Untill U Were Gone Ft Esmee Denters - Mimic

[.Mimic.]

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Lyrics:

Verse 1:

Untill you were gone, you know i been there,
you told me truth, but I never dared,
so don't spin that bottle,
move on, yeh push that throttle,
flicking through our old pictures,
me in the background on the phone to a mistress,
now I understand your wishlist,
all you ever wanted was me for Christmas,
and I miss this...

(hook)

Verse 2:
A picture speaks a 1000 words,
and this one say's that I love her,
so it must be true,
those things that I did to you,
and now im not laughing,
back in days I was bragging,
about what girl i was banging,
and to think i had a go when u was nagging,
DAMN,
lets start over, make a blue print,
it's time for planning,
I was a boy in our past our future ima man it.

(hook)

Verse3:
(singing)Girl I cant help but notice
you were the right girl for me,
(singing)when my heart was the coldest,
made me feel hot like 30degrees
(singing)lifted weight off my shoudlers,
you were so special to me,
(singing)and were only getting older,
so girl stay young with me.

[Toobs]

dunno what to say here...i dont want to be mean...

[.Mimic.]

smh

[Dcept]

good song man but the hook feels like you need better mixing man but otherwise dude good job

[.Nell.]

damn you collabed with esmee denters? hasent so like been in the charts and shit? not sure lol lyrically i wasnt really feeling it, lack of multies etc but what it was, but i liked it man, really legit for what it was, i see you doing your thing here and respect it, keep going bro.

[ShaDoWLesS]

not feeling the beat at all man, not a good choice hahah. Very pop sounding. Chorus sample is terrible lol. Flow wise it's not bad though, you can rap alright which is what frustrates me from this beat choice lol. Had to turn this off man, no offense but it's just madd corny. Come back and hit us with some real hip-hop for sure!

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[Joe Boston]

yeah no hate man beat not my style. lyrically too basic for me i like more creativity in a song. the hook wasnt really feeling either. flow was u rode the beat nice though. just not my type of style can see this being on the radio its pretty mainsteam. i cant say some people wont like it cuz like said got that pop hiphop style to it but like i said just not something i listen too. keep doing ur thing man

[DeathChamberz]

I will say this is not my type of music so personally don't like the song but will review for what it is as a dance music song

Vocals need more energy this doesn't push you to the dance floor Chorus and the beat is great for what it should Flow on the beat is good basic constant cadence

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[Rishi P]

aiigh checking this....some pop shit huh...yeah not my stuff but you riding the beat nicely....hook sounds horribly mixed, like what u did behind the hook though...mix could def be better....

overall not bad man your fundamentals were all there just not my typa track

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[Jawn Raw]

cool beat. singing from the girl is pretty good. nice vibe. you have a good flow and delivery for the most part. it's easy for me to see passed your accent. you use your voice pretty good over this beat. lyrically it was decent, nothing that really catches my attention. overall this is decent dude. i hope to see more from you in the future.

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[Slayerr.]

lately i started listening to more pop rap (since i found out exampel will eb at the isle of white festival) and im actually feeling this tbh, people mentioning lack of multis and lyrical devices but tbh for the style you're going for this i wouldn't say it mattered that much. you use auto tune on your singing? it sounded a bit weird tbh.
i enjoyed the track though.
rtf on the track ill have up soon