Upp
Fatal Thoughts
Lumbee
Upp
LEGION OF LEGENDS
Jack Herrera, Sour Ina Dutch..AC On High Flyin On The Hutch
you spit and suck, stick to producin or get skeet on ya cheek
cause my punches'll have em callin THIS thread "Beat of the Weak"
lol ok
he'll be decesed, these voters aint buyin into his sloppy flow
your better off pitchin them Fat Al thoughts to Cosby bro
creative yes, hard hitting no
ask him his sexual preference, he'll say "why? it don't matter"
but its plain to see, his avy's your reaction, "Bi? O.. Hazard!"
LOL nice
try and gloat bastard, i'll leave your fuckin pride ruptured
im hot dog, ketchup, i wanna drop this shit quick... must-turd
oh I see where ur getting at,but this didnt @ hit all
punches unheard, so compared to me,... you can't be
but i'll kill you and ya beats, have the chorus sung by a chantry
nah,I google chantry 1 or 2 more priest sung in mass,didnt make
sense from there
damn... but i don't need to, i mean i'd probobly bring him hell
but scytsophrenic, fatal thoughts? i'll just watch him kill himself
nah,cause he wont b more harm to other not himself right
not bad some misses here and there good effort,think u couldve develope those concepts a bit more
Lumbee is a dummy & I really got no fuckin’ respect for this humble guy
Fuck your tribe! It’s ironic when I hunt you that you’re the ones that run and hide
lol,alright
I’m not a racist gentleman when I say that you’re the worst Native American
Listened to your song for an eighth of a second man & there’s no way you’re a veteran!
no,didnt see where u was going wit this
You leave bitches ticked like a second hand… & it’s clear you get no bitches wet
Lumbee saying that he’s a pimp is like saying Clint Eastwood is still a threat
,ok
One half of my verse will actually burst - bash & leave you shattered and hurt
As soon as my punches disperse it will transport your ass to the back of the hearse
Very good flow here,not a hard punch
Now you need a matching purse, because you’re fuckin’ bitch with your style
You’re lyrics are vial & If people heard you rap they would instantly switch the dial
lol,eh
I haven’t seen your shit for a while…but you’re useless like a knife with no handle
Your lines are dull… & the sharpest thing probably got is a fuckin’ bow & arrow
ok
It super clear you been at this for while sumthing about your style seems old school tho dont see people who write like this its good to different Consistent verse 1 or 2 lines I wasnt feeling but good effort
you see my break Its clear Fatal had the better verse ,Props to Lumbee never read ya verses good showing here
vote Fatal
damn... but i don't need to, i mean i'd probobly bring him hell
but scytsophrenic, fatal thoughts? i'll just watch him kill himself
you spit and suck, stick to producin or get skeet on ya cheek
cause my punches'll have em callin THIS thread "Beat of the Weak"
vs
I’m not a racist gentleman when I say that you’re the worst Native American
Listened to your song for an eighth of a second man & there’s no way you’re a veteran!
One half of my verse will actually burst - bash & leave you shattered and hurt
As soon as my punches disperse it will transport your ass to the back of the hearse
Now you need a matching purse, because you’re fuckin’ bitch with your style
You’re lyrics are vial & If people heard you rap they would instantly switch the dial
overall i think fatals verse was more well putogether, lumbee would have edged this if he had more personals like he did with his beat of the weak line and the suicide line. fatals consistency edged this out, my vote goes to fatal