Alphabet vs Miracle VOTE NOW

[Knux]

FL HW CHAMPIONSHIP
10-20 Lines
Check Ins Due Wednesday Nov. 30th 11:59 EST
Verses Due Friday Dec. 2nd 11:59 EST
Voting Ends Sunday Dec. 4th 11:59 EST
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[miracle]

going 20

[Alphabet]

we just battled dude & i have 4 other battles i need to write for this wk.

i'm only able to go 10.

[Alphabet]

sent 14 to knux.

[miracle]

Alphabet aka Hank McCoy huh?

this biter ain't winning this time.. everyone'll watch me waste'em
now i know why u had highlight punches in our battle
.....................cuz that's what u did before you copied n paste them
im high in the rankings..while ur at the bottom cuz u blow bro
his skill level is the same as his love life, it remains SOLO
ill kill this joker...leave you lit up faster then a smoker
cuz one body hit'll make bet fold like a bad hand in poker
ill murder u w/ a quick key. duck tape ur corpse then dump it
have the animals circle-in your body like the center of ur stomach
my fast hooks are landing visicously ...ur blood? im spilling it yo
leaving u 'diss Abel, on the ground' w/o Cain talking shit after killing his bro
you'll get whacked jack..punches are killing this slob
when i take al's sole from him faster then bundy losing his job
u read my lyrics n get happy i got him thanking me probably
fuck the movie... the doctors will have to cast a way up hanks body

[Alphabet]

i just 5-0'd u w/ no effort so theres no doubt ur trash/basic.
i won't even throw a punch;thnx for the EASY points & belt u whack faggot.
so quit typing u noob what u write isn't exciting u goof.
the ONLY time u'd find ur bars in quotes is if HE was writing for you.
n u'd have better luck no showing faggot ur punches NEVER land.
so if you don't quit while ur ahead..i'll cut urs off & send it to ya fam.
everythin u've wrote is played u deserve no votes or praise.
if ur EVER in the lime light it's after i leave u slaughtered in an open grave.
ur played as fuck if u say ur dope anyone whose fresh will doubt.
the HUGE whole in ur talent could rival ur girls pussy after i stretch it out.
but u don't like vagina u lame faggot this we can trust & dude.
if u ever went on a pussy Quest..would prolly get mad and break up with you.
& ur crews TRASH.no ones givin these herbs props ur dying n sonned.
but it IS fitting ur in the nightmares cuz EVERY verse u drop reminds me of one.

[Liquidity]

this biter ain't winning this time.. everyone'll watch me waste'em
now i know why u had highlight punches in our battle
.....................cuz that's what u did before you copied n paste them
This was ight, kind of weak for a biting punch to be honest
im high in the rankings..while ur at the bottom cuz u blow bro
his skill level is the same as his love life, it remains SOLO
so low/solo got it, kind of cool
ill kill this joker...leave you lit up faster then a smoker
cuz one body hit'll make bet fold like a bad hand in poker
meh, played
ill murder u w/ a quick key. duck tape ur corpse then dump it
have the animals circle-in your body like the center of ur stomach
eh, decent
my fast hooks are landing visicously ...ur blood? im spilling it yo
leaving u 'diss Abel, on the ground' w/o Cain talking shit after killing his bro
forced imo
you'll get whacked jack..punches are killing this slob
when i take al's sole from him faster then bundy losing his job
seen it done
u read my lyrics n get happy i got him thanking me probably
fuck the movie... the doctors will have to cast a way up hanks body
eh...

vs

i just 5-0'd u w/ no effort so theres no doubt ur trash/basic.
i won't even throw a punch;thnx for the EASY points & belt u whack faggot.
I dont know how you pronounce thse, but to most people that isnt going to rhyme
so quit typing u noob what u write isn't exciting u goof.
the ONLY time u'd find ur bars in quotes is if HE was writing for you.
ight
n u'd have better luck no showing faggot ur punches NEVER land.
so if you don't quit while ur ahead..i'll cut urs off & send it to ya fam.
no sting
everythin u've wrote is played u deserve no votes or praise.
if ur EVER in the lime light it's after i leave u slaughtered in an open grave.
got it, havent seen that flipped like that... cool
ur played as fuck if u say ur dope anyone whose fresh will doubt.
the HUGE whole in ur talent could rival ur girls pussy after i stretch it out.
nah
but u don't like vagina u lame faggot this we can trust & dude.
if u ever went on a pussy Quest..would prolly get mad and break up with you.
rofl
& ur crews TRASH.no ones givin these herbs props ur dying n sonned.
but it IS fitting ur in the nightmares cuz EVERY verse u drop reminds me of one.
played

Idk here. Expected better from both, although I do know Alph's had 2 champ matches and a contenders match due in a 3 day span so im sure this was on the bottom of his list. I dont know what the fuck Miracle just did Ive seen him come 10 x better then that, I wasnt feeling anything from his verse. Alph had 2 cool punches that I liked and that was basically it from the battle but it was enough to walk away with the victory in my opinion.

