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    The Sky ( The La ) by Mc Motion

    [YOUTUBE]1_DbGs5AjI8[/YOUTUBE]
    this is the first video iv made, and its for a song i made in april.. one of the last songs iv recorded. i am back on the mic now and about to put out my solo EP ' Not my Problem '. please leave some feedback and i w ill return the favor, thank you!

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    Re: The Sky ( The La ) by Mc Motion

    not feeling the hook too much tho i see what ya were trying to go for.

    flows good, i like your voice man...lyrics were good for what this was about...

    haha video is pretty simple (im sure ya knew that, tho still better then a still picture)
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    Re: The Sky ( The La ) by Mc Motion

    well video wise in ur crib pretty funny man no hate though. voice wise can say cool dellivery on point man. didnt really like the hook either.

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    Re: The Sky ( The La ) by Mc Motion

    I don`t see the point of the ghetto video
    Especially with nobody in the video
    Wicked chorus
    FLow is basic but on beat and consistent Cadence could be better
    WHo can hate on weed song
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    Re: The Sky ( The La ) by Mc Motion

    Not bad man, see you're developing a new sound, sounds like some KMK shit. Video was kinda unecessary though, but I like the smoking on it haha. If you're gonna do a video you should cut the parts where you're not rapping to the camera and put something else in there, kinda off putting. Definitely too short man haha. Remember to copy the links of 2 tracks you've left feed on and put them in your original post or else this will be deleted. Good shit man.
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