12 Lines
Due @ 11:59 Eastern Time.
no In-Lame-ass (infamus) votes.
12 Lines
Due @ 11:59 Eastern Time.
no In-Lame-ass (infamus) votes.
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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check, mate.
I slap hoes and punch women.
yeh here. chek
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u aint a playa, yous a snitch... cuz if Arch kept u G
dawg id shoot the sheriff, but who we kiddin, you the deputy!
and seriously what can i say bout jeffy that hasnt already been said already
like how i'll buck ya dome off when i let the chrome off......
....................NIGGA, WHY AINT YOU DEAD ALREADY!!!!!!
dont get jeffy gassed up cuz if its not underground he can get deaded
all my bars are raw, but yours are like ya pen cuz that shit is unleaded
biggie died at 24, so rap is like a fine wine
you get better with age... but u dont need to wait until your in prime time
im just seriously messing about, i'll section him out
if he say he wanna spit heat i'll put my tech in his mouth
fuck the popularity like dohmer ive been ripping this in ten
i dont care who judges it cus in life i dont need to be infamous to win
I slap hoes and punch women.
Well shit half of the FL voters are fuckin on Xtacsy when votin so i was thinkin, why the fuck bother with even droppin my damn verse? it ain't gone get critiqued right, like never, n niggas come in here to peep wat i drop n then don't go shit to vote on it er nothin, whack niggas, then In-lame-ass wit his like 6 words votes suck major ass.
So fuck u all, really i gunna keystyle this shit muhthafuckas, n honestly, ROFL @ u faggots cuz i don't give a fuck half my points will be gone after u niggas vote on this shit, ill fuckin murda ya rofl.
anyways....
Jibberish aka Rhyme Schemes aka Degenerate...
He braindead, a poor worker that got hit by a Peterbilt truck,
bit his tonge..
asked why his fam was so lazy n he says "cuth thith de-generation suckth" [1]
he got back on his feet, stood behind lines watchin parades cuz no 1 can do it like J can
his boyfriend saw him talkin to a hoe n he said "Why do u have to talk like a straight man"
He a smooth talker? to women, nah, but to us niggas its a bunch of shit
his moms asked me, did he learn a new language n i says no hes talkin jibberish
yo girl lookd like she wanna sex me, with her tits so damn big
she told me she aint neva seen chains hangin so low since Jibbs did it
Guns, Knives, bombs <- u no thats pain, which i deliver
bodied this faggot up, n have his miserable dead body float away in the detroit river
I throw TD's, u catch STD's, u straight? nigga thats somethin u gotta prove
because when we ask if he likes whores, he stops on guys like Ndamukung Suh
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u aint a playa, yous a snitch... cuz if Arch kept u G
dawg id shoot the sheriff, but who we kiddin, you the deputy!
decent
and seriously what can i say bout jeffy that hasnt already been said already
like how i'll buck ya dome off when i let the chrome off......
....................NIGGA, WHY AINT YOU DEAD ALREADY!!!!!!
dont get jeffy gassed up cuz if its not underground he can get deadedirrelevant
all my bars are raw, but yours are like ya pen cuz that shit is unleaded
biggie died at 24, so rap is like a fine wineok
you get better with age... but u dont need to wait until your in prime time
im just seriously messing about, i'll section him outweak nameplay attempt
if he say he wanna spit heat i'll put my tech in his mouth
fuck the popularity like dohmer ive been ripping this in tenok
i dont care who judges it cus in life i dont need to be infamous to win
vsur dissing someone else here....atleast thats what i think lol
He braindead, a poor worker that got hit by a Peterbilt truck,
bit his tonge..
asked why his fam was so lazy n he says "cuth thith de-generation suckth" [1]
he got back on his feet, stood behind lines watchin parades cuz no 1 can do it like J cankinda had to lol here..but it was pretty weak
his boyfriend saw him talkin to a hoe n he said "Why do u have to talk like a straight man"
He a smooth talker? to women, nah, but to us niggas its a bunch of shitok
his moms asked me, did he learn a new language n i says no hes talkin jibberish
yo girl lookd like she wanna sex me, with her tits so damn biglol, ok nameplay
she told me she aint neva seen chains hangin so low since Jibbs did it
Guns, Knives, bombs <- u no thats pain, which i deliverlol
bodied this faggot up, n have his miserable dead body float away in the detroit river
I throw TD's, u catch STD's, u straight? nigga thats somethin u gotta provekinda weak personal
because when we ask if he likes whores, he stops on guys like Ndamukung Suh
Ok, Jibberish (lol at that name) had one bar that stood out n Jeff had one bar that stood out. But Jeff had better misses,decent at best closer
reason
Flow was off here. U used 'already' like three times. Instantly dead yo bar.and seriously what can i say bout jeffy that hasnt already been said already
like how i'll buck ya dome off when i let the chrome off......
