Cry (6-3) vs Killa Kami (1-0) KAMI WINS

[Knux]

LLL Season 15- Week 11

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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
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-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

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[Knux]

Your both deducted 5 votes for voting on 0 battles last week so it equals out, lucky

[Cody Nash]

Dope.. 12 lines?

[killa kami]

i don't have a lot of free time, but if you post 12 before me then i will match.

[Cody Nash]

I'm a diamond, so forever... here to show this fuck his last words
I could battle with 14 K's... & still never find a silver lining in a kam verse
kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"
this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch
so take a picture it'll last longer... this dog has had his day
if I look different off kam... thats likely cuz I'm not plowing a fist in his face
I heard he's a vet.. so maybe we'll find out on his next return..
fuck his misses, I made the kill shot... into a term I also use in bed with her
sendin' 12 lines from NC.. it'd seem the fags rattled
so shook to post himself, he used knux as a gps to find rapbattles


12

[Knux]

My mistake, i forgot to check my Inbox on NC.. Kami sent me his verse

Kami:

this fake's all talk so this is easy take'n; & i'm drunk, but it'll make this alleviated.
cause the way this 'congacs' on...if he says he'll win then he's the one inebriated.
they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.
i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.
this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.
his concepts are so off center his punches won't strike when placed in a drop; yet...
when u pitch an idea..ur drug free friends even walk & take the base in the process.
my punches'll cave in cry's face; & he'll remember every single bone my lines break.
cause my first impressions'll last forever, like a bitches perception of a blind date.

[Cody Nash]

edited in a 12th line

[Lethargic]

Cry

I'm a diamond, so forever... here to show this fuck his last words
I could battle with 14 K's... & still never find a silver lining in a kam verse

Maybe I'm being too analytical, but 14k is a gold measurement. Wording was kinda off too.

kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"

Not feelin that at all man :-/

this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch

hahaha, now we're talkin

so take a picture it'll last longer... this dog has had his day
if I look different off kam... thats likely cuz I'm not plowing a fist in his face

Nice

I heard he's a vet.. so maybe we'll find out on his next return..
fuck his misses, I made the kill shot... into a term I also use in bed with her

I got the misses referring to "kill"s woman, but this didn't hit hard for me at all.

sendin' 12 lines from NC.. it'd seem the fags rattled
so shook to post himself, he used knux as a gps to find rapbattles

Ehh, Okay

Killa

this fake's all talk so this is easy take'n; & i'm drunk, but it'll make this alleviated.
cause the way this 'congacs' on...if he says he'll win then he's the one inebriated.

It's pronounced Cone-yack...doesn't work

they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.

Okay

i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.

Niiice

this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.

Dope wordplay, okay punch

his concepts are so off center his punches won't strike when placed in a drop; yet...
when u pitch an idea..ur drug free friends even walk & take the base in the process.

So I get that you're saying his punches don't land in the setup. However, I'm failing to see where the line about crack ties in. I might be missing something, and if I am, my bad. This doesn't connect at all for me though.

my punches'll cave in cry's face; & he'll remember every single bone my lines break.
cause my first impressions'll last forever, like a bitches perception of a blind date.

Decent closer


Wow, I've got Kami taking this. I usually enjoy Cry's verses a lot, but I just wasn't feeling much of it at all this week. I thought Killa would really capitalize on that, but he really didn't. They both had two haymakers, and Killa's misses were hitting slightly harder then Cry's. I still almost went with Cry just because of that complete miss Kami had with the base line...but I'm not 100% positive I'm not missing something there. Fuckin tough decision. I think I've gotta go with which one hit harder for me as a verse as a whole instead of through the breakdown.

With that said...

Vote - Kami

[Bongkers]

