Outlines of The City

[W.isdom I.s L.ife so L.iv]

this is just a sample of the beat if anyone likes i'll be more than glad to upload the whole beat ... no charge

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[Fatal.]

this was ok, the melody is unique, but not my style. kind of seems like mobb deep, but i feel its too happy sounding in a way for that style, kind of thought it was a lil slow for my liking as well...but overall not bad..keep producing man

[W.isdom I.s L.ife so L.iv]

THANKS ...i was trying something new