16 Lines
No Biting
no Dick Ridin Votes
House Rules
Check when you see dis battle and due in 3-4 hours
16 Lines
No Biting
no Dick Ridin Votes
House Rules
Check when you see dis battle and due in 3-4 hours
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There will be BloodShed..
Check, Check , Check Bitch good Luck
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There will be BloodShed..
Checkin in foo
lmao bum, K.O
slaughterhouse dis faggot, you aint think it was time??
i should be in da torney cause im so, ready to climb...
bitch, im sending punch lines, dat'll bloody ya rhymes
and im rapidly sending hooks, till you eventually die
barz pack a punch early, use da pen till his nose bleed
have him at my feet beggin "I'll give head to ya Whole Team"
In da closet ass nigga, gay obession dis man dream
more dick he imagine?? prolly suckin his dad clean
give ya mom dat dope dick now im all in ya fridge
den back to da bedroom, got ya mom suckin my kids
im da man of ya crib, especially cause ya mom give me wig
cant believe she suck my dick, while i was sick in da bed
with out da permission dare step, ya head will be open
fuck you and ya codition, hope you die in a coffin
fuck da physician, im da antidote injectin da poison
You da definition of Fuck Boy, mis-using a trojan
good luck bum :~P
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There will be BloodShed..
my bad text error on 14th line dats " Fuck you and ya Condition, Hope you Die in a Coffin"
dats what its suppose to say in case you illiterate
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There will be BloodShed..
yo you sick with the pen, well am sick with the led ,
Not talking bout bullets, talking bout a pencil drooling dark red,
Ey faggot ur thru, I've seen better drops in onther threads
The phrase under the pic I suggest you forget, u rhymes are so weak no hard punches connect,
Yet There's No BloodShed, wait ur a faggot, you like taking dicks in ur rear end,
so thhat's what you meant, cleaned out the closet, its OFFICIAL still get no respect,
Drop the mic pick up the tech, do us all a favor make your own BLOODSHED.
Next time watch where you step, am the underdog finishing what seems to be a vet,
I just skooled this clown, he failed, no walk nor a cap or gown he's what you call a joke
He got me laughing now, didn't learn shit but got the make up down,
The kid said good luck to me the bum, spinned his head as if he consumed strong rum,
12 bars here they are me vs a queer, waiting game now see who's standing once the smoke clears..
My bad foo knocked out
slaughterhouse dis faggot, you aint think it was time??
i should be in da torney cause im so, ready to climb...
ok
bitch, im sending punch lines, dat'll bloody ya rhymes
and im rapidly sending hooks, till you eventually die
meh
barz pack a punch early, use da pen till his nose bleed
have him at my feet beggin "I'll give head to ya Whole Team"
ok
In da closet ass nigga, gay obession dis man dream
more dick he imagine?? prolly suckin his dad clean
nah
give ya mom dat dope dick now im all in ya fridge
den back to da bedroom, got ya mom suckin my kids
mom jokes arent funny
im da man of ya crib, especially cause ya mom give me wig
cant believe she suck my dick, while i was sick in da bed
see above
with out da permission dare step, ya head will be open
fuck you and ya codition, hope you die in a coffin
smh
fuck da physician, im da antidote injectin da poison
You da definition of Fuck Boy, mis-using a trojan
ok
versus
yo you sick with the pen, well am sick with the led ,
Not talking bout bullets, talking bout a pencil drooling dark red,
ok
Ey faggot ur thru, I've seen better drops in onther threads
The phrase under the pic I suggest you forget, u rhymes are so weak no hard punches connect,
Yet There's No BloodShed, wait ur a faggot, you like taking dicks in ur rear end,
i cant tell where your bar ends
so thhat's what you meant, cleaned out the closet, its OFFICIAL still get no respect,
Drop the mic pick up the tech, do us all a favor make your own BLOODSHED.
ok this made me laugh
Next time watch where you step, am the underdog finishing what seems to be a vet
not bad
I just skooled this clown, he failed, no walk nor a cap or gown he's what you call a joke
He got me laughing now, didn't learn shit but got the make up down,
The kid said good luck to me the bum, spinned his head as if he consumed strong rum,
12 bars here they are me vs a queer, waiting game now see who's standing once the smoke clears..
i dont even detect a rhyme scheme
to be honest i wasnt feeling EITHER of your verses but if im forced to pick a winner ill vote for bloodshed
slaughterhouse dis faggot, you aint think it was time??
i should be in da torney cause im so, ready to climb...
so why didn't you partipate in da tourney? anyway..no
bitch, im sending punch lines, dat'll bloody ya rhymes
and im rapidly sending hooks, till you eventually die
fuck no
barz pack a punch early, use da pen till his nose bleed
have him at my feet beggin "I'll give head to ya Whole Team"
no man weak
In da closet ass nigga, gay obession dis man dream
more dick he imagine?? prolly suckin his dad clean
my god no
give ya mom dat dope dick now im all in ya fridge
den back to da bedroom, got ya mom suckin my kids
you aint dissing him
im da man of ya crib, especially cause ya mom give me wig
cant believe she suck my dick, while i was sick in da bed
do you have an obsession with his mom?? Hell no to this barwith out da permission dare step, ya head will be open
fuck you and ya codition, hope you die in a coffin
smh..best 'bar'you had
fuck da physician, im da antidote injectin da poison
You da definition of Fuck Boy, mis-using a trojan
weak closervs
yo you sick with the pen, well am sick with the led ,
Not talking bout bullets, talking bout a pencil drooling dark red,
wtf?
