ripsta vs bos

[ripsta]

10 lines check in how long

[ripsta]

BOSNIAN wtf is that,a foreigner, no wonder u suck at rap,
BOS dnt understand, like an animal cattle named himself after that,
This is a game of chess your move, accepted my challenge fucked up so soon,
Checkmate you loose boo hoo, now run in fear like shag and scooby doo,
Here take the mic too, grab the chord and CHOKE until u resemble neptune,
Choking sound familiar my dude, used your OM strongly against you,
open your Mouth,but only for men to cum out, your vocal chords vibrate making all kinds of gay sounds,
Look at the hill where BOS is roaming around, he's no king of the hill lyrically, I'll finish this clown,
Like nick cannon bro am wildin out, crack a laugh now spit my pee out, #1 I rank
Watch me chew and spit him back to his land/now he thru stitched prick wnt try ta Come-Back,

[Bos]

whoah...i havent checked in yet

ok, check i'll have verse soon if u don't mind

[Bos]

U suck hard wit' text...imagine this fag on a mic
It's like u study the Maya, cuz ur avy exactly predicted how ur faith's gon look like
I bet u get bullied all the time...don't lie dude
Sick n tired of ppl calling u whack? Don't worry, ur title already does it for u
Keep on losing...u might just win some day
U claime to Erase MC's..? Might consider doing it the other way
Ur like Johnny Bravo..always hitting up hoes, but never getting one
Don't u get it? Like i said, u might consider hitting the other sex, son
Dream/Reality are 2 different things, let me explain shit
Ur dreams are becoming FL champ..while reality keeps u from getting it

[#PrimeTime]

Kinda sloppy all around here, Bos impressed me in this one, that closer was FIRE! damn bos is gettin alot better.

BOSNIAN wtf is that,a foreigner, no wonder u suck at rap,
BOS dnt understand, like an animal cattle named himself after that,
makes no sense

This is a game of chess your move, accepted my challenge fucked up so soon,
Checkmate you loose boo hoo, now run in fear like shag and scooby doo,
terrible

Here take the mic too, grab the chord and CHOKE until u resemble neptune,
Choking sound familiar my dude, used your OM strongly against you,
ur 1st good bar.

open your Mouth,but only for men to cum out, your vocal chords vibrate making all kinds of gay sounds,
Look at the hill where BOS is roaming around, he's no king of the hill lyrically, I'll finish this clown,
no, too stretched n it doesnt connect.

Like nick cannon bro am wildin out, crack a laugh now spit my pee out, #1 I rank
Watch me chew and spit him back to his land/now he thru stitched prick wnt try ta Come-Back,
doesnt rhyme...

vs.

U suck hard wit' text...imagine this fag on a mic
It's like u study the Maya, cuz ur avy exactly predicted how ur faith's gon look like
2nd line a lil too wordy, a bit stretched, but the punch landed

I bet u get bullied all the time...don't lie dude
Sick n tired of ppl calling u whack? Don't worry, ur title already does it for u
kinda simple

Keep on losing...u might just win some day
U claime to Erase MC's..? Might consider doing it the other way
ok

Ur like Johnny Bravo..always hitting up hoes, but never getting one
Don't u get it? Like i said, u might consider hitting the other sex, son
concept was worded kinda weird, but it wasn't bad, dece punch

Dream/Reality are 2 different things, let me explain shit
Ur dreams are becoming FL champ..while reality keeps u from getting it
^LOTB.

Ripst had that choke on ur OM bar which was sickk, but Bos's Closer was the LOTB. It came down to Ripstas Choke on ur OM vs. Bos's opener/closer, but like i said, his closer won the battle. keep battling.

v - bos

[Joe Boston]

ripsta

BOSNIAN wtf is that,a foreigner, no wonder u suck at rap,
BOS dnt understand, like an animal cattle named himself after that,
should of came with a better finisher here setup was there for the personal hit man

This is a game of chess your move, accepted my challenge fucked up so soon,
Checkmate you loose boo hoo, now run in fear like shag and scooby doo,
lol sorry no man very weak

Here take the mic too, grab the chord and CHOKE until u resemble neptune,
Choking sound familiar my dude, used your OM strongly against you,
ok this was nice u got him with the personal here setup was nice and the reference on the finisher was there good job

open your Mouth,but only for men to cum out, your vocal chords vibrate making all kinds of gay sounds,
Look at the hill where BOS is roaming around, he's no king of the hill lyrically, I'll finish this clown,
these concepts are relevant at all first in the setup ur talking about him being gay then in the 2nd line ut talking about him being no king of the hill better off if u made this bar a gay punch

