Glad you're down homeboy, lets do this.
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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
chop ya throat wit a knot rope crack ya voice pipes like an off note
Confused wit dope? only cuz V exchanges hands in clear totes wit old folks
VOB admits to being a dick, but only in private so dont get it twisted
he thought they were going elbow deep,when he heard army, he reinlisted
when asked to list the chicks he been with, all smiles oh V was ready
it took son all of 2 seconds to jot them all on a piece of confetti
when it comes to the voice of berlin, my bat going inglorious bastard
and leave v without the w, like crashed jettas.. turn on your hazards
keep da faith maybe ya song will one day be on da radio lets pray
but u on stage, people search for the fat lady like a tyler perry play
ya careers done a inch from the starting line the end you now see
you'd think the voters were wu tang fans how they hope you OD....B
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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
aight good look...lets go
Pistols Pete? ya shit don't feel right like you write with your left hand
And trust me I wasn't surprised to see that Wack is your best friend
see that is creativity, some shit you can't do, so stop bothering dude
your lines be like:“ I'm Devil's Son, so of course I'm way hotter than U“
Enough of that kid shit, Pistol ain't even whippin his little dick right
only thing more feminin than Pete?! Some pink, plushbunnys in a bitchfight
Pete admit it?! you're a fuckin' a comedian cuz all you're sayin' is a joke
Shit, my lines control Pete, I put him on mute like he came with a remote
Or this Pistol came with a muzzle tip, y'all know he don't want it with Voice
He's lookin for someone to cuddle with, at least that's what he told his boys
P I'm sorry. The other day your mom left your dad and took me home instead
she the safe type, has me in them trojans and I ain't talkin' bout that gold n red
Up.... Lets get some votes
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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
come on guys it's time for some favors to be returned.
lets get some votes in here.
PistolsPete
chop ya throat wit a knot rope crack ya voice pipes like an off note
Confused wit dope? only cuz V exchanges hands in clear totes wit old folks
set up was aight with the multies nd what not but when it came to deliverin the punch it just came off as weak to me.
VOB admits to being a dick, but only in private so dont get it twisted
he thought they were going elbow deep,when he heard army, he reinlisted
its ok, wordin aint that stellar nd shit but u got the punch in there.
when asked to list the chicks he been with, all smiles oh V was ready
it took son all of 2 seconds to jot them all on a piece of confetti
its coo, didnt get me to laugh or nun. reason prolly bein the wordin.
when it comes to the voice of berlin, my bat going inglorious bastard
and leave v without the w, like crashed jettas.. turn on your hazards
solid
keep da faith maybe ya song will one day be on da radio lets pray
but u on stage, people search for the fat lady like a tyler perry play
too much wordin for a weaak hit. gotta be real with u, that perry reference was just odd, didnt make sense nahmean. why are they searchin for the fat lady? and what does it have to do with u dissin him sayin he prolly wont get radio play or w/e? the 2 concepts meshed bad imo.
ya careers done a inch from the starting line the end you now see
you'd think the voters were wu tang fans how they hope you OD....B
its coo for a closer, just work on the filler nd it'll deliver smoother nd harder.
VOB
Pistols Pete? ya shit don't feel right like you write with your left hand
And trust me I wasn't surprised to see that Wack is your best friend
??? what does that mean? this bar felt like you accidentally arranged the lines in the wrong order?..iunno, did you? cause if u didnt, u gotta work on stickin to a concept nd try workin on the rhymin too. dont know if you got an accent that makes friend + hand rhyme but it these 2 words sound nothin alike.
see that is creativity, some shit you can't do, so stop bothering dude
your lines be like:“ I'm Devil's Son, so of course I'm way hotter than U“
nahhh.
Enough of that kid shit, Pistol ain't even whippin his little dick right
only thing more feminin than Pete?! Some pink, plushbunnys in a bitchfight
okayish typa bar to me, tried to go funny but it wasnt really. just really givin u props on this one cause u put together a multi.