[Barz.]

Miracle
this biter ain't winning this time.. everyone'll watch me waste'em
now i know why u had highlight punches in our battle
.....................cuz that's what u did before you copied n paste them
the concepts played Ive seen it done way better
im high in the rankings..while ur at the bottom cuz u blow bro
his skill level is the same as his love life, it remains SOLO
hella played,
ill kill this joker...leave you lit up faster then a smoker
cuz one body hit'll make bet fold like a bad hand in poker
nah played
ill murder u w/ a quick key. duck tape ur corpse then dump it
have the animals circle-in your body like the center of ur stomach
wording is off,andnot a good punch
my fast hooks are landing visicously ...ur blood? im spilling it yo
leaving u 'diss Abel, on the ground' w/o Cain talking shit after killing his bro
no man forced w/p too
you'll get whacked jack..punches are killing this slob
when i take al's sole from him faster then bundy losing his job
ok,finally
u read my lyrics n get happy i got him thanking me probably
fuck the movie... the doctors will have to cast a way up hanks body
no




Alpha
i just 5-0'd u w/ no effort so theres no doubt ur trash/basic.
i won't even throw a punch;thnx for the EASY points & belt u whack faggot.
nah man
so quit typing u noob what u write isn't exciting u goof.
the ONLY time u'd find ur bars in quotes is if HE was writing for you.
ok im sure this is played tho Ive never seen it
n u'd have better luck no showing faggot ur punches NEVER land.
so if you don't quit while ur ahead..i'll cut urs off & send it to ya fam.
wordings off it couldve been nice,but wording made it just ok
everythin u've wrote is played u deserve no votes or praise.
if ur EVER in the lime light it's after i leave u slaughtered in an open grave
lol @ how true that setup was anyways didnt get the comparison on this one
sorry man.
ur played as fuck if u say ur dope anyone whose fresh will doubt.
the HUGE whole in ur talent could rival ur girls pussy after i stretch it out.
LOL,eh
but u don't like vagina u lame faggot this we can trust & dude.
if u ever went on a pussy Quest..would prolly get mad and break up with you.
wording is off,but this is decentish
& ur crews TRASH.no ones givin these herbs props ur dying n sonned.
but it IS fitting ur in the nightmares cuz EVERY verse u drop reminds me of one.
im sure this is played on them so no




I expected way more than this for a champ match.Miracle ya verse was littered w/ played shit and only one ok line at best and thats really bad for a champ verse.Come back stronger next time.Alpha when I seen ya opener I was like wtf then you pick up ya verse wasnt consistant but it had enough quotes to get the job done.Ok I just want to say I cant believe this is whats at the top of the food chain. Shape up seriously or not find yourselves in this position for very long.


Vote Alpha

[Fatal.]

this biter ain't winning this time.. everyone'll watch me waste'em
now i know why u had highlight punches in our battle
.....................cuz that's what u did before you copied n paste them
played, but alright
im high in the rankings..while ur at the bottom cuz u blow bro
his skill level is the same as his love life, it remains SOLO
decent word play..
ill kill this joker...leave you lit up faster then a smoker
cuz one body hit'll make bet fold like a bad hand in poker
played
ill murder u w/ a quick key. duck tape ur corpse then dump it
have the animals circle-in your body like the center of ur stomach
nah not feelin
my fast hooks are landing visicously ...ur blood? im spilling it yo
leaving u 'diss Abel, on the ground' w/o Cain talking shit after killing his bro
weak
you'll get whacked jack..punches are killing this slob
when i take al's sole from him faster then bundy losing his job
ok
u read my lyrics n get happy i got him thanking me probably
fuck the movie... the doctors will have to cast a way up hanks body
mehh closer

vs

i just 5-0'd u w/ no effort so theres no doubt ur trash/basic.
i won't even throw a punch;thnx for the EASY points & belt u whack faggot.
nah statementish
so quit typing u noob what u write isn't exciting u goof.
the ONLY time u'd find ur bars in quotes is if HE was writing for you.
Quote lines are getting played, i've used a few
n u'd have better luck no showing faggot ur punches NEVER land.
so if you don't quit while ur ahead..i'll cut urs off & send it to ya fam.
alright, wording was off.
everythin u've wrote is played u deserve no votes or praise.
if ur EVER in the lime light it's after i leave u slaughtered in an open grave.
mehh could have done more with it
ur played as fuck if u say ur dope anyone whose fresh will doubt.
the HUGE whole in ur talent could rival ur girls pussy after i stretch it out.
ok
but u don't like vagina u lame faggot this we can trust & dude.
if u ever went on a pussy Quest..would prolly get mad and break up with you.
not bad
& ur crews TRASH.no ones givin these herbs props ur dying n sonned.
but it IS fitting ur in the nightmares cuz EVERY verse u drop reminds me of one.
played

this battle had a lot of played/weak lines. i was expecting a better battle cuz i know how good you guys can drop. but overall i got Alpha taking this with slightly better punches/consistancy.

