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Bless Da Lord
Phan Man
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INFEKTED PENZ
and i dont give a phuck about a thang if the record dont bang motha phucka i could swaaaaaaaaaaaaaang
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INFEKTED PENZ
ill beat you automatic i dont even need to diss bitch
cuz i keep your girl in new gear,you couldnt even stick shift
trust me im not a phan man sorry for the loss to
and how this'll be tramatic like the time your parents lost you
im surprised this boty fish came here for a defeat
so im putin phan in a box like he came with a reciept
all your rhymes suck but no need to go all hard
cuz theres not a phan in the world that dosent blow on bars
you'll do anything to be famous,n lie up in a manshan
i swear the biggest rap dudes are riding in a phan man
ok can a mod delete the other 2
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=463412
he'll give lectures on leadership,but how can he be steerin u clear?
when in times of chaos Lord couldnt overcome a miracle here^^^
seen the evil in Lord so imma be poundin this dummy
prove he was a false prophet all along like counterfeit money
Lord is a biter! he'll get slain again as a rival
writers block 24/7, so all his verses came from the bible
got somethin to say? forever hold ya peace or get punched in the face
givin Lord bloodshot eyes like effects on takin puffs from a jay
i'd change the name fast too, i hear its receivin bad views
the D-A should do throw u in jail for bein trash dude
Last edited by The Archetype; December 3rd, 2011 at 02:06 AM
INFEKTED PENZ
thread cleaned... there also isn't a due time in this thread so you can't technically drop "late" so you can't get a no show win Bless...
open for votes
bump
INFEKTED PENZ
lets get some votes u lazy niggas
INFEKTED PENZ
ill beat you automatic i dont even need to diss bitch
cuz i keep your girl in new gear,you couldnt even stick shift
this barely makes sense
trust me im not a phan man sorry for the loss to
and how this'll be tramatic like the time your parents lost you
lol nah too basic
im surprised this boty fish came here for a defeat
so im putin phan in a box like he came with a reciept
wording is way off man
all your rhymes suck but no need to go all hard
cuz theres not a phan in the world that dosent blow on bars
ehhh okish
you'll do anything to be famous,n lie up in a manshan
i swear the biggest rap dudes are riding in a phan man
noooo
he'll give lectures on leadership,but how can he be steerin u clear?
when in times of chaos Lord couldnt overcome a miracle here^^^
no
seen the evil in Lord so imma be poundin this dummy
prove he was a false prophet all along like counterfeit money
okish
Lord is a biter! he'll get slain again as a rival
writers block 24/7, so all his verses came from the bible
ehh I don't really get it
got somethin to say? forever hold ya peace or get punched in the face
givin Lord bloodshot eyes like effects on takin puffs from a jay
okish
i'd change the name fast too, i hear its receivin bad views
the D-A should do throw u in jail for bein trash dude
wack lol
wasn't really much from either that I liked.. but Phan seemed to have a few okish bars where as bless only had 1 maybe..
V - Phan Man
ill beat you automatic i dont even need to diss bitch
cuz i keep your girl in new gear,you couldnt even stick shift
Played
trust me im not a phan man sorry for the loss to
and how this'll be tramatic like the time your parents lost you
Eh, played again
im surprised this boty fish came here for a defeat
so im putin phan in a box like he came with a reciept
Decent, first line coulda been worded better
all your rhymes suck but no need to go all hard
cuz theres not a phan in the world that dosent blow on bars
No.
you'll do anything to be famous,n lie up in a manshan
i swear the biggest rap dudes are riding in a phan man
Awful closure
Wording and concept killed you IMO. Way too simple and cliche. Be more creative.
Vs.
he'll give lectures on leadership,but how can he be steerin u clear?
when in times of chaos Lord couldnt overcome a miracle here^^^
kinda played idea but the approach was decent.
seen the evil in Lord so imma be poundin this dummy
prove he was a false prophet all along like counterfeit money
Decent again
Lord is a biter! he'll get slain again as a rival
writers block 24/7, so all his verses came from the bible
No.
got somethin to say? forever hold ya peace or get punched in the face
givin Lord bloodshot eyes like effects on takin puffs from a jay
No.
i'd change the name fast too, i hear its receivin bad views
the D-A should do throw u in jail for bein trash dude
Awful
Wording and concepts, just like your opponent, need a lot of elevation. You had a few decent hits. But nothing better than average.
V/ phan
Bless Da Lord
ill beat you automatic i dont even need to diss bitch
cuz i keep your girl in new gear,you couldnt even stick shift
no man
trust me im not a phan man sorry for the loss to
and how this'll be tramatic like the time your parents lost you
no
im surprised this boty fish came here for a defeat
so im putin phan in a box like he came with a reciept
wording suck but idea was cool decent punch
all your rhymes suck but no need to go all hard
cuz theres not a phan in the world that dosent blow on bars
wtf no
you'll do anything to be famous,n lie up in a manshan
i swear the biggest rap dudes are riding in a phan man
no again
Phan
he'll give lectures on leadership,but how can he be steerin u clear?
when in times of chaos Lord couldnt overcome a miracle here^
im sure this is played but it works ok here
seen the evil in Lord so imma be poundin this dummy
prove he was a false prophet all along like counterfeit money
lol ok
Lord is a biter! he'll get slain again as a rival
writers block 24/7, so all his verses came from the bible
hella played
got somethin to say? forever hold ya peace or get punched in the face
givin Lord bloodshot eyes like effects on takin puffs from a jay
hella played
i'd change the name fast too, i hear its receivin bad views
the D-A should do throw u in jail for bein trash dude
no
both you guys need to work on getting better concepts and wording, etc otherwise elevate anyways based on quotes Phan won 2 to 1
vote Phan
all your rhymes suck but no need to go all hard
cuz theres not a phan in the world that dosent blow on bars
lmao.
vs
he'll give lectures on leadership,but how can he be steerin u clear?
when in times of chaos Lord couldnt overcome a miracle here^^^
overall weak battle. BDL had a solid shot in there but it wasnt as hard as Phans personal shot. BDL has the concepts down but needs to work on delivery like a pizza man. Same with Phan. seemed to be an even match here. Phan, you should pwnin cats already.
v. phan
bump
INFEKTED PENZ
Nothin really
vs
he'll give lectures on leadership,but how can he be steerin u clear?
when in times of chaos Lord couldnt overcome a miracle here^^^
seen the evil in Lord so imma be poundin this dummy
prove he was a false prophet all along like counterfeit money
One-sided, Phan took this pretty comfortably. Bless didnt really bring much to the table. No detailed expo needed her...
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