Ey faggot ur thru, I've seen better drops in onther threads
The phrase under the pic I suggest you forget, u rhymes are so weak no hard punches connect,
softest jab ever...atleast something
Yet There's No BloodShed, wait ur a faggot, you like taking dicks in ur rear end,
so thhat's what you meant, cleaned out the closet, its OFFICIAL still get no respect,
almost something
Drop the mic pick up the tech, do us all a favor make your own BLOODSHED.
Next time watch where you step, am the underdog finishing what seems to be a vet,
hell no,
I just skooled this clown, he failed, no walk nor a cap or gown he's what you call a joke
He got me laughing now, didn't learn shit but got the make up down,
nope
The kid said good luck to me the bum, spinned his head as if he consumed strong rum,
12 bars here they are me vs a queer, waiting game now see who's standing once the smoke clears..
didnt rhyme.....wtf???
This was WHACK AS FUCK. The only reason why I vote here because no one else will. anyway, like i said wasnt feeling any shit you guys wrote but i'ma give it to Ripsta because atleast one of his 'bars' almost made sense.
Advice to both: Elavate ASAP
V/ Ripsta
Take a Look at my Life
bump
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There will be BloodShed..
nothing
vs
nothing
i honestly didnt like neither verses this battle sucked something awful
just read and vote as many battles you'll get the hang of this text shit
anyways vote goes to ripsta for almost forming a punch
vote ripsta
V.Ripsta/overall better verse...blood need u need to work on punchlines and u'll be ights
Vote DQd
Last edited by Knux; December 1st, 2011 at 02:39 PM
...Onslaught!
This is one of the weakest battles i've seen in a while tbh...
both heads came with some very simple, weak, none creative/clever lines...
If i had to choose, ripsta got this
Blood
slaughterhouse dis faggot, you aint think it was time??
i should be in da torney cause im so, ready to climb...
finisher wasnt a diss more of a statement
bitch, im sending punch lines, dat'll bloody ya rhymes
and im rapidly sending hooks, till you eventually die
ok this wasnt bad slight punch here
barz pack a punch early, use da pen till his nose bleed
have him at my feet beggin "I'll give head to ya Whole Team"
ok lol'd a bit at this still a slight hit
In da closet ass nigga, gay obession dis man dream
more dick he imagine?? prolly suckin his dad clean
ok
give ya mom dat dope dick now im all in ya fridge
den back to da bedroom, got ya mom suckin my kids
lol ok
im da man of ya crib, especially cause ya mom give me wig
cant believe she suck my dick, while i was sick in da bed
nah
with out da permission dare step, ya head will be open
fuck you and ya codition, hope you die in a coffin
nah
fuck da physician, im da antidote injectin da poison
You da definition of Fuck Boy, mis-using a trojan
kinda weak concept on finisher
RIPSTA
yo you sick with the pen, well am sick with the led ,
Not talking bout bullets, talking bout a pencil drooling dark red,
statement
Ey faggot ur thru, I've seen better drops in onther threads
The phrase under the pic I suggest you forget, u rhymes are so weak no hard punches connect,
slight hit
Yet There's No BloodShed, wait ur a faggot, you like taking dicks in ur rear end,
so thhat's what you meant, cleaned out the closet, its OFFICIAL still get no respect,
nah
Drop the mic pick up the tech, do us all a favor make your own BLOODSHED.
Next time watch where you step, am the underdog finishing what seems to be a vet,
not bad
I just skooled this clown, he failed, no walk nor a cap or gown he's what you call a joke
He got me laughing now, didn't learn shit but got the make up down,
nah didnt ryhme here concepts were off in the finisher
The kid said good luck to me the bum, spinned his head as if he consumed strong rum,
12 bars here they are me vs a queer, waiting game now see who's standing once the smoke clears..
nah ryhme scheme off
Well damn BOS instead of criticizing and said that this battle was wack and saying shit like these dudes suck give them positive feed to get better man.
Anyway Blood had too many misses man need to get more creative if u cant think of metaphores use personals. Ripsta ur rhyme scheme was an issue for you and u had misses as well but when it comes to rhyming ur 1st and 2nd line on 1 bar has to rhyme only time u switch rhyme scheme in going into a second bar. also both creativity
V/ Blood he had some of the better misses