I'm a diamond, so forever... here to show this fuck his last words
I could battle with 14 K's... & still never find a silver lining in a kam verse
doesn't hit for me
kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"
lol nice
this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch
decent
so take a picture it'll last longer... this dog has had his day
if I look different off kam... thats likely cuz I'm not plowing a fist in his face
cool idea but the wording ruined it for me
I heard he's a vet.. so maybe we'll find out on his next return..
fuck his misses, I made the kill shot... into a term I also use in bed with her
okish
sendin' 12 lines from NC.. it'd seem the fags rattled
so shook to post himself, he used knux as a gps to find rapbattles
meh



v



this fake's all talk so this is easy take'n; & i'm drunk, but it'll make this alleviated.
cause the way this 'congacs' on...if he says he'll win then he's the one inebriated.
bleh?
they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.
nah
i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.
nice.
this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.
dope concept not crazy about how you worded it though..
his concepts are so off center his punches won't strike when placed in a drop; yet...
when u pitch an idea..ur drug free friends even walk & take the base in the process.
idk
my punches'll cave in cry's face; & he'll remember every single bone my lines break.
cause my first impressions'll last forever, like a bitches perception of a blind date.
aight


decent battle. I felt both of you killed some of your bars with the wording.. maybe it's just me but I wasn't really feeling some of it.

on quotes i got

kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"

vs

i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.

non quotes I got cry being more consistent with a few decent bars.. I just wasn't getting wtf killa was talking about half the time.. call me dumb but you want your lines to be clean hitters not ancient hieroglyphics that need to be deciphered for days to get the full meaning..


V-Cry

[Rapstyles]

I'm a diamond, so forever... here to show this fuck his last words
I could battle with 14 K's... & still never find a silver lining in a kam verse
-Decent opener
kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"
-Funny.
this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch
-Not bad imo
so take a picture it'll last longer... this dog has had his day
if I look different off kam... thats likely cuz I'm not plowing a fist in his face
-Naa
I heard he's a vet.. so maybe we'll find out on his next return..
fuck his misses, I made the kill shot... into a term I also use in bed with her
-Lol..
sendin' 12 lines from NC.. it'd seem the fags rattled
so shook to post himself, he used knux as a gps to find rapbattles
-Weak imo.


Vs.


this fake's all talk so this is easy take'n; & i'm drunk, but it'll make this alleviated.
cause the way this 'congacs' on...if he says he'll win then he's the one inebriated.
-Not liking this so much
they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.
-Decent.
i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.
-lol
this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.
-Cool.
his concepts are so off center his punches won't strike when placed in a drop; yet...
when u pitch an idea..ur drug free friends even walk & take the base in the process.
Not feeling it.
my punches'll cave in cry's face; & he'll remember every single bone my lines break.
cause my first impressions'll last forever, like a bitches perception of a blind date.
-Decent..

This was actually pretty close imo.. I think both are even on nice bars / quotes but the misses from Kami weren't as 'good' as Cry's.

v/Cry, not by a lot though.

[Vinzr]

I'm a diamond, so forever... here to show this fuck his last words
I could battle with 14 K's... & still never find a silver lining in a kam verse
not bad
kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"
cool
this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch
ok
so take a picture it'll last longer... this dog has had his day
if I look different off kam... thats likely cuz I'm not plowing a fist in his face
ok
I heard he's a vet.. so maybe we'll find out on his next return..
fuck his misses, I made the kill shot... into a term I also use in bed with her
cool
sendin' 12 lines from NC.. it'd seem the fags rattled
so shook to post himself, he used knux as a gps to find rapbattles
meh

vs

this fake's all talk so this is easy take'n; & i'm drunk, but it'll make this alleviated.
cause the way this 'congacs' on...if he says he'll win then he's the one inebriated.
kinda weak
they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.
ok
i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.
cool
this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.
lol not bad
his concepts are so off center his punches won't strike when placed in a drop; yet...
when u pitch an idea..ur drug free friends even walk & take the base in the process.
meh
my punches'll cave in cry's face; & he'll remember every single bone my lines break.
cause my first impressions'll last forever, like a bitches perception of a blind date.
decent closer

Not a bad battle but i think Cry came here more consistent. It was fairly even but I think Cry had a more consistent verse where he didnt fall off as much.

v/ Cry

[Meks.]

