10 lines
Due wednesday midnite
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check gl man
Cbjbkd
joeboston
10 lines
Due wednesday midnite
please break down votes and explain
check gl man
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Bitches call u impotent u never stay hard
Only time u CBJ is when u pull out ur membership card
Your family poor as fuck and yeah im being cruel
He still rocking BK cuz the cheap kicks he been wearing since elementry school
With a name like that i dunno what the fuck ur family did
U should get a DNA test cuz u might be Alphabets long lost kid
Left frontlines went to LLL and they said u dont belong there
cuz only time ur seeing good barz is scanning shit as a cashier
Its quite clear u suck there aint no maybe or probably
So when u tell us ur good with the Notebook is cuz ur gay ass loves romantic comedies
I need an ext Joe...I forgot all about this!
no problem man u got that just drop wen u can
Ill drop sometime today...
You’re not liked or respected here homo
You’re not suave wit the mic…
When it comes to you nobody’s ever yelling mojo
You’ve gone from wack to basic, so I wont take you lightly, bro
But just because you’re evolving, doesn’t mean you’re mighty, joe
I figured out the strategy you use, that makes you the worse
Joe drops dope bars…then uses whatever’s left for his verse
Been poppin in FL, so you thought you had me beaten
But you were easily bumped off like using acne treatments
He’s been in a slump, imma have you going down in the ranks faster
But you wont break the cycle, even though you’re peddaling backwards
Knux, can you clear up the freeposts
oww, this seemed closer than it did cause i thought CB woulda taken it.
joe, i seen u came waaaaaay better than this fam. whether u rushed it or not, its w.e..point is tho i know u can drop some more concrete bars. from start to finish it just wasnt there..didnt seem u could shake off the rust in this. from the opener, to the over worded lines, i just wasnt feelin it personally.
i did think cb came a lil better, not by much tho. just seemed to flow and deliver his shit a bit smoother that just made it clear to me he edged this one out.
close battle nonetheless.
Vote-> CB
INFEKTED PENZ
lol ok uppin
Your family poor as fuck and yeah im being cruel
He still rocking BK cuz the cheap kicks he been wearing since elementry school
With a name like that i dunno what the fuck ur family did
U should get a DNA test cuz u might be Alphabets long lost kid
vs.
I figured out the strategy you use, that makes you the worse
Joe drops dope bars…then uses whatever’s left for his verse
Been poppin in FL, so you thought you had me beaten
But you were easily bumped off like using acne treatments
He’s been in a slump, imma have you going down in the ranks faster
But you wont break the cycle, even though you’re peddaling backwards
joe dog u rush ur fuckin verse everytime nigga! no hate tho, i think cbjdfkjgne or w/e tha niggas name is had the LOTB wit the dope bars line that was coo. no hate to either keep battlin.
v-cwnofwno
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yup uppin
Uppin
Joe - take some more time with your lines man, i can tell that you've been rushing lately. really focus on ur battle and word them better. overall you had maybe 1 or 2 bars that hit, but they were weak. weak verse overall.
C - you had better wording. you had about 2-3 bars that hit. overall you had a more polished verse.
v/C
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