Pete admit it?! you're a fuckin' a comedian cuz all you're sayin' is a joke
Shit, my lines control Pete, I put him on mute like he came with a remote
the execution/last line was aight, but i gotta take some points from that opener son. what you really said was
"Pete admit it?! you are a fuckin' a comedian cuz all you are sayin' is a joke"...so iunno. tell me honestly if that feels right to you. coulda been some typos but u gotta check what u layin down
Or this Pistol came with a muzzle tip, y'all know he don't want it with Voice
He's lookin for someone to cuddle with, at least that's what he told his boys
it rhymed, but nah. shit was just weak.
P I'm sorry. The other day your mom left your dad and took me home instead
she the safe type, has me in them trojans and I ain't talkin' bout that gold n red
nah. first off, it was wordy. secondly, u used a played metaphore talkin about trojans. if u deliver somethin thats been played in fresh orginal way then u get all the props for comin up wuth creative shit assumin the punch was ill aswell.
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to put an end to all this, i feel strongly that PP took this on an account of comin with heavier and showin a more experienced battler that has more knowledge on formin bars together. not only that but u were the only one to pull off a name play. so i give u daps on that too. didnt seem to have a word problem as bad as..u know who.
VOB, i just didnt like the verse altogether. like how even right now i cant remember a bar from ur verse cause it just wasnt solid 100%. didnt show up for the battle and unfortunately Pistols just wasnt havin dat.
good luck to both u niggas in elevatin nd stayin on top of ya game. til then tho, keep battlin gentlemen.
Vote-> Pistols Pete
INFEKTED PENZ
So Friend and Hand is not rhymable? Are you serious?
This is really starting to piss me off, do I really need to explain everything?
The first punch is worded correctly. Mr. Wack is a rapper on this site and if you check pistols profile you'll see that he is friends with him, get it?!
And yes I had a typo in that comedian line, so what?
Jesus I want to see you people even form a correct sentence in another language, you're just rediculous!
u mad bro?
INFEKTED PENZ
chop ya throat wit a knot rope crack ya voice pipes like an off note
Confused wit dope? only cuz V exchanges hands in clear totes wit old folks
meh, tried to forced the concept I think
VOB admits to being a dick, but only in private so dont get it twisted
he thought they were going elbow deep,when he heard army, he reinlisted
nah, and you spelled reenlisted wrong
when asked to list the chicks he been with, all smiles oh V was ready
it took son all of 2 seconds to jot them all on a piece of confetti
could have been worded much better IMO
when it comes to the voice of berlin, my bat going inglorious bastard
and leave v without the w, like crashed jettas.. turn on your hazards
had the wind up, the swing, but weak connect
keep da faith maybe ya song will one day be on da radio lets pray
but u on stage, people search for the fat lady like a tyler perry play
nah
ya careers done a inch from the starting line the end you now see
you'd think the voters were wu tang fans how they hope you OD....B
meh
Vs
Pistols Pete? ya shit don't feel right like you write with your left hand
And trust me I wasn't surprised to see that Wack is your best friend
ok
see that is creativity, some shit you can't do, so stop bothering dude
your lines be like:“ I'm Devil's Son, so of course I'm way hotter than U“
nah
Enough of that kid shit, Pistol ain't even whippin his little dick right
only thing more feminin than Pete?! Some pink, plushbunnys in a bitchfight
nah
Pete admit it?! you're a fuckin' a comedian cuz all you're sayin' is a joke
Shit, my lines control Pete, I put him on mute like he came with a remote
played and not worded well
Or this Pistol came with a muzzle tip, y'all know he don't want it with Voice
He's lookin for someone to cuddle with, at least that's what he told his boys
nah
P I'm sorry. The other day your mom left your dad and took me home instead
she the safe type, has me in them trojans and I ain't talkin' bout that gold n red
nah, not feeling
V-VOB, had one ok punch among the two
battlers.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...640/index.html
Hit up that battle and then I'll poll
"Four letter words or four syllable words won't make you a poet
It will only magnify how shallow you are, and let everybody know it."
-Gil Scott Heron..Infekted Penz.
