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    Life (Prod. by 2deep)

    Whats up! some more Zos! uppin my game. Hopefully getting a better mic quickly.
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    Re: Life (Prod. by 2deep)

    aiigh checking this....you came in a bar or two late but aiigh...yeh u def nee better quality...def also need to project your voice man don't hold back spit it like you mean get into that lyrics feel me...this will come wiht time...you got good lyrics and good content but just not delivered well

    overall needs work but you got potential man keep dropping and working

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    Re: Life (Prod. by 2deep)

    you came in 2 bars late.. i heard the mic shaking around.. your flow was on point at times and it was pretty decent, you sound young but with a little time and a better mic i think you'd do well. id work on lining your dubs up a little, or just turning them down so its not so obvious ha. there was no hook, id work on making a whole song but we all started spitting just verses ha. keep at it dude, keep writing.

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    Re: Life (Prod. by 2deep)

    I advice don't post publically until quality Not on point in recording Adlibs seem to come in off
    Cadence flow is not bad more energy could help give it emphasis.
    Have a real engineer go over your recording would be allot better
    2Deep is a wicked producer Have a song from him on my http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7870298
    I would say I can tell you are just starting out. My advice find some people you trust and just email them tracks for advice. Putting stuff not ready for the public out in the public hurts your brand

    Please refeed on my new track
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...49#post8342249

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    Re: Life (Prod. by 2deep)

    you sound like you're trying hard not to be heard... like mom is in the next room sleeping... like they said just work on your delivery and projecting your voice

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