed to bring any real haymakers, Vinzr has some cool ideas but falls short of flippin them well enough and/or the wording, Meks was just a bit more effective overall in this battle..


VOTE: MEKS

[Meks.]

well ya, i mean no hate to vinzir or nething cuz ur concepts are getting better u just need to tighten up and structure ur wording better, keep at it.... but i logged on and saw i only hadda write a lil bit to win, so i did lol

[Alphabet]

nothing

vs

see this dudes trash, that's why his ass and the fuckin print on my shoes match
but not cuz I kick it.... cuz after this loss he'll be fit in a boot match

both were somewhat lackluster, vinz wording killed his concepts and he could be a threat if he touched up his execution. meks did just enough to grab the w here.

[Meters]

I got same story as a lot of other heads here. Felt Meks first too bars and then it kinda felt off a bit but Vinzr never really got on here. Meks takes it for sure.

v- Meks

[KnowP]

Trying to lead your pack by going’ “Leggo, lets chill son!”
But forget tryna play leader and shit with ‘em when you cant even build one



vs



"Ga'day mate!" ur accent's wack.. so it's help in speakin that u need
but I get it. he's from down under..... what's considered decent in the league
i dont see u've bitten, but u should ta leave a legacy in case u die
prolly givin me dirty looks... but I'm not sure how u plagiarise



wording hurt vin in this match. coulda been closer but meks had the better shots.


v.meks