v/Alph

[WhatsHisFace]

Miracle

this biter ain't winning this time.. everyone'll watch me waste'em
now i know why u had highlight punches in our battle
.....................cuz that's what u did before you copied n paste them
could have been worded better, but still a good punch
im high in the rankings..while ur at the bottom cuz u blow bro
his skill level is the same as his love life, it remains SOLO
haha, good punch
ill kill this joker...leave you lit up faster then a smoker
cuz one body hit'll make bet fold like a bad hand in poker
played, not that of a bad punch. Decent at best.
ill murder u w/ a quick key. duck tape ur corpse then dump it
have the animals circle-in your body like the center of ur stomach
no, "animals cricle like the center of a stomach" I don't understand that. So no damage.
my fast hooks are landing visicously ...ur blood? im spilling it yo
leaving u 'diss Abel, on the ground' w/o Cain talking shit after killing his bro
creative, but not hard hitting. Still, decent punch.
you'll get whacked jack..punches are killing this slob
when i take al's sole from him faster then bundy losing his job
nope
u read my lyrics n get happy i got him thanking me probably
fuck the movie... the doctors will have to cast a way up hanks body
weak closer

vs.

Alphabet

i just 5-0'd u w/ no effort so theres no doubt ur trash/basic.
i won't even throw a punch;thnx for the EASY points & belt u whack faggot.
no, didnt even rhyme
so quit typing u noob what u write isn't exciting u goof.
the ONLY time u'd find ur bars in quotes is if HE was writing for you.
no, those quote punches are lame. No damage.
n u'd have better luck no showing faggot ur punches NEVER land.
so if you don't quit while ur ahead..i'll cut urs off & send it to ya fam.
decent punch. played to say the least.
everythin u've wrote is played u deserve no votes or praise.
if ur EVER in the lime light it's after i leave u slaughtered in an open grave.
good punch, did damage.
ur played as fuck if u say ur dope anyone whose fresh will doubt.
the HUGE whole in ur talent could rival ur girls pussy after i stretch it out.
I think you meant hole. ehhh. Alright punch.
but u don't like vagina u lame faggot this we can trust & dude.
if u ever went on a pussy Quest..would prolly get mad and break up with you.
connects with the punch above, dealing damage. O.K. punch
& ur crews TRASH.no ones givin these herbs props ur dying n sonned.
but it IS fitting ur in the nightmares cuz EVERY verse u drop reminds me of one.
sonned? punch was good though.

V - Gotta go with Miracle in this one.
Alpha had 3 alright punches. Miracle had better punches in the beginning, and some decent punches, but 2 weak bars at the end. Miracle delt more damage then Alpha, winning my vote.

[Bongkers]

Honestly nothing from miracle impressed me here.. no hate man you just came too played or your wording was way off.

Vs.

everythin u've wrote is played u deserve no votes or praise.
if ur EVER in the lime light it's after i leave u slaughtered in an open grave.
but u don't like vagina u lame faggot this we can trust & dude.
if u ever went on a pussy Quest..would prolly get mad and break up with you.


Pretty weak champ match tbh.. but I got alph taking it comfortably.

V- AB

[Mr. Wack]

Alright guys, I have not read shit yet but here we go;


this biter ain't winning this time.. everyone'll watch me waste'em
now i know why u had highlight punches in our battle
.....................cuz that's what u did before you copied n paste them

This was an okay punch. I see the concept, but I felt like you could have worded it better. Decent

im high in the rankings..while ur at the bottom cuz u blow bro
his skill level is the same as his love life, it remains SOLO

This was a very lame concept, and an even more poor attempt. I wasn't feeling this one much, work on the wording. So na

ill kill this joker...leave you lit up faster then a smoker
cuz one body hit'll make bet fold like a bad hand in poker

I actually kind of liked this one, it hit alright. A pretty creative concept in my eyes, but the wording was just a little eh so. Not a bad punch

ill murder u w/ a quick key. duck tape ur corpse then dump it
have the animals circle-in your body like the center of ur stomach