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.Nightmares.
@phan. I ain't mad, I'm cool it's just like I said. people don't seem to recognize that people in Germany don't speak English, we speak German. So me rapping' in English is like you would try to rap in a foreign language, if you even know one.
But whatever, I'm cool
Pistols Pete?!? remember 411hype?... are you doing audio yet?
chop ya throat wit a knot rope crack ya voice pipes like an off note
Confused wit dope? only cuz V exchanges hands in clear totes wit old folks
the 1st part was felt but the second line went nowhere
VOB admits to being a dick, but only in private so dont get it twisted
he thought they were going elbow deep,when he heard army, he reinlisted
iight
when asked to list the chicks he been with, all smiles oh V was ready
it took son all of 2 seconds to jot them all on a piece of confetti
iight
when it comes to the voice of berlin, my bat going inglorious bastard
and leave v without the w, like crashed jettas.. turn on your hazards
went nowhere
keep da faith maybe ya song will one day be on da radio lets pray
but u on stage, people search for the fat lady like a tyler perry play
i think you meant "when u on stage"... but it still went nowhere
ya careers done a inch from the starting line the end you now see
you'd think the voters were wu tang fans how they hope you OD....B
iight but watch with the ODB lines some ppl are sensitive
Pistols Pete? ya shit don't feel right like you write with your left hand
And trust me I wasn't surprised to see that Wack is your best friend
...i didnt like this
see that is creativity, some shit you can't do, so stop bothering dude
your lines be like:“ I'm Devil's Son, so of course I'm way hotter than U“
...
Enough of that kid shit, Pistol ain't even whippin his little dick right
what?!
only thing more feminin than Pete?! Some pink, plushbunnys in a bitchfight
...
Pete admit it?! you're a fuckin' a comedian cuz all you're sayin' is a joke
Shit, my lines control Pete, I put him on mute like he came with a remote
your wordplay could be better
Or this Pistol came with a muzzle tip, y'all know he don't want it with Voice
He's lookin for someone to cuddle with, at least that's what he told his boys
...
P I'm sorry. The other day your mom left your dad and took me home instead
she the safe type, has me in them trojans and I ain't talkin' bout that gold
n red
iight
i have PP edging this one out ... with better punches
I guess I should have added NO Dickriding votes to the opener!!!
VOB admits to being a dick, but only in private so dont get it twisted
he thought they were going elbow deep,when he heard army, he reinlisted
when asked to list the chicks he been with, all smiles oh V was ready
it took son all of 2 seconds to jot them all on a piece of confetti
Vs
Pistols Pete? ya shit don't feel right like you write with your left hand
And trust me I wasn't surprised to see that Wack is your best friend
P I'm sorry. The other day your mom left your dad and took me home instead
she the safe type, has me in them trojans and I ain't talkin' bout that gold n red
vob u came very weak.. was generous w/ the kuoted bars.. pistol u came w/ decent concepts, but not all hitted vob.. this wasnt a great battle.. either good. both keep practicing cuz i see pistols edgein this shit.
vY/PIstols Cocked
when asked to list the chicks he been with, all smiles oh V was ready
it took son all of 2 seconds to jot them all on a piece of confetti
when it comes to the voice of berlin, my bat going inglorious bastard
and leave v without the w, like crashed jettas.. turn on your hazards
keep da faith maybe ya song will one day be on da radio lets pray
but u on stage, people search for the fat lady like a tyler perry play
vs.
Pistols Pete? ya shit don't feel right like you write with your left hand
And trust me I wasn't surprised to see that Wack is your best friend
see that is creativity, some shit you can't do, so stop bothering dude
your lines be like:“ I'm Devil's Son, so of course I'm way hotter than U“
i was bein very generous wit them quotes....somethin i shouldn't do but oh well, those quotables were the best from both verses, no hate when i says this but none of them lines were dope. if they were worded better, it woulda been dope. but s'all good. pistol got this with slightly soft punches thrown. can't vote on this cuz he crew but if i could i would say pistol won.
keep battlin.
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