I'm a diamond, so forever... here to show this fuck his last words
I could battle with 14 K's... & still never find a silver lining in a kam verse
didnt really connect imo... 14 k is gold too? lol
kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"
eh, wasnt feelin this one
this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch
decent here
so take a picture it'll last longer... this dog has had his day
if I look different off kam... thats likely cuz I'm not plowing a fist in his face
was feelin this
I heard he's a vet.. so maybe we'll find out on his next return..
fuck his misses, I made the kill shot... into a term I also use in bed with her
not bad
sendin' 12 lines from NC.. it'd seem the fags rattled
so shook to post himself, he used knux as a gps to find rapbattles
eh.. this didnt work

kinda surprised here usually u connect alot more and the witt is usually much more prominent and the punches usually sting, one of ur weaker verses here IMO.. but erybody has those days lol

kami

this fake's all talk so this is easy take'n; & i'm drunk, but it'll make this alleviated.
cause the way this 'congacs' on...if he says he'll win then he's the one inebriated.
coneyak/conyak heard it both ways, decent at best not awesome
they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.
eh, concepts been done but not a bad flip
i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.
ok
this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.
lol ok
his concepts are so off center his punches won't strike when placed in a drop; yet...
when u pitch an idea..ur drug free friends even walk & take the base in the process.
dope concept, complexity shows thru, punch wasnt hard as hell but witty nonetheless
my punches'll cave in cry's face; & he'll remember every single bone my lines break.
cause my first impressions'll last forever, like a bitches perception of a blind date.
not a bad close

well.. i've got kami here more consistent, connected more lines had more complex concepts and just overall took this one, cry just didnt show up and only had like 2 proper hits here and kami's verse had some nice witty shit and a few punches that were pretty nice.
v/ kami

[Knux]

this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch

vs

they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.
this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.

almost quoted kam's last bar... Kami has different wording so it could either help him or hurt him on RB.. I like his style and he hada couple of cool concepts here, specifically liked the bleacher line. Cry came abnormally weak here IMO, had trouble quoting tbh.. Some of Kami's shit was a bit wordy but his stuff still hit to me.. I have him taking this by a little

V_Kami

[The Gwapfather]

kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"

vs

i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.


OVERALL:

Not an amazing battle here, but it was okay.. both had issues with wording here n there, more so with Kam, Kam had some clever ideas that just were off the mark, Cry had some good ideas too but they weren't flipped well enough imo, battle was close for this reason, neither really hit or missed that hard, kind of mediocre through out other then the one quotable I got for each, had to read this a couple times to really pick a winner and I'm gonna go with Cry, by the hair on his mother's nipple..


VOTE: CRY

[Joe Boston]

TKC

I'm a diamond, so forever... here to show this fuck his last words
I could battle with 14 K's... & still never find a silver lining in a kam verse
this finisher threw me off cuz 14 k/silver lining concept didnt make sense to me no hate

kami's a fucking nerd, so thinkin' you scare me? never
said they might turn the US into a battlefield.. & he said "I like mw3 better"
ok lol cool concept

this mutt's gettin leveled with spits - disassembling dudes quick
ironic killa's off the chain.. and in reality he still resembles a loose bitch
ok not bad

so take a picture it'll last longer... this dog has had his day
if I look different off kam... thats likely cuz I'm not plowing a fist in his face
lol good finisher nice flip off np

I heard he's a vet.. so maybe we'll find out on his next return..
fuck his misses, I made the kill shot... into a term I also use in bed with her
lol

sendin' 12 lines from NC.. it'd seem the fags rattled
so shook to post himself, he used knux as a gps to find rapbattles
nah not feeling this

KAM

this fake's all talk so this is easy take'n; & i'm drunk, but it'll make this alleviated.
cause the way this 'congacs' on...if he says he'll win then he's the one inebriated.
ok good wp creative concept

they say how i finish my word'n is what helps me, & this big head faggot hates it.
so if i used a gun punch, the way my arms 'clotheslines' will leave u decapitated.
not bad concept on the wp

i'm a pimp, i hit dudes with prices to fuck bad bitches & for that I get a lot of love.
while the only time u've handled a 'prop position' is as stage hand in drama club.
ok nice wp


this wigger's the type to use peroxide on his hair like Em; so he's who bitches dread.
be4 a they'd lose their virginity under this bleacher, they'd dress out for gym instead.
lmao

his concepts are so off center his punches won't strike when placed in a drop; yet...
when u pitch an idea..ur drug free friends even walk & take the base in the process.
nice punch good concept nice flip

my punches'll cave in cry's face; & he'll remember every single bone my lines break.
cause my first impressions'll last forever, like a bitches perception of a blind date.
nice

V/Kam

I got Kam taking this i just overall thought his concepts hit better and i like his creativity he came with on the wp concepts. Cry also had a few hits but a few misses that hurt him. The Kam np reference line did hit hard though.
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