I see your concept, and it was some nice wordplay, but not a punch.. Should've worded it to be more direct. No punch

my fast hooks are landing visicously ...ur blood? im spilling it yo
leaving u 'diss Abel, on the ground' w/o Cain talking shit after killing his bro

This line was kind of confusing, you butchered the wording. I see the concept, pretty creative, but executed poorly. No punch

you'll get whacked jack..punches are killing this slob
when i take al's sole from him faster then bundy losing his job

This made me laugh a little bit, your wording was okay but the concept was nice. Decent punch

u read my lyrics n get happy i got him thanking me probably
fuck the movie... the doctors will have to cast a way up hanks body

This one was some forced wordplay to be honest, and the concept was kind of lame. I didn't really like it. No punch

MIRACLE - Dude your verse was decent. I thought it could have been better. You came with some alright concepts, and maybe one or two that really stood out.. But the wording fucked up the punch. Some of your wordplay was pretty cool but the line wasn't very direct therefore it didn't hit Alpha like it should have. I feel like if you work on wording your punches better then the rest will follow and you'll be able to make some dope as battle verses. Overall not bad though, good verse. Felt like you landed a few.

Vs.

i just 5-0'd u w/ no effort so theres no doubt ur trash/basic.
i won't even throw a punch;thnx for the EASY points & belt u whack faggot.

This made me laugh. There was nothing real special, no dope concept or anything, but it was a funny line. so okay.

so quit typing u noob what u write isn't exciting u goof.
the ONLY time u'd find ur bars in quotes is if HE was writing for you.

LOL, this was nice. Maybe played a little? I dont know, I have not seen this line yet. Nice wordplay, nice wording. Good punch

n u'd have better luck no showing faggot ur punches NEVER land.
so if you don't quit while ur ahead..i'll cut urs off & send it to ya fam.

Ohhh this was eh. It was a bit forced, I thought forsure it was going to hit hard cause I saw it coming, but the wording was a bit off. Eh punch

everythin u've wrote is played u deserve no votes or praise.
if ur EVER in the lime light it's after i leave u slaughtered in an open grave.

Lol this was a little like self glory right? Or like a statement almost, but it was a cool flip and not worded bad. Okay line

ur played as fuck if u say ur dope anyone whose fresh will doubt.
the HUGE whole in ur talent could rival ur girls pussy after i stretch it out.

This was a cool concept, the wording could have been better, cause I had to read it twice lol, but a good jab man. Nice punch

but u don't like vagina u lame faggot this we can trust & dude.
if u ever went on a pussy Quest..would prolly get mad and break up with you.

I think I know where you got this concept from.. It wasn't bad but the wording was off so I say no punch, and if so, it was eh

& ur crews TRASH.no ones givin these herbs props ur dying n sonned.
but it IS fitting ur in the nightmares cuz EVERY verse u drop reminds me of one.

Played concept I think but a nice flip if anything. It was some cool wordplay too. Okay punch

ALPHABET - Man I felt like you came pretty nice in here. I've read shit where you have dropped hard, but your pretty consistant man, I'm not going to lie. You had some fresh concepts in here, and they managed to hit hard, maybe 1 or 2. They would have hit even harder if your brushed up on the wording a bit. I felt like you came pretty creative, and also there were some played concepts but you flipped them well so it ended up meshing nicely. Overall not a bad drop at all man, keep it up. I'ma keep reading your shit


OVERALL- I felt like this battle wasn't bad at all. Miracle had some chances to really do some damage, but the wording threw some things off. Miracle had some nice concepts on a few lines but the punch did not hit very hard because of the execution, not a bad verse by him though. I felt like Alphabet came nice, he had some wit in his verse, and managed to word it pretty well. Some bars I felt like he could of touched up a bit and executed better, but I say he did enough to cop the win... And that's all that matter. Your both good writers, I say Alpha is better in this one though.

V/ - Alphabet

[KnowP]

this biter ain't winning this time.. everyone'll watch me waste'em
now i know why u had highlight punches in our battle
you'll get whacked jack..punches are killing this slob
when i take al's sole from him faster then bundy losing his job


vs

& ur crews TRASH.no ones givin these herbs props ur dying n sonned.
but it IS fitting ur in the nightmares cuz EVERY verse u drop reminds me of one.



pretty weak champ match. nothing really witty from either side that was original. lots of used and played bars and wording didnt help either. For the most part, i had to go back and find quotables. THought id get alot more out of Mirabcle but I can tell he rushed his verse and didnt put much effort into it. Seen way better from Alpha too. Not his best showing . If he woulda brought his A-game, he coulda took this easy imo.

v. mir

[Knux]

Alphabet wins, congrats.. do me a favor Al post this in the ranks thread so i can remember to record it


i'll get u ur medal tomorow, and look for the new match tomorow as well