Pistol pete vs. Bloodlyricz

[BloodLyricz]

10 lines
Due 8 hours after check
No biting nd no crew votes

[BloodLyricz]

Check...

[B] dude don't want problems with me I'll KO'em like Barz
Any issues bitch I'll solve 'em grave or coffin with Starz
Dis dude wack is fuck why do he bother to battle
spit on him Donald duck But my saliva is like shrapnel

[Pistols Pete]

Check

[BloodLyricz]

dude don't want problems with me I'll KO'em like Barz
Any issues bitch I'll solve 'em grave or coffin with Starz
Dis dude wack is fuck, why do he bother to battle?
spit on him Donald duck But my saliva like shrapnel
Petey never owned a pistol man i think he to fragile
I'll leave you bloody wet you'll need more den towel
10 lines whatever you wanna do, you ain't a factor
Sociopaths? Da faggot in ya crew, who you answer?
I'm done with Plastic Pete, cause he worth my time
I won dis shit no need to sit and try analyze

Didn't try brainstorm but through sum tin together
I'll have my links

[BloodLyricz]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...678/index.html

[BloodLyricz]

dude don't want problems with me I'll KO'em like Barz
Any issues bitch I'll solve 'em grave or coffin with Starz
Dis dude wack is fuck, why do he bother to battle?
spit on him Donald duck But my saliva like shrapnel
Petey never owned a pistol man i think he to fragile
I'll leave you bloody wet you'll need more den a towel
10 lines whatever you wanna do, you ain't a factor
Sociopaths? Da faggot in ya crew, who you answer?
I'm done with Plastic Pete, cause he aint worth my time
I won dis shit no need to sit and try to analyze

da errors are fixed in this post go off this fixed one

[Pistols Pete]

He sport wigs, claim the girls call him pretty
Blood got hits, back shots while fags play wit his titties
U a broke hoe Poe tric, ya clothes come out the goodwill bin
And ya mom willingly sucked my dick, da bitch took the whole thang in
U gets no pussy hob goblin, so how u leave ya house creeping
Last time ya head touch a apple bottom, u was under a tree sleeping
When it comes to the streets, the other way the only thing kid's running
They call u King, cause ya life, the violence is missing from it
U soft fat fuck, play with bunnies, u don't post on corners
Not blood on ya keys just leftovers from ya jelly donut

[BloodLyricz]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=463814

[BloodLyricz]

votes!?? bump..

[Bos]

I'm give this one to Pete. Reason: He had better attempts, misses and an overall better verse. Most of Blood's lines were statements or didn't really hit hard. Try to work more on execution, cus your setups are good but they lack sting. This is for both of you: Make sure it rhymes or else ppl won't even bother reading it.

V/ P

[KnowP]

nothin


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U gets no pussy hob goblin, so how u leave ya house creeping
Last time ya head touch a apple bottom, u was under a tree sleeping


that apple bottom line wasnt hard perse, but funny. Pistol had the idea of throwin a decent punch but execution left them kinda stranded on an island. Blood has to study a few more good battles. not quite there yet when it comes to writing punches. flow was good, but nothin hitting.

v. pistol

[I-M-E]

lol da guy wit da good verse won dis shit right hurrr

v/pistol pete by a huge fucking mile
reason: other dudes verse was weakkk

i dont care if my vote counts because it wont matter

[.RainMan]

dude don't want problems with me I'll KO'em like Barz
Any issues bitch I'll solve 'em grave or coffin with Starz

Weak.

Dis dude wack is fuck, why do he bother to battle?
spit on him Donald duck But my saliva like shrapnel

A little bit better, but still weak.

Petey never owned a pistol man i think he to fragile
I'll leave you bloody wet you'll need more den a towel

fragile-towel is barely a rhyme, but the whole bar is decent.

10 lines whatever you wanna do, you ain't a factor
Sociopaths? Da faggot in ya crew, who you answer?

Weag, again.

I'm done with Plastic Pete, cause he aint worth my time
I won dis shit no need to sit and try to analyze

Really weak.

VS

He sport wigs, claim the girls call him pretty
Blood got hits, back shots while fags play wit his titties

Not a great punch, but decent.

U a broke hoe Poe tric, ya clothes come out the goodwill bin
And ya mom willingly sucked my dick, da bitch took the whole thang in

Weak.

U gets no pussy hob goblin, so how u leave ya house creeping
Last time ya head touch a apple bottom, u was under a tree sleeping

Still weak.

When it comes to the streets, the other way the only thing kid's running
They call u King, cause ya life, the violence is missing from it

Again, still weak.

U soft fat fuck, play with bunnies, u don't post on corners
Not blood on ya keys just leftovers from ya jelly donut

corners-donut not a great rhyme, but that's probably the best punch of this battle.

Vote Pistol Pete.

[#PrimeTime]

Pistol Pete took this wit better attempts at a punch line n overall better consistency, altho both need to elevate in order to become a good battler, no hate to u niggas im jus sayin both elevate. Bloodlyrics lines was either a complete miss, weak or his lines didn't connect. Pistol had the better idea of a punch, but they came off weak. No hate keep battlin n both elevate.

v-pistol