Like nick cannon bro am wildin out, crack a laugh now spit my pee out, #1 I rank
Watch me chew and spit him back to his land/now he thru stitched prick wnt try ta Come-Back,
this wording was really messed up

BOS

U suck hard wit' text...imagine this fag on a mic
It's like u study the Maya, cuz ur avy exactly predicted how ur faith's gon look like
this was a good reference here just shorten up that 2nd line

I bet u get bullied all the time...don't lie dude
Sick n tired of ppl calling u whack? Don't worry, ur title already does it for u
this was kinda basic to me nuthing really creative stood out didnt hit hard no hate


Keep on losing...u might just win some day
U claime to Erase MC's..? Might consider doing it the other way
this was a nice concept man had to read it a few times but then got the wording of it and concept good shit

Ur like Johnny Bravo..always hitting up hoes, but never getting one
Don't u get it? Like i said, u might consider hitting the other sex, son
didnt really like the setup man

Dream/Reality are 2 different things, let me explain shit
Ur dreams are becoming FL champ..while reality keeps u from getting it
this was cool pretty direct

Well ripsta no hate but not a good battle for you ur concepts were all over the place man i can agree that OM line was nice as shit if u kept ur whole verse on the personal approach and came with concepts like that u woulda one. Bos definitely an improvement becoming better with the concepts n hits. ur opener and closer was cool and i liked the erased mc's concept.

V/Bos
overall just had better punches to me

[Mr. Wack]

nothing

vs

U suck hard wit' text...imagine this fag on a mic
It's like u study the Maya, cuz ur avy exactly predicted how ur faith's gon look like

^LOL @ that line, when i read it i didnt know what his avy was, so i scrolled up the page and started cracking up. For that i quote you sir

Dream/Reality are 2 different things, let me explain shit
Ur dreams are becoming FL champ..while reality keeps u from getting it

ripsta your shit wasnt really what i thought it was going to be. you came with some OK concepts at best, but no punches at all. definitely off on the wording, but if you work on it youll get better. try to come more direct man. and bos i can tell you can come harder, you had some ok concepts worded em nice. Good punches ya know. opener made me laugh

v/ - bos

[Fatal.]

Ripsta - very elementary verse...seemed very weak and simple. no creativeness, cleverness, or strength in your lines. weak verse overall

Bos - meh verse, but you still got this IMO, you had better concepts and delivery. had better wording and just overall a more polished verse.

v/Bos for a better verse.

[Letterman]

BOSNIAN wtf is that,a foreigner, no wonder u suck at rap,
BOS dnt understand, like an animal cattle named himself after that,
No...

This is a game of chess your move, accepted my challenge fucked up so soon,
Checkmate you loose boo hoo, now run in fear like shag and scooby doo,
Wow! No...

Here take the mic too, grab the chord and CHOKE until u resemble neptune,
Choking sound familiar my dude, used your OM strongly against you,
Nah...

open your Mouth,but only for men to cum out, your vocal chords vibrate making all kinds of gay sounds,
Look at the hill where BOS is roaming around, he's no king of the hill lyrically, I'll finish this clown,
No!

Like nick cannon bro am wildin out, crack a laugh now spit my pee out, #1 I rank
Watch me chew and spit him back to his land/now he thru stitched prick wnt try ta Come-Back,
No No No!

vs

U suck hard wit' text...imagine this fag on a mic
It's like u study the Maya, cuz ur avy exactly predicted how ur faith's gon look like
Miss...BIG wording issues in this one! Decent concept thought, just not executed properly.

I bet u get bullied all the time...don't lie dude
Sick n tired of ppl calling u whack? Don't worry, ur title already does it for u
Nah...

Keep on losing...u might just win some day
U claime to Erase MC's..? Might consider doing it the other way
Nah...

Ur like Johnny Bravo..always hitting up hoes, but never getting one
Don't u get it? Like i said, u might consider hitting the other sex, son
Wack...

Dream/Reality are 2 different things, let me explain shit
Ur dreams are becoming FL champ..while reality keeps u from getting it
Ok...

One sided battle...Rip didnt have anything to connect.

v/Bos

[Knux]

bos no links no win holla