....................NIGGA, WHY AINT YOU DEAD ALREADY!!!!!!
vs
kinda weak bar, but it had some humor in it and thats why I vote for Jeffyo girl lookd like she wanna sex me, with her tits so damn big
she told me she aint neva seen chains hangin so low since Jibbs did it
V/Jeff. No hate to Jibbs but make sure you work on wording and create lines with some humor in it.
Jeff: Dont keystyle shit anymore
Take a Look at my Life
rofl @ dont keystyle anymore...
bump.
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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One sided battle IMO...
Jibberish - your lines were worded badly, really made the flow slip off and had stretched lines. as far as the concepts go...there wasn't anything that really stood out to me. you had maybe 1 bar that was pretty good but the rest were weak man...keep elevating though
Primetime - you had a pretty good verse. you had some hits in there, not too many misses. some name plays, some cleverness. overall you had the better/polished verse
V/PT
just lol.
I slap hoes and punch women.
i like ur sig homie.
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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Jibberish
u aint a playa, yous a snitch... cuz if Arch kept u G
dawg id shoot the sheriff, but who we kiddin, you the deputy!
this is an old concept with the arch's assistant personal but overall the punch was pretty direct so good
and seriously what can i say bout jeffy that hasnt already been said already
like how i'll buck ya dome off when i let the chrome off......
....................NIGGA, WHY AINT YOU DEAD ALREADY!!!!!!
pretty basic but direct
dont get jeffy gassed up cuz if its not underground he can get deaded
all my bars are raw, but yours are like ya pen cuz that shit is unleaded
ok concept didnt make sense not being a smartass but pens got ink pencils got lead no hate just didnt hit for me
biggie died at 24, so rap is like a fine wine
you get better with age... but u dont need to wait until your in prime time
lol this was a cool concept
im just seriously messing about, i'll section him out
if he say he wanna spit heat i'll put my tech in his mouth
nah played concept
fuck the popularity like dohmer ive been ripping this in ten
i dont care who judges it cus in life i dont need to be infamous to win
this was a cool personal but the way u came across was more statementish
Jeffry
He braindead, a poor worker that got hit by a Peterbilt truck,
bit his tonge..
asked why his fam was so lazy n he says "cuth thith de-generation suckth" [1]
funny in a way but wasnt feeling the concept no hate
he got back on his feet, stood behind lines watchin parades cuz no 1 can do it like J can
his boyfriend saw him talkin to a hoe n he said "Why do u have to talk like a straight man"
lmao ok
He a smooth talker? to women, nah, but to us niggas its a bunch of shit
his moms asked me, did he learn a new language n i says no hes talkin jibberish
ok kinda saw this coming a bit basic concept but ok punch
yo girl lookd like she wanna sex me, with her tits so damn big
she told me she aint neva seen chains hangin so low since Jibbs did it
ok concept but didnt rhyme
Guns, Knives, bombs <- u no thats pain, which i deliver
bodied this faggot up, n have his miserable dead body float away in the detroit river
too wordy here it was direct but didnt hit
I throw TD's, u catch STD's, u straight? nigga thats somethin u gotta prove
because when we ask if he likes whores, he stops on guys like Ndamukung Suh
ok lol cuz this was a current event so good metaphore
well this was a pretty even battle here guys. I mean jibberish u came with a couple played concepts some misses but i did like that primetime concept was dope felt that was the only line that hit real hard to me though. Jeff ur verse was enjoyable had a couple funny barz in there the closer was funny as hell cuz it just happened and ur 2nd bar made me laugh as well. Both of yall had yall misses but when it comes down to it a enjoyed jeffs verse a slight more.
V/Jeff
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Jibberish, your lines were nearly living up to your names meaning here man, sorry. The flow was off, didnt have great punches either. Missed hits a lot and didnt quite get there for me sorry.